Tides of Fate

[Red Fox]

This was soemthign I randomly started one day ages ago and after much hesitation Im wondering what people think about it.
I sort of stopped writing it due to lack of interest, but I still like the world I set up so I based a RP on it, which died as I think it were too complex in rules and shit.

But yes, due to charater limits and shit, Ill just link to my GoogleDocks.

Please give me feedback on it, even if you just read one chapter.

-Chapter 1 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fuA1tR5U87OsuU0dPSVzFLnH0M2I-DAbsGrWy_usg-A/edit?hl=en&pli=1#)
-Chapter 2 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VS7TTwugcBPGYU25t4PCyst7BjBFq3jEi2guMIchXxI/edit?hl=en#)
-Chapter 3 - The feeling (https://docs.google.com/document/d/17m_TNvHddpAbETVV1VlZ4oYonSs8zN-heDVl9o58pcc/edit?hl=en#)
-Chapter 4 - 'items' of importance (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ni2XfZO9Nf-O4GLrkRlorxMotUE_FlK86Vqejf-DMdA/edit?hl=en#)
-Chapter 5 - Death is overrated (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bclZRjFYSO_gc6F628yMEIE3rE7RDiGCkmiQRDWdOP4/edit?hl=en#)
-Chapter 6 - Death is a pain (https://docs.google.com/document/d/11tji8cXxRRpmVCJIYN3Js2_RSSXyZiq1eaYzmU8Lxa8/edit?hl=en#)
-Chapter 7 - It roars like the Dragon (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1COsj-h2Qh36fWrCwooUX3xx9YgTLE8QiSPMA0sFOcdU/edit?hl=en#)