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Mysteria
10-28-2009, 02:44 AM
She knows the complexities
and embraces this duality

the need for balance
between mind and spirit;

body and soul...

to feel complete
and be in control

to have all inner
inhibitions released
a soul contending

in eternal quest of peace....

She listens to my voice
and hears my plea;

I am not her
she is not me

but still,
she knows me......

She is there

somewhere

yet remains
beyond my gaze
and she too,
has run this race
through this maze

of life.

I’ve shared her pain
along with her fears
her heart in unison beating
I hear


I have been her
and she
has been me…

We have stood wishing upon
the very same star

wanting, and wondering
of places afar

remembering journeys
through the noir of night ,
recalling paths taken

beseeching the light

bringing us
to where we now are

She has fought those battles,
and has healed the same scars

we are individual, yet similar
held in the common bond
of striving, and surviving

we are strong

I am her
and she is me.........

a woman understanding

unequivocally....

© 2006 (an old poem, comments are welcomed.)

Security of Mem
10-28-2009, 02:53 AM
I love this poem. Much better then what I can do. You're a splendid writer. I'm really enjoying this poem. Are you published? I can imagine you getting published.

Mysteria
10-28-2009, 02:58 AM
Thank you very much. ~peace~

I've not had my own book published yet, but I've had a few items published in a few different poetry anthologys. I've been doing poetry for a long time, but haven't written anything new in ages ...and then I found role-playing and gained a new outlet for my creative writing ventures. LOL.

Anne Bonny
10-28-2009, 03:25 AM
Beautiful as always, Mysti! Somehow you always find a way to awaken such feelings within me, no matter what I'm feeling the second before I read your work. If that makes sense...

Anyways... Loved it!

Mysteria
10-28-2009, 03:39 AM
Maybe this would have been more appropriate to have posted this in the ladies lounge, but I thought nah, better to post it here.

And you make perfect sense....and any of the sistahs would understand....;)

Mockingjay
12-05-2009, 12:19 AM
Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. That's all I can say. WOW.

You know, I'm starting to think you're posting these awesome poems to make me jealous. Fine Mysteria, just rub in the fact that you're a freaking amazing poet. Just rub it in. xD

Mysteria
12-05-2009, 12:43 AM
You bless me with your comments, truly, that made me smile.

Each writer is so special in their own way and I learn each day from every single one of them. Poetry breaths not within me anymore, that is why I am SO glad that I have been introduced to rp'ing. It really helps me to continue writing.

Thank you!!

Mockingjay
12-05-2009, 01:11 AM
Yeah... well I'm still jealous. xD