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    Default {OOC; RECR/PG-13} Majestic Soldiers: The Birth of a Holy Apocalypse

    Rated PG-13 for mild violence and suggestive language. May contain some violence not suitable for children under 13. Viewer discretion is advised.

    Spoiler: Want it sweet and short? 


    FULL PLOT

    In the world where queens, kings, and fools were the majority of all success, there were many supernatural beings up in the Kingdom of Gabriel. Up high, in the Heavens, many of its winged species play around in the clouds and sometimes sit and watch the clear sky. Many spectacular monsters, demons, and humans made the kingdom a spectacular place to live. Even some of the most forbidden creatures were prowling around the premises.

    During the time of the 17th century, a philosopher named Henry Yulk came to stay. Many faeries were afraid of him. Every other human thought he was just a man trying to do better to the world. When he did, he began to use elongated speeches to persuade one to go with God.

    When preaching in the realm of Makai (a place that's underground the Kingdom), he was ridiculed by demons for being good. Distraught, he begged for assistance from a deity. He didn't care it was God or someone else. Suddenly, the Hell Raven, Rhapsody, came and offered him assistance. She told him to act evil and grip on to Gabriel's wings. After this encounter, he killed himself, refusing to cut ties with the Lord. He knew there was no way to escape from Evil, and he consequently went to Hell.

    Rhapsody returned with blood-red attire and a fiery Staff for him to wear. She smirked, putting the crown atop his head. By bestowing these items to the wretched preacher, she forced him to rule. Henry still refuted these item and wished to be with God. Angered at this request, she turned him into a youkai and kicked him out of Hell. Little did Rhapsody know, she was going with him.

    When they both entered the land, Henry was back alive and greeted his followers. All of the land was worried about him. Rhapsody's plan didn't work. Then, she found a Shepard named Herald Vangire. Herald was rather reluctant to evil. Promising the man more sheep, Herald readily accepted the crown and attire. As soon as he wore the Cloak of Wrath, he was suddenly brainwashed. Rhapsody smiled, making sure that it worked.

    Though he was young, he suddenly took control of Hell. Herald then demanded a destruction of the kingdom. Rhapsody then grew self-conscious. She has never hurt anything like that, nor would she try to touch the Kingdom. She just wished to be isolated from the world. The town was sacred, even to Rhapsody.

    Scared, she tried to escape from Makai. Rhapsody then broke down, wondering what she did. She knew it was stupid of her to grant a human godly powers. Suddenly, a storm tried to hit all of the Kingdom. By 1657, the Kingdom was now garbage. Thanks to Herald's work, it was all a fiery mess. She really tried to stop him from destroying Makai. Seeing that all the kingdom was tortured, the humans that used to live there died or took shelter somewhere far away from the kingdom.

    It has been at least two years since this incident happened. Now, only 14 people are left in the Kingdom. They must fight supernatural beings, make friends, and renew the Kingdom of Gabriel. Though this may sound easy, Fighting Lord Herald in Makai will consist of dangerous tasks that may result in unpremeditated death.








    Spoiler: More valuable details about Gabriel (and other Kingdoms)! 


    Spoiler: CURRENCIES FOR ALL (AVAILABLE) KINGDOMS! 


    Spoiler: Weaponry page (those you can find in the wild or at shop) 


    RULES

    NO Godmodding! I Don't care if you're an immortal, NO godmodding! That's considered cheating, and you may be kicked out of the game if repeated offenses happen.

    No disrespect or unnecessary drama! No time is allotted for any of that!

    Always stick to your character! Don't go and change into someone else (unless controlling more than one person.)

    I don't want to see laziness. I would like to see AT LEAST a paragraph in your in-character posts. A paragraph is AT LEAST 5-6 Paragraphs long or above. I also wish for people to be a bit more literate. I'm tired of seeing cell phone texts in role play. In their History, You must have at LEAST two paragraphs. I'm sorry if you hate writing, but the more you do, the better you'll get.

    Give Undivided respect towards others! If controlling a Captain, PLEASE give your team respect and treat them the way that's acceptable--the way everyone SHOULD treat you! If you are a team member, Follow the leader's instructions at all times. If you have any suggestions to what the team should do, don't hold your question unless during fights! Tell!

    If you think a leader is treating you unfairly, don't whine because they told you something you don't wish to do. However, if a leader is acting elitist (saying that they're all-powerful, acting like they are God, etc.) or sticking to their own plans, don't be afraid to report. If you're the one who is acting elitist and you're truly not, this will keep the game lagging. This down-grades everyone, and even yourself. This may result in an automatic removal from the game.

    As a leader, being redundant to your title is UNNECESSARY. We KNOW that you're the leader, so don't repeatedly say that when around a problem. When your team decided to do something that could be safer than what your plans suggest, always ask them what it is. As a team leader, you must agree to what others wish to do. If safer than your plans, accept it. If not, then stick to your plans or suggest an alternative if unsafe. Nobody wants a bossy pants in the group. Don't scream about your decision if it's unsafe! Agree with it and go on! Though it's rather redundant, it is important enough to be said twice. Yelling "I'm the leader!" 1,000 times is NOT the way a team should go. Imagine being in the crocodile pits. If you have a disagreement, you have to compromise quickly!

    Before participating, please take time to read ALL the info to know what's in there and what's not. For example, a Solid Sword can't be in Kingdom 4. Making such weapon appear may result in me tweaking it to make it true or I'll ask you to change the item you've found. If it's not changed in a timely manner, you may be asked to delete your post or edit it out.

    I do apologize that I don't have many of the details done. I will find some time and eventually add to the info already placed out. Until then, if I start this, you shouldn't add any additional weapons/currency/places without my approval.

    If you can, please refrain from killing other team-mates. It's too violent, and I believe that everyone should help each other. If someone makes a decision to do without the Casbas Elixir altogether, accept it. The one who gives up the Casbas Elixir may not use it at all. If they're immortal, there's truly no need to use it.

    If someone loses a limb, help them out. Pour the Healing Elixir (Curate) or have them drink to regenerate a limb. If they're happened to be squished to death and a mortal, it would be too dangerous. Unfortunately, you can't administer anything to them for they're too mortally wounded. If your character happens to get in a severe fatality (Burned to death, melted, evaporated, squished, etc.), then you must have another character ready. The only good part of dying heroes: More Casbas elixir for everyone. If you don't have any characters but wish to participate, please PM me!

    If you're planning to be absent for an extended period of time, PM me first before you leave. If you're absent for three months or more, I may give your character to someone else if you still have Casbas Elixir or if none, we can kill your character.

    If someone dies and they're out of the elixir or decided to give it up, the elixir may be used as extras for people who want it. The deceased must be buried properly in an adequate area. Note that if your character loses revival privileges due to lack of Elixir or gave it up, this increases their chance of dying. If your character dies all the way, you are not allowed to use the same character. You have the option of making another character or not participating at all or until the end of that Kingdom's story. They can also be found somewhere within a kingdom and the team can get you to go along.

    There are certain areas, parties, or places of kingdoms a certain species may not be permitted to enter. Don't go if your kind is on the Ban List. However, you MUST be on the lookout for anything suspicious. If they scream or if you hear something out-of-the ordinary, make your move! Get them out of there, and go! Fight the opposing force if necessary to escape. The bad thing about this is that you may be caught while doing your job.

    There are a couple instances where you or someone else is being held captive. The best thing for you to do is to wait or go and grab them if possible. Never wait until the last minute!

    No OOC drama flooding in the comments. Regardless if you're 9 or 25, you must have a sense of maturity. We can't have people screaming about their character being killed. It happens for a reason.

    Have fun, and try not to miss out on the fun!


    Spoiler: All the Possible Kingdoms To Explore! 


    ELIXIRS
    Casbas (Health; revives or increases energy and stamina for a weak person; automatically mends broken bones; can only have three at a time; if giving it up, you may not have permission to use it at all)
    Curate (Heal; heal the person of a decapitated limb or a life-threatening injury)
    Clayba (Harm; injures or kills the drinker)
    Tragides (Hush; silences the person and calms them down)

    Spoiler: Character Sheet (guide included) 


    I know it's a bit long, but enjoy while you can!
    Last edited by Yuuka; 12-13-2012 at 05:12 PM. Reason: Adding a couple literacy rules.

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    Damn, it's so ... detailed and ... complex. I actually think you should pitch video game ideas to companies. As for an RP like this, make rulebooks and game sets.

    As for it being an online forum RP, I don't think it'll work.

    Awesome idea, by the way, but too awesome for the internet.
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    so many words. it hurts my brain. i cant believe this, its so long and cool, but i just cant read more than a quarter of it all
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    Aw, come ON! Why not? Who wouldn't want to join? Shiny objects fighting monsters ... who wouldn't want to do that?! All I ask for is members, that's all! You've seen other posts that are long and elongated on the site! Who wouldn't want to join in the fun if it's so awesome? I do apologize if it's long and all, but reading is believing. Rules are rules. If you wish to read it all, take as much of your sweet time as you wish. I'm not making anyone do anything. You guys are quite honest about the length though... Must have gone a bit overboard there... But if you're asking to join, YOU CAN... But the rules MUST be FOLLOWED!!!

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    I agree that it is similar to a video game, but I'll try roleplaying it
    Spoiler: Character 

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    The beauty of roleplaying is that anything will work, even making a video game RP
    I'd love to join, but won't be for a couple of weeks due to real life stuff...
    Elixirs sound like an awesome idea
    Spoiler: look in here :) 

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    Thank you all. I know it sounds like a game (It IS a role playing GAME after all!) Hope you enjoy it! I will always keep this role play open in case someone dies. In return, please take as much time as you wish!

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    Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooong pooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooost!

    Well, anyway, here are my CS!

    Name: Laurana Ter'imer
    Age 1: 18
    Age 2: 529
    DOB: February 29th
    Birthplace: Earth
    Species: Elf
    Appearance:
    Spoiler: Laurana 

    Height: 1,78 meter about 5'9"
    Signature Weapon: (Don't know if you meant that we choose our weapon from the list but because you said that no one else couldn't use it it wouldn't make any sin to list them so I made my own weapon.)
    "Gungir": A lance made of white metal. It's hilt can also be used due of the small blade attached there (see the picture.) She also carries a big shield made of the same metal as Gungir with her. (No sword, yet)
    Occupation: Paladin
    Immortal?: NO
    Desperation Move: "Angelic Power": Laurana prays the god for help and aquires the powers of an angel. She grows white wings, a halo appears above her head and swords of light appear around her. She is then capable of using the swords to attack her enemies with high-speed for about a minute. During the time she is using this power, Laurana is immortal due of the holy power keeping her moving.
    Power: Lauran is capable of enchanting everyone of her weapons to cause more damage to undead or unholy creatures.
    Weaknesses: Unholy powers (a twin-edged sword as she is strong and weak toward unholiness), darkness, love
    Likes: Candy, everything cute, water and forests
    Dislikes: fire, darkness, bugs
    History: Laurana Ter'imer, the elven princess of the forest kingdom of Hiam'dor, a elven kingdom in the western part in a great forest of Tylmer that is located in the south of Gabriel. Laurana lived like the elven princess does, not like the human princesses who are protected and taken fully care of, no she was free to do what she wanted. In exchange she wouldn't, like the tradition says, not decline the first approval of marriage she gets. (Until now there are none.)
    Laurana loved to move in the forest, followed by her best and only friend Sera (the princess cannot have more friends due of the rules) and hunted, explored and fought aginst beasts, demons and whatever they met.
    In age of 273, Laurana decided to become a cleric (she would need to quit it if she gets an approval) and after 100 years, she converted into a paladin, raising in the ranks of the order (Oura's Wings) with steady pace.
    In age of 469 (The paladin order is a elven order), Laurana became the "Pelenor" which is the highest rank that a female paladin could aquire. It is directly the same as "Domium", the high-Paladin of the male which are the second highest in rank just under "Oum-Oura" which means "The Eye of Oura". The Eye is the high-commander of the order that commands the troops to their appointed targets.
    The Order itself is the force that protects the Elven Kingdom among with the Night Sages, an other order who use magic instead of holy powers. The both orders are also supported by the army and together they gather a massive amount of 391.000 soldiers.
    As the Herald attacked, Lauranas squad (considering 100 paladins and clerics) moved to the western border of the forest, to the place where the forest ends. Following her, of course, in shadows, Sera. It was for the paladins forbidden to get support from other clans, orders or squad's without the approval of the High-commander and even if it would be the princess, that order would be given only if the troops were in grave danger.
    Then, in the night as the Herald started the attack, the whole forest was flooded by demons and other creatures. A panic broke out and eve with the great numbers of the elven army they were defeated in only one night...
    As the sun rose, the whole forest was gone, burned down or gotten sucked by the earth. Laurana lied wounded in the broken branches and tree splitters. Her arm was broken and few ribs as well but she could walk. She searched for Sera, only to find her being fatally wounded. She helped her and as a former cleric she could heal her before they could escape into the capitol.
    During the next night, as Laurana was pulling Sera toward the center of the forest, Sera began to make noices. First she thought Sera had regained consciousness but as she saw her she could only gasp;
    Sera's whole body was full of curse marks, they were glowing faintly red and obviously caused pain to her so Laurana tried to undo the curses, without success. The curses were too strong and she knew her dear friend and lover would die so she began to pray and put blessings on Sera. She did it the whole night, not sleeping at all before the sun rose and the curses disappeared.
    She slept for half the day and as she woke up, Sera wasn't there anymore. Laurana searched for her for an hour, finalyy finding her inside a big, destroyed tree. As she saw Sera, she could understand why the young woman had fled;
    She was no woman anymore.
    Laurana was first shocked as she saw what had happened to Sera. She calmed down after Sera had told her that there wouldn't be any problems and that he had accepted what had happened already.
    They now roam the Gabriel in order to find elven refugees.
    More Info:---

    Name: Jera Hum'erel
    Age 1: 17
    Age 2: 263
    DOB: 31th December
    Birthplace: Earth
    Species: Elf
    Appearance:
    Spoiler: Jera 

    The bow is twice as big as that on the picture.
    Height: 1,84 m, 6'1"
    Signature Weapon: "Hianor's Horn", a greatbow almost as tall as Jera himself made of wood and metal. It shoots arrows that are almost as long as his arm and resemble more spears than actual arrows. The quiver holds about 70 arrows.
    Occupation: Shadow Archer
    Immortal?: No
    Desperation Move: "Shadow Jumper": Jera coats himself in shadows and disappears. He then appears from different positions around his enemy in quick pace and fires multiple arrows toward them. lasts for 15 seconds (about 50 arrows)
    Power: "White Mist" Sera summons a mist that blocks the line of sight, making it easier for him to attack or escape. Only elven eyes can see throught the mist.
    Weaknesses: Demonic powers, melee combat
    Likes: Laurana, shadows, magical items and weapons
    Dislikes: water, fish, mermaids, cities
    History: Sera Hum'Erel was the only daughter of a simple family of elves who lived in the Forest kingdom of Hiam'Dor. She lived the simple life of a elven girl, gathering herbs for her mother and hunting with her father or some times playing with her friends. Then, one day as she was in the forest, Sera saved a young elven girl who had been attacked by some Nail-fangs (wolves with spiked horns on their head and tail.). After she had dealt with the Fangs, Sera noticed that the girl looked kind of familiar and the girl revealed she was princess Laurana and she decided to make Sera her friend.
    Of course, Sera was shocked because this meant she couldn't have contact to anyone besides the princess, her parents and the other royal family members. Of course she had no possibilty to decline so she went hrought it and after not so long time she was quiet happy with Laurana.
    The next few hundred years were, Sera couldn't be happier. She could be with Laurana almost all the time and she grew to more than like her as a friend. They did everything together, hunted, played games, practiced archery and other arms as well as some pore practical things like sewing, dancing and even cooking (most soldiers of the royal guard were out of duty after they had eaten their food.). She loved the princess of her more than anything and sometimes wished to be a man...
    Then, as Laurana joined the Paladin order, Sera was smashed down from her purple cloud. She could see Laurana only few times in a month and so Jera began to stay more and more time alone, always following Laurana from distance.
    (See Laurana's bio...)
    During the night as the Herald attacked, Jera was wandering around the arena near the outpost in which Laurana was stationed. Then, in the midnight a strange glow coloured the sky, it was fire. Somewhere in the forest a fire had broken out. Of course, Jera wanted to go and look but she was suprised by a group of demons. She fought against them and even killed some, but there were always more and more of them and in the end they defeated her using their spells.
    Sera couldn't remember anything after waking up and seeing Lauranan besides her. She saw the destroyed forest and ravaged ground. Everywhere were carcasses and corpses, the air smelled like burnt flesh.
    Then Sera looked at her hands and realized they looked strange, by nearer observation she realised she had been turned into a man.
    Her originally blond-brown hair was now raven black and his eyes were orange. His body was skinny and he had become a head taller. Sera was still wearing his clothes, even thought ripped and too small (and female) he decided to get away from Laurana. He didn't wan't her to see him like this.
    He wandered around for few hours and finally ended in a broken tree in which it was dark. The darkness seemed like soothing his mind, lingering the pain and making his head clearer.
    As Laurana found him, he was already gotten used to his new form and accepted the curse he had to take upon him.
    He now travels with Laurana, searching for elven survivors. Sera has also learnt to use his new awaken power of the demonic curses to use them as power for himself (LAurana doesn't like it at all).
    More Info: The more of the powers Sera uses, the more the curses strengthen and corrupt his body, turning him slowly into a demonic bird similiar to a Yata-Garasu.
    Last edited by The Bartender; 06-04-2012 at 05:05 PM.
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    Double post, sorry... *bow*
    Last edited by The Bartender; 06-04-2012 at 05:07 PM.
    Thank you Bia for the amazing Signature and Avatar!

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