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    A world that has been in a state of war for thirty years now knows a fragile semblance of peace. With Aelor’s capital, Eghir, fallen to the enemy; the war has effectively ended. The Republic of Alara’s soldiers, under the command of General Kerrak, roam Eghir’s streets freely. With Aelor’s King Gebrandt in hiding; this situation is sure to remain unchanged for a long time.

    The city, having been under siege for the last four months lies, literally and figuratively, in ruins. Famine is commonplace and many citizens are quick to blame the new regime for their troubles. The resistance is said to be building up their forces, so say the rumours. And religious leaders are at odds as the new rule of law brings with it its own god.

    While General Kerrak tries to maintain order in the city, rumours say the remnants of the old order are regrouping to strike back. This seems like a distant problem. At the moment, the General has more than his hands full with keeping the city standing.
    And what about you? Will you join the Republic and help bring about a new age of peace? Or will you remain dutiful to your old King, and do your best to drive out the invaders? Or will you reap the benefits this moment of Chaos brings? What will you do?

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    This is semi-FFRP. I will allow players to do their own thing while controlling any NPC’s. I will keep all actions in mind to decide what the outcome will be. The Republic may indeed lose control of the city, should your actions cause enough unrest to make this happen. On the other hand, you could inspire an age of peace. So have fun with it.

    Also, even though I am fairly sure I can do this on my own, I could certainly use someone willing to co-GM this thing. I have been reading a lot, and am fairly sure I know how things work. Still, I could use someone to help along.

    I know this is quite ambitious, for someone with my post count, and I hope people won’t be deterred from joining because of it.
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    Could the people who viewed this at the very least tell me what's so wrong with it?

    Bad story, uninteresting, too complex,... etcetera. Maybe it belongs in the mature area?

    All I want is to improve, so just tell me so I can avoid this in the future.
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    in my opinion. it may be too complex. but it has more than enough information on it. perhaps more people are looking for a RP with more races than just humans. keep in mind this is fantasy, the possibilities are limited only by your mind and the rules of the "reality" of the RP

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    i would join this one but its not really my style... and id rather not get into a really complex RP with a character that i have no real feelings toward.... (saying most of my characters are from my thoughts and memories..... not to good at making mortal humans....0

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    i would join this one but its not really my style... and id rather not get into a really complex RP with a character that i have no real feelings toward.... (saying most of my characters are from my thoughts and memories..... not to good at making mortal humans....0

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    Name: Serinus Darvoelin
    Age: 25
    Species: human
    Gender: Male
    Nationality: Aelorian
    Faction: ex-slave.
    Appearance: Rather handsome, he is of moderate height, neither being too tall or too short. He has curled golden hair and radiant blue eyes that many have said are "enchanting" to gaze upon. His skin is bronzed and he is well toned while not being overly muscular.
    Personality: He is charming to a fault, and a fortunately quick thinker. Generally speaking he is good with people and is often able to engage with them emotionally and intellectually. However after the war he feels out of his depth and has become somewhat with-drawn, not knowing who to trust or really what to do. He is a pretty shallow person, caring more for how a person presents themselves than who they might be.
    History: Serinus was bred specifically to be beautiful and charming. A long going programme by his rich master to produce only the most exquisite slaves to serve the household. He never knew his parents, and doesn't really consider it to be much of problem - his master and siblings were family enough for him. Growing up he was taught all manner of skills that he would need for his station in the house. He is skilled in writing, singing and playing a variety of instruments, as well as being a master conversationalist. Despite being a slave he led a comfortable life, as he was essentially, a decoration or ornament for his master. Then the war happened and everything changed. Unfortunately his master was slain during the fighting which left Serinous left without a home, given "freedom" by the invading forces. He does not feel free however, and finds life difficult. His past as a slave marks him as inferior to many, but his pampered lifestyle leaves him at odds with the other slaves. As a result he finds his new place in the world a troubling one, he is an outcast from all angles and realises just how unprepared he is for this life outside of his master.
    Character’s stance on the war: He feels anger at the invading forces, his life was easy and comfortable before they came along and ruined everything. However he is not particularly skilled with conflict and doesn't really know what to do with himself.


    Here is my attempt at a character here, I like a lot of your ideas here, and will be interested in where this goes. I will probably need to edit this at some point in the near future because its not really up to snuff, but its late here and I need to go to bed. Initial thoughts would be useful, thanks.
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    Can I join? I've read through all the information and this sounds really good! I'll think about joining if you'll let me
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    Great, people responded during 'vacation'. Not enough yet though, guess I'll wait some more. I'm unsure how many to wait for before commencing, but I'll go with three as a starting point.

    Belnazar, great character. It's obvious you put some thought into it. Thank you for joining.
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    Name: Raues Eolus
    Age: 22
    Species: Human
    Gender: Female
    Nationality: Aelorian
    Faction: Nobility & Military
    Appearance:
    Striking, that is the usual first impression of Raues most people have. Due to a rare recessive genetic trait, Raues has bright platinum hair as well as slightly darker silver colored eyes. Her hair is generally just past shoulder length and most all of which past her ears is kept pulled up in a reasonably high ponytail while her bangs are left free to frame her face. Her skin is fairly pale, though not unhealthy and refuses to tan, owing to the far northern heritage of her mother. Raues comes in at the height five feet five inches and just a hair over a hundred pounds, most of which is muscle. Her body is still fairly shapely and she looks very appealing in a ball gown though she is most often seen in her armored clothing. When carrying a weapon, Raues is often armed with a custom shield on her right arm that has an extendable spike at the front and sharpened edges.
    Personality:
    Brisk, rough, and unyielding is the most initial summary of Raues's personality. With the position she has held in life and the up hill struggle she has often had to wage to accomplish anything, Raues rarely spares any time for political bull that most nobles entertain. Rather, Raues hardly suffers fools and instead associates among those of the military as she finds the all business attitude far more refreshing. Occasionally she can be stubborn, but Raues generally supports actions that she believes will support the moral right and the general peace, as such she changes positions often enough given proper information.
    History:
    Raues is the only child of the second queen of Aelor. Both the youngest of the royal children as well as the child of the second queen, Raues was placed out of line for succession of the throne with her siblings and as such moved into a different path of advancement in life. By entering the military, Raues found her own place in the Aelorian society, far removed from the standard of her family as she grew older. To differentiate herself from the royal family during her military service, Raues has used her mother's maiden name in stead of her usual last name in order to avoid to much grief from her fellow soldiers.

    When the war came, Raues was recalled from her position near the front till the capital came under siege at which point she lead her own contingent of troops in several weeks of hard fighting before being captured shortly before the complete fall of the city. Now she awaits whatever fate has been chosen for her by the the Republic.
    Character’s stance on the war: Wasteful. As a soldier that has seen conflict first hand, Raues truly wished more diplomacy had been played out and sees the war as being nothing more than a wasteful expense unless dramatic changes come about of it.
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    Welcome aboard MarchingThunder. Most of what's in your CS, we've already talked about in pm's, so I have no problem with anything you've written whatsoever.

    For anyone else who may be tempted to join: don't feel afraid to post questions in this thread, or pm me.
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