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    Ah. Well, alrighty then.

    The Arena

    Let us begin, shall we?
    "Is it her? Could it be? Should my eyes believe what they see? If you are who I think you are I might lose my mind! Just a kiss from her lips and I would simply float away. The way her hips swing back and forth... I've got butterflies... Dead girls don't just appear out of thin air! But I am victim to her sinister stare.

    Please don't hate me for what I've done! Run away with me, I'll be everything that you need! Such a pretty girl screams to me, 'Take my hand, take my breath away.' What if my heart breaks again? 'Take my breath away.'"

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    uh. um... one thing. she doesn't just seem gladiator...she IS a gladiator. meaning she actually has to fight in an active arena . sorry to nitpick, but that is how I wrote the chara. she isn't a slave or anything, she does it for money. but I don't feel comfortable having her out of the ring.

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    the reason why she has so many weapons, is because she switches them mid-combat. either from the crowd, or from tainers

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    It would be best that she carried all of her weapons with her, as the arena is currently abandoned. That is something important, by the way. Judas wouldn't be there if it weren't peaceful, as you will see shortly.
    "Is it her? Could it be? Should my eyes believe what they see? If you are who I think you are I might lose my mind! Just a kiss from her lips and I would simply float away. The way her hips swing back and forth... I've got butterflies... Dead girls don't just appear out of thin air! But I am victim to her sinister stare.

    Please don't hate me for what I've done! Run away with me, I'll be everything that you need! Such a pretty girl screams to me, 'Take my hand, take my breath away.' What if my heart breaks again? 'Take my breath away.'"

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    *trainers

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    well, she is big enough, I think. it's just not what I had expected. I'll try. but it will be odd

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