Sorry I haven't gotten back to you, Tranor. Didn't realize that the second thread went up, and didn't think to check back here for edits.
Character sheets are nice. I like to have some idea of what I need to know. Speaking of what I need to know... What is going on in Warriors? Sniper sniping trucks leaves me going, "Okay, so where do we fit in here?"
Ah, sorry! Ironically enough, I had almost added in an extra paragraph explaining the situation, but I was in a hurry to get it out so I left it out, but I guess jumping right into the action wasn't the best idea after all. I'll edit my post a bit.
EDIT: Ok, I added some more detail to the post, including naming my character, which I hadn't fit in last time. Hopefully that makes things a little clearer to what is going on. If not, let me know. Everything is the same until the paragraph that begins with "Eric Haywood was the man's name. He was 30 years old."
Last edited by Tranor; 02-04-2017 at 12:20 AM.