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Miss Devil
12-22-2009, 07:38 PM
I was in a dark place NO I didn't kill anyone these are 25 lines with repeating phrases. I hope you enjoy I may post more depending on how I feel -furious-


I Pulled the Trigger



I pulled the trigger and saw the blood.
I pulled the trigger just for fun.
I pulled the trigger and heard the screams.
I pulled the trigger to join the freaks.
I pulled the trigger not to die.
I pulled the trigger to tell a lie.
I pulled the trigger to stop the pain.
I pulled the trigger like a game.
I pulled the trigger as you told me to stop.
I pulled the trigger and watched your body drop.
I pulled the trigger to show the real me.
I pulled the trigger that freed me.
I pulled the trigger it was a need.
I pulled the trigger and got to see death, blood, and misery.
I pulled the trigger there you were dead.
I pulled the trigger I was so sad.
I pulled the trigger I was angry and mad.
I pulled the trigger and everything was there.
I pulled the trigger as life, love, and passion ended.
I pulled the trigger busted and free.
I pulled the trigger as all the hatred left me.
I pulled the trigger with fear.
I pulled the trigger with bleary eyes.
I pulled the trigger finally it everything was gone.
I pulled the trigger when the clock strikes one.

Hierarch
12-22-2009, 07:41 PM
Very interesting, I must say

Miss Devil
12-23-2009, 11:27 AM
Thank you I'm going to post more I'm trying diffrent types of phrases this just came put good I hope the other turn out okay

Flex
12-23-2009, 11:33 AM
I really like it; it's well-written and very edgy.

Miss Devil
01-04-2010, 03:45 PM
I love the way...



I love the way the snow feels when it touches bare skin.
I love the way the ice skaters learn how to dance.
I love the way the winter comes and goes.
I love the way the fire heats up a frozen room.
I love the way that I know you.
I love the way that you know me.
I love the way that together we can be free.
I love the way that time seems to stop when we are close by.
I love the way the children play.
I love the way the grass is green.
I love the way the people walk around talking with ease.
I love the way the children get there yummy treats.
I love the way that chocolate is sweet.
I love the way that candy is a gift that can be counted from the heart.
I love the way that your giggles feel the air.
I love the way that your smile brightens the room.
I love the way the colors blend on the page.
I love the way the friends giggle at secret jokes.
I love the way the unique kids always stick out.
I love the way the writers know what it’s about.
I love the way that teachers teach you new things.
I love the way that rules are there to protect me.
I love the way that sounds can become a hum when you’re not trying to tune it out.
I love the way that a room can be so empty yet have a million people in it.
I love the way I can just be me around myself.