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Korvis
11-23-2011, 02:09 AM
this is the original character

Name: Ankura Kaoru
Age: 14
Gender: Male

Country: water
Village: Hidden Mist
Skill: Genious
Rank: Level 2 (genin)


Appearance: Kaoru has slightly above average height, with short, unkempt, dark gray hair. He has a scar begining on his right temple that obscures the continuity of his hair in a jaged line over his ear. He has learned to conceal it, but tends not to put much effort into it, so if one were to examine from a couple feet away it would be evident. Kaoru has dark, marble-blue eyes, and wears a black vest over a dark gray t-shirt. He wears a pair of black shorts similar to the kind Shino wears in the anime, with a small chain on the right, and wears his headband tight around his right arm, above the bicep. I had written quite a bit, but when i went to look at it i found it really verbose, so suffice it to say he has a build like Kiba: muscular, but not overtly so. Kaoru always looks like he has been up for a few days, with bloodshot eyes and a drawn expression on his face. He keeps a pair of black, cut-off gloves with the myst villiage symbol on top. He keeps them in his vest pocket and puts them on before fights. He wears black standard issue ninja sandles.

Personality: Kaoru often experiences nightmares that even after waking tend to impart on him a submissive and quiet demeanor. He has yet to demonstrate an aggressive side to his personality, although that doesent necessarily mean he doesent have one. He was once very trusting, but the countless times that trust was abused has given him a jaded point of view. Ankura Kaoru belongs to a clan that has much influence throughout the hidden myst, due to the fear instilled upon commoner and ninja alike by the nature of the Ankura Clan's genjutsu. This, combined with his generally anti-social behavior, or lack thereof, tends to put classmates and villiagers on edge around him.

Bio/Past: Ankura Kaoru was born into the Ankura Clan durring the most prevalent persecution of the Kiriku Clan. He was raised up until age 10 to hate the Kiriku for their utilization of sound techniques. At 10 years old Kaoru experienced his first love. Being as young as he was, even the fact that she was Kiriku did not dissuade him from acting on his love for her. Unfortunately, the rumors of the Kiriku being completely peaceful were not true, and Kaoru's love's parents promptly condemned the relationship, threatening Kaoru and his parents(who at the time had no idea of their precious son's forbiden love) with death. At that point a small-scale war broke out right under the nose of the leaders of the villiage, with Kaoru thinking he had caused it. With the influence the Ankura held over the leaders, they forced the vast majority of Kiriku out of the villiage. Kaoru has never seen his love since, not knowing if she had been killed during the opening hostilities or had been forcibly taken by her clan, leaving Kaoru feeling alone and betrayed by his entire clan, and his closest family. To spite being young, Kaoru had always been mature for his age, and the feelings of sorrow and hatred wouldnt leave him. Even with his family protesting, the rest of the clan forced them to abandon him for shame of having a traitor among them. Luckily his parents managed to set up a deal with a few people they knew in town who owned an orphanage who they knew would take decent care of him. Since then he has trained with no purpose but to stop wars and conflict.

Strength: Genjutsu/Ninjutsu

Elemental Mastery: N/A
Kekkai Genkai: N/A
Jinchuuriki: N/A

Special Techniques:
Name: Brain String Technique (Nou no Sutoringu no Tekunikku)
Description: The user emits small translucent chakra strings out of his skull, which quickly move to the target's/s' head and into their brain. The target/s feels nothing until the user of the jutsu pours chakra into the target's/s' brain at specific points causing the target/s to feel whatever the user chooses, ie: intense pain, paralizing fear or doubt... If the user desires so, the target/s may never realize they are under the influence of genjutsu. Simply by controling the flow of thoughts in the target's/s' mind, or acting as the voice inside their head, or conscience. This technique can be used in as subtle or forceful application, and on as many targets at one time, as the user's skill level with the technique, and chakra supply allow for.

Name: Shuriken Infusion Technique (Shuriken Chuunyuu no Tekunikku)
Description: The user infuses the weapons he uses with specialized chakra that upon hiting the target forces its way into the chakra circulatory system and upon being circulated to the brain, which ordinarily takes about 1 minute, the chakra begins to impart whatever sensations the user targeted while infusing the weapon. This only works one time per Shuriken, Kunai, Katana, or whatever weapon was infused, and the infusion process takes 20 minutes per weapon. Effectivness coorelates to the user's skill level.

Name: Life Sign Suppression Technique (Jinsei Sain Yokuatsu no Tekunikku)
Description: Allows the user to mask his life signs and chakra signature by giving the target/s a small influx of specialized chakra with the user's chakra signature to the sensory area of the brain by way of small translucent chakra strings, so the target/s may remain oblivious to his presence. The target/s feels a slight stinging sensation at the moment of overload. This technique can be used on as many targets at one time as the user's skill level with the technique, and chakra supply allow for.

Name: Spirit Release Technique (Ririisu no Tekunikku ni Seiki o Atae Sase te Kudasai)
Description: Enables the user to release a portion of his spirit from his body, and experience sensory input vicariously through the spirit form. Having multiple sensory imputs is very disorienting, and neither the spirit alone nor the body with the spirit can sense as well as the united body and spirit. With a range of about 100 meters this technique is quite useful while pinned down or while scouting territory. When the user dispels the technique and the broken spirit unites with the body, there is a period of disorientation that often can leave the user unable to comprehend new sensory input for a 30 seconds or so, according to how long the broken spirit was away from the body. The user's skill with the technique and time spent away from the body also determines how much chakra is consumed.

Color: Color

and this is the character after the timeskip

This is grown Kaoru, who is participating in the RP:

Name[/SIZE]: Ankura Kaoru
Age: 24
Gender: Male

Country: Fire
Village: Hidden Leaf
Skill: Genious
Rank: Level 6 (Anbu Black Ops)


Appearance: Kaoru has slightly above average height, with short, unkempt, dark gray hair. He has a scar begining on his right temple that obscures the continuity of his hair in a jaged line over his ear. He has learned to conceal it, but tends not to put much effort into it, so if one were to examine from a couple feet away it would be evident. Kaoru has dark, marble-blue eyes, and wears a black trenchcoat over a black body armor t-shirt. He wears a pair of loose fitting black jeans, with a small chain on the right, and wears his headband across his chest. He now wears a Konoha headband. He has a build like Kiba: muscular, but not overtly so. He keeps a pair of black, cut-off gloves with metal wires inside to support the needles that come out when he flexes his fist. He still has myst villiage markings on them. He keeps them in his jacket pocket and puts them on before fights. He wears modified black ninja sandles.

Personality: Kaoru is gentle, but fiercely protective. He carries out his missions quickly and effectively, not allowing things to get in the way of his goals. He is very quiet, and very smart. He likes to observe, rather than get involved, most of the time. One of the side effects of him using his chakra on himself is that for brief periods of time, he blacks out and cannot remember a thing. While he is blacked out, he functions normally and has no problems completing complex tasks, but he does not remember it afterwards. The memory blackouts seem to be triggered by his own self enhancement, making using it a double edged sword.

Bio/Past: Ankura Kaoru grew up as a ninja, with his teamates by his side. At his first chunin exam, he was made a chunin, after only a few months of being a genin. At the exams, he met an Anbu member who agreed to train him, seeing his potential. On the way back from the exams, they were ambushed and Kaoru found out that the rock village was attempting to assasinate Koneko, his teamate and the girl he loved. Before he could find out more, all he could do was protect her as well as he could, and keep his guard up as far as possible. Kaoru went through years of intensive Anbu training, learning everything he could from his master, in order to protect Koneko better. In these years of training, Koneko got more and more distant for some reason, and Koneko, Kaoru, and Kire(the last member of Kaoru's original team), were promoted to jounin. Soon after Koneko was promoted, 12 of the village's best ninja were killed, and she secretly left the village. Kaoru was distraught. He had no idea where she was, as she didnt tell him before she left. The Mizukage assumed she was the one responsible, and sent out a search party to either take her willingly, or kill her.

Unknowing of the relationship between Kaoru and Koneko, the Mizukage assigned Kaoru to the search force to track Koneko down. Durring the search, Kaoru found his chance search for Koneko on his own. He broke away from the team, and tracked her down, finding her waiting for him. He pulled her close to kiss her... and was stabbed in the stomach. The knife was poisoned, and even though the wound wasnt fatal, the poison knocked him out for long enough for her to get far away from him. When he woke up, he dressed his wound, and imediately went after her again. Love makes men do stupid things.

Kaoru tracked Koneko all the way to the rock village. Following her trail, he found why she had left. She was genetically altered to be a 'super-ninja', and the experiment went wrong. When it there was no chance of redemtion for the experiment, she was ordered to be destroyed. Her parents gave her to some close family friends, and told the rock village Kage that she had been destroyed. He found out that they had not killed her, and ordered them killed themselves, then sent assasins to kill Koneko and keep the experiment a secret. Koneko did show results of the altered DNA, but only after a large ammount of time. He wasnt sure what exactly she could do, because it seemd they didnt know either, but he was about to find out. He found documents that mentioned a suppression technique to suppress her DNA induced destruction.

He finally found her, but she was in quite a bit of trouble. She was facing down about 30 ninja, all at once, and she was barly holding on, when the enemy ninja suddenly started choking, and being torn apart around her. Blood was flying everywhere, and Kaoru jumped into the fray to help her, but found that his own flesh was being rended from his body. He screamed at Koneko to stop, but she didnt. As a last ditch hope, he pushed chakra into her brain, and she passed out. So did Kaoru. He had almost no blood at all, and when he woke up, he and koneko stayed in the village, allowing wounds to heal. By the time he was ready to take her back, she still wasnt conscious, and he had to cary her the whole way. When he got back to the village, he thought for sure that somehow she would be forgiven for killing the ninja, but instead, she was condemned and tortured, as they tried to figure out the mechanism for her great power.

Kaoru had had enough. He wasnt going to have the woman he loved tortured for anybody, even his own village. As much as it hurt when he pulled on his stealth suit and imagined killing his friends and family for the past 20 years of his life, the only thing on his mind was saving Koneko.

Durring the fight, Kire, still loyal to the mist village, tried to stop him. After an intense and deadly battle, Kaoru stood victorious over his fallen comrade. Heavily injured, Kaoru pumped himself full of specialized chakra, and got himself and Koneko as far from the village as he could. He was almost dead when Koneko woke up and healed him, both of them having massive scars and wounds that would never heal.

Kaoru remembered his Anbu master, and they set off toward Konoha, hoping to find refuge.

Strength: Genjutsu/Ninjutsu

Elemental Mastery: N/A
Kekkai Genkai: N/A
Jinchuuriki: N/A

Special Techniques:
Name: Brain String Technique (Nou no Sutoringu no Tekunikku)
Description: The user emits small translucent chakra strings out of his skull, which quickly move to the target's/s' head and into their brain. The target/s feels nothing until the user of the jutsu pours chakra into the target's/s' brain at specific points causing the target/s to feel whatever the user chooses, ie: intense pain, paralizing fear or doubt... If the user desires so, the target/s may never realize they are under the influence of genjutsu. Simply by controling the flow of thoughts in the target's/s' mind, or acting as the voice inside their head, or conscience. This technique can be used in as subtle or forceful application, and on as many targets at one time, as the user's skill level with the technique, and chakra supply allow for.

Name: Modification Technique
Description: Application of the Brain String Technique, allows Kaoru to introduce specialized chakra into teamates to augment their abilities. This is a constantly growing technique, as he is constantly finding new abilities to augment. Among them are:
Reflexes
Strength
Thought efficiency
Speed

Name: Self Modification Technique
Description: The only difference with this technique is that Kaoru can use it without using his chakra strings. He merely releases the chakra through his chakra circulatory system. It takes longer to begin to work, but uses less chakra overall. The effects are the same as the regular Modification Technique.

Name: Shuriken Infusion Technique (Shuriken Chuunyuu no Tekunikku)
Description: The user infuses the weapons he uses with specialized chakra that upon hiting the target forces its way into the chakra circulatory system and upon being circulated to the brain, which ordinarily takes about 1 minute, the chakra begins to impart whatever sensations the user targeted while infusing the weapon. This only works one time per Shuriken, Kunai, Katana, or whatever weapon was infused, and the infusion process takes 20 minutes per weapon. Effectivness coorelates to the user's skill level.

Name: Life Sign Suppression Technique (Jinsei Sain Yokuatsu no Tekunikku)
Description: Allows the user to mask his life signs and chakra signature by giving the target/s a small influx of specialized chakra with the user's chakra signature to the sensory area of the brain by way of small translucent chakra strings, so the target/s may remain oblivious to his presence. The target/s feels a slight stinging sensation at the moment of overload. This technique can be used on as many targets at one time as the user's skill level with the technique, and chakra supply allow for.

Name: Spirit Release Technique (Ririisu no Tekunikku ni Seiki o Atae Sase te Kudasai)
Description: Enables the user to release a portion of his spirit from his body, and experience sensory input vicariously through the spirit form. Having multiple sensory imputs is very disorienting, and neither the spirit alone nor the body with the spirit can sense as well as the united body and spirit. With a range of about 100 meters this technique is quite useful while pinned down or while scouting territory. When the user dispels the technique and the broken spirit unites with the body, there is a period of disorientation that often can leave the user unable to comprehend new sensory input for a 30 seconds or so, according to how long the broken spirit was away from the body. The user's skill with the technique and time spent away from the body also determines how much chakra is consumed.

Name: Anemone Technique
Description: Kaoru uses his chakra strings in an anemone-fasion, with them hanging out about an inch from his skin. Anything brushing them will have their pain receptors imediately stimulated to their maximum limit, sometimes even destroying them, and leaving the attacker completely numb.

Name: Needle Patch Technique
Description: Kaoru uses needles infused with different sorts of specialized chakra, placed under patches that are skin-colored, next to his skin. all he has to do is hit the patch, and the needle stays in, giving constant stimulation of whatever sort it is specialized to for approximately an hour at a time.

Techniques Kaoru learned from Youtoko Masmuni:

Name: Advanced Healing Technique Lvl 3
Description: Advanced technique for healing others or himself, requires quite a bit of concentration, and it is made simpler by Kaoru due to his unique abilities to dispense chakra to different parts of the brain and body with his strings.

Name: Body Snatch Technique
Description: Kaoru basically beats down the target's consciousness, starting by applying his chakra strings to the targets brain, then forcing his chakra, unspecialized variety, all over and into the target's brain, inundating it with his own essence. This primes the brain for directives, and takes quite a bit of chakra. Kaoru can control up to 3 people at a time, so far.

Name: Amnesia Technique
Description: Kaoru stimulates the either short or long term memory areas of the brain, forcing the target to forget everything stored there, for a short time.

Cat Spirits: When summoned, these incrediblly smart creatures split up into squads, working together to assist their summoner.
Specialty: Cat spirits are masters of stealth and stalking. They are basically the information gatherers of the spirit summons. They work quickly and efficiently, often performing vital information gathering tasks durring missions. Led by the Twin Emperors, Anzu and Asura, a twin panthers, with long fangs, and hyper-speed that could hardly be matched, Anzu uses water jutsus, Asura uses lightning jutsus, each one of them have a scar on it's head that represents it's own element.
Levels of Power:
First Level=> Summoning 12 small ninja cats (lynx).
Second Level=> Summoning the Twin Emperors, Anzu and Asura.