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Wins
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Susan
Shizam
Power
Flow
Total
League
score
Badge
SQJPure
2
0
1
77
20
90
75
262
7
None
Characters
Name
Wins
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Ranking
(Pos)
Ranking
(Score)
Health
Dumbledore
0
0
0
1
21
(Alive)
Afro Samurai
0
0
0
2
16
(Alive)
Ironman
0
0
0
3
15
(Alive)
Mask
0
0
1
6
0
(Alive)
Arenas
The Colosseum
#1
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#2
Madison square garden
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#3
Hallelujah mountains
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#4
The Death Port
The haunted docks this is an eerie dock lost in time after the final Pirate Wars of the Caribbean, wars missing in the records of time. What was once a busy port has been left as a burning hulk by cannon fire by the British navy who had taken advantage of the wars and taken rule of the seas for themselves.
The ancient gods have taken the port for themselves and have pulled it into the land of immortals beyond time and space, now the smoking ruin burns forever, crumbles forever in a continuous loop.
This is the location of the great battle of legends. *SUPER DETAILED EDITION*
Layout.
Available(Postable) locations.
The twin piers.
Left Pier
Right Pier
They are widely spaced wooden surfaces lined with wooden beams, once capable of carrying heavy cargo, now less then half remain, most lost to cannon fire.
Each pier is long, long enough to hold two ships behind each other, though the left pier's edge has been blown apart leaving it shorter than the right.
Though next to each other they are widely spaced apart, yet spaced enough to fit two ships between them.
Between the two piers are, in actual fact, two ships close together.
The SS Black Pearl.
A Destroyed ship, with a completely exposed left side spanning two levels. The exposed left side faces the left pier, are there is no board plank to climb so jumping down onto one of the two levels is the best way onto the ship itself.
The Black Pearl has 3 levels
The Deck
The Upper level
The Hull
The Deck
There are four locations.
The Wheel
The wheel, this is a raised platform on the ship with twin stairs that can be climbed to reach the wheel, which is no longer there. There is a line running through the centre of the ship where a cannon has blasted a perfect line through the centre dropping into the Captain's cabin. The area is medium to large with an even surface.
The Captain's Cabin
The Captain's cabin, is still in pristine condition, with a dinning table, a bed, a walk in closet, music room(Open area) with a piano. The only disadvantage of this area is that it is full of items which can make fighting hard as you're bound to bump into something.
The Mast
The mast is still in tact along with the sail(though burnt and holy) and all its rigging. The area is climbable and the wooden beams are just wide enough to walk uncomfortably. One can also jump into the trampoline like sail on the other ship(The Buc) to get on.
The Deck
Basically a hulking ruin, filled with debris, crushed cannons lay every where and there's a massive gaping hole threaten to drop anyone who isn't sure footed into the level below. Though filled with debris the area itself is quite large but uneven allowing hiding opportunities.
Upper level
There are 3 locations
Sleeping Cabins
The sleeping cabin is a long but wide hall filled with bunk beds and hammocks, all still hanging high at one end, though most hammocks through the chaos were twisted moved creating a sense of chaos.
The area is dark and the air is manky at best. This provides good opportunities for one to fight, like the captain's cabin this area, though wide, is very crowded. You may find yourself cutting through two hammocks just to get to your opponent.
The Eating Quarters *Exposed rooms*
This room was almost entirely destroyed leaving a crushed bench table which lies sideways blocking half the room off from the other side which has the door leading out. This area is the highest area leading into the ship and is visible from the pier. The area is not large but not crowded either, though the debris on the floor may lead to hampered footwork and shoes get hooked on tiny objects..
The Passages.
All the lighting is gone, no cannon fire has opened any light for this area of the ship and is therefore the darkest area. The dangers of letting one's guard down in this area are huge. The passages are dark long and seemingly endless in their depth. They are also super thin barely allowing 2 people to pass each other. The passages are also the best way to and from the lower levels.
The Hull
Potentially the second largest area. This is a single location. The left side is torn open and exposed for people to come in from. There's a stairway leading up from the passages. There's also the loading bay where all the gun powder as was once held leading up to the deck. There's a rope net holding a long range siege cannon hanging low, offering people an opportunity to climb to get to the deck. Because this is the hull, it is pretty deep into the water and because its exposed water pours in constantly, filling up the hull but stopping at knee height. This generally makes movement effing hard but is also the safest place to jump down from from the pier.
The second ship is the The Buccaneer
Is actually twice the size of the Black Pearl but is a living inferno. Making more than half its rooms useless and impossible to access.
This ship is completely unexposed and has no board walk allowing only two ways to enter. Via the mast of the other ship or via the broken mast of the current ship which has fallen down into the pier and can be climbed.
The Burning Deck.
The burning deck is the area with second lowest level of fire, this area is haunted and filled with the hazy images of the dead and the sounds of cannon fire and screaming. The area is large but the fire has limited the area's accessibility, cutting down its playing size by half. The fire has weakened the floor board's so one's step is always something to be careful of.
The Fiery upper deck
This is a maze of fiery walls and wooden walls that have yet to burn. Though the fire is great there is no smoke and the area is clear but very bright, almost blinding in its brightness. The passages are wide and all the rooms are open but they're mostly ruins and burning hulks which bare little room for a proper fight.
{HOT ARENA -- HOT ITEM Inaccessible}
The Lower Deck
This is the area where the majority of the cannons were stored, this is the most dangerous area of the ship, the heat from the ship caused loaded cannons to fire on their own. But with the ship being caught in a temporal loop they fire constantly, reloading themselves and blasting every ten minutes. There are over 20 cannons in this room. This room is massively wide, spanning from the far back of the ship to the front and has almost no support pillars as they've all been blown apart leaving an open room. This area is unstable as the area is rocked with every shot but is also very open and level.
#5
The School Yard
There was once a private school of the highest reputation and the highest of honours in the cool snowy grounds of Moscow Russia. When a new experimental 747 on it's first fight, caught in a back draft was pulled out of the sky and hurtled into a school. Killing over one hundred passengers and school kids ageing 10 to 17, male and female.
But this event was never recorded. For, by the hands of the gods, the scene was pulled from the annuls of space and time and turned into the second arena for the second legendary battle set in the name of entertaining the very gods themselves.
They have taken the very scene of wreckage itself and pulled the most horrific ten seconds of carnage after the crash and set it in a loop.
Rock that breaks will recover
The bodies of students that perished will keep perishing.
The screams, the broken bones will repeat....
Forever...
Welcome to the school yard. Welcome to your worst nightmare.
The Layout
These are postable locations.
This saves us from trying to understand where the hell your character is.
Just in case someone forgets to describe that fully
The 747
The commercial Airliner that took a nose dive into a well populated public school.
The plane itself will only have three playable areas.
The Cargo room/ Passenger seating
This is the main seating area of the plane, tilted to the left the passenger room's shell is remarkably in tact. but the seating within is nothing like the plane's interior. the interior is completely destroyed with seats up turned, sitting on top of each other. The separate classes, first, business, economy are a mess of broken bodies, limbs and blood. The layout is upturned and cramped, messy. The only way in is through the two emergency escape on the left side of the plane, the plane leading outside to the courtyard. The only other way out is through the cockpit.
The Cockpit
{Inaccessible}
This is the smallest room in the entire room of death, providing very limited moving space.
The small size is not the room's only feature. The entire plane's circuitry has been destroyed but every wire is just was live as ever, sparks burst out of the boards. The amps and volts are huge, big enough to ensure instant death the crew members who'd had the misfortune of being in the cockpit were burned up in seconds, leaving burned and charred chunks of flesh over bone.
Careful of the small playground but be more careful of exposed wires and bits of metal.
The School
Once a stunning location now a death trap, playable across five locations, which location will you kill or be killed?
Teachers lounge
Once a an area where teachers could go over their work and relax during free period, parties even, this medium size room has become the ultimate death trap.
Set upon the third floor of the structure where one of the plane's massive engines was flung the impact of the entire plane crash itself had destroyed the floor itself but the steel support within held and now the room slopes down to the close room below, which would have been fine were it not for the plane's engine which ploughed through the second floor.
Now the teacher's Lounge slopes into the massive jet engine. Having devoured many a hapless teacher caught in the wrong place and the wrong time the blades wait for their next victim.
The Roof
The roof in this case is quite literally on fire, what ever design technique had been used for insulation of the school walls was set up n the roof and was, unfortunately, quite flammable. Now the roof has turned into a never ending inferno wiping out the attic area leaving only the roof and the floors below.
The roof's integrity is long gone so the slightest misstep could have you falling into a fiery inferno.
So watch your step as the roof regenerates you never know which step is a safe one and which one will send you down below.
Side note the roof generally offers a level of access to all of the rooms, including some on the plane.
The Stairway
The most clear path leading from room to room as it accesses each and every level with the exception of the ground floor. This follows a typical building format with the spiralling stairway. Rise, Straight, Rise, Straight until the top floor. Leaving few flat grounds on which to fight with.
The 747's cockpit smashed through the stair way so if you want to get to the court yard you have to travel through the 747's cockpit them the passenger area then out the exit doors.
The Court yard
The School is set out in a 'n' shape with the one half of the school ravaged by the crash while the other part of the school remained in tact and was left out of the area with the exception of the court yard.
The court yard is basically large field of tar. There the students spend their breaks during the summer playing games like hand ball and the such.
The court yard is easily the clearest room in the arena with the widest space, but one shouldn't get too complacent. The heat of the flame over the grounds, long caked with inches of snow over has turned the snowy floor into an icy nightmare.
The Slope room
The slope room. Situated on the second floor of the grounds this room was formally two separate rooms, a science lab with 12 desks on one side and on the other while the other room is a basic classroom.
The wall dividing the two rooms was crushed in the crush as the entire floor wobbled and the one side dropped leaving a massive slope dropping to windows the threaten to throw anyone out windows to the court yard.
#6(Incomplete)
Hogwarts Castle
The Hogwarts Interior
The Bridge
Entrance Hall
Grand Staircase
Courtyard
Great Hall
Bridge to the boat house
#7(Incomplete)
Hogwarts Grounds
Hogwarts Grounds
The Lake
The Quiddich pitch
The Forest
Womping Willow
Hagrid's Inn
#8(Incomplete)
#9(Incomplete)
Car Park of the future
Car Park of the future
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The car park itself is a hyper advanced structure designed for the transport, shipping and storage of vehicles.
This structure can contain up to three thousand vehicles at a time, with over fifty vehicles moving moving in and out of the structure at a time.
The structure itself faces the ocean docks where the cars are most frequently moved.
There's generally a large amount of rains and typhoon that come through so rain night be an issue from time to time.
This is not a road so much as an every flowing conveyor belt, moving in two directions, the first pulling into the building, through the structure and out into the dock.
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The two roads are wide, wide enough to hold a eighteen wheeler with ease.
The road is not tar road so much as a thick rubber mesh which can hold twice as much as an eighteen wheeler.
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On either side of the twin road over the front entrance has open pavement.
On either side of the twin road over the back way is pure dock, with nothing but water on either side.
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Is curcular and wide, it's flat and doesn't hold any cars but it;s not generally supposed to hold anything, but as it is still a glass roof designed a fend off the nature's worst so the glass is incredibly thick, thick enough to hold oof nature and is as though as concrete. Though isn't is not generally desgisned to hold huans the slant of the glass and how slippery it is can work against a fighter.
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The raising tool.
These are mechanical arms, twelve exactly, the pick up vehicles and move then along, they do not effect players too powerfully instead acting as a tool. This devise is damn near indestuctable and fast moving so don't get hit by it.
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The walls
The walls are always packed with cars, powerful massive structures designed to hold the weight of the structures it supports.
The floors and the steel is refined so it doesn't break easily ar all.
the cars are tightly paced together so asside from jumping from one car platform to the next.
#10(incomplete)
The Dynmic Tower(Outer plains)
The outer plains are a secondary world from a story I wrote, the entire world is completely unpopulated. Everything within this parallel world is generally ruined, aged and decrepit except for the electric power running through the building.
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This tower has eighty floors all of which rotate constantly.
Between each floor there are massive wind turbines between each level. With about seventy nine wind turbines, spinning constantly.
The wind turbines generate power which keeps the entire building alive.
The first fifteen floors
The area in the first fifteen floors is caught up in an absolutely massive sandstorm.
The wind moving from east to west with and sand moving in that direction.
The area itself, with it's shredded walls allows the gusts of sand to burst right through with ease creating a brown fog which makes visibility difficult. (Since this is not a hot an active Hot Item it doesn't hinder characters beyond making visibility hard.)
This is also one the of most open areas in the entire buildings with large marble pillars acting as the building's primary support.
The wind turbines are the slowest there
Hot Items(Not available in any battles)
The sand and dust between will actively blind and start to suffocated members who are in the area for longer than two posts.
These floors are considered the surge floors since they are the ones that have been caught in a power surge and rotate fastest out of all of the floors in the building.
They also have the smallest rooms which make navigating the rooms a nightmare.
Passages moving through one room to another are a very tricky affair since the floors are moving so fast. In some floors the floors are moving so fast that it is physically possible to stand side ways, depending on the direction of the rotation.
All of the floors here flow in the opposite direction from the one beneath and below, making the whole effect an extremely jarring one.
Being airborne is obviously a very tricky situation within these floors because if you're not attached to the ground then obviously the room is spinning without you, making flying into walls and getting smashed by walls a very rarely possibility.
Hot Item(Do not use)
The blades of the turbines are moving at an impossible high speed making jumping from one floor to the next nearly impossible to do without gaining some level of damage or impact.
The turbines themselves are huge, absolutely massive so going up against them is a very dangerous task.
Debris Each of these floors has couches, carpets, lamps etc which are really moving like they've been fired out of cannons so one has to be careful of those.
In terms of structural damage this area is basically a complete disaster area.
There is no furniture, no doors, simply patches of floor like the rocks of the hallelujah mountains as the area is really just a hyper dangerous chasm.
The combination of hyper fast moving turbines with the vast winds there's a massive cyclone in the room.
Despite how fast most of these turbines are moving, the massive moving walls of steel have become walk-able floors where people can step and walk on though it is impossible to stay on them since most pass a section of the floor.
These floors are also the easiest areas to pass through, since there's basicaly no floor left.
(Incomplete DAMN WORK!!)
This is the level were the floors themselves are the smallest. Floors of all but easily have the largest rooms.
The winds upon these floors are extremely powerful but effect areas within the floor differently
The centre has the strong spiralling wind which fights to drag you in all directions where the rooms that face west are the ones that give the pulling sensation, wanting to pull you out of the building(Multiplied by a hundred when an active hot item.)
The east as a pushing sensation pushing you in.
Being airborne within these floors as a dangerous double effect as the room will spin without you and the winds will of course have an increased effect.
The whistle of the winds is also deafening, making hearing conversation hard(Deafening when acting as a hot item).
Hot item
If you step into the edges of the buildings where the wind is blowing your character will be pushed out.
The winds in these floors are so loud that they very realistically will throw you from the room to the world below, which means death to all those who can't fly.
Afro didn't bother to look around to take in the cultural high point in sporting history. The brilliant light that radiated within, the high walls were all lost in the back of his mind. Lost and processed into the form schematics, high light there, low light there, pillar there, tile there, banners, stands. All details were taken in until he reached the soft wood floors of the basket ball courts.
"You there?!" Afro shouted.
Danijel
10-16-2012, 06:49 PM
A laughter mixed with a sound of squawking could be heard around the basketball arena. On top of the scoreboard, in the middle of the court, a small man in a poor tuxedo suit with an umbrella was standing, The Penguin. Penguin opens up his umbrella and jumps from the scoreboard, slowly gliding down to land on the wooden floor.
After closing the umbrella he points it at Afro and says, „Bring it on, Furball!“
The hairs in the back of Afro's neck rose. It would seem as his opponent was already there. His breathing calmed, there was no excitement, only calm anticipation. Slowly he reached for the hilt of his blade, unsheathing it in one fluid motion.
He stared up at The Penguin and pointed his blade. "Come down and face me."
Danijel
10-17-2012, 02:30 PM
Penguin looks up at the scoreboard where he jumped off just recently, and then at Afro who was staring up there. „I'm already down!“, he exclaims confusingly „Bah, never mind!“, he adds as he flips the tip of his umbrella open and points it at Afro.
„Let's see how you look well done.“, he says before spitting fire from his umbrella like a flamethrower.
The Afro threw himself back, bouncing backwards on his heels, his blade raised him front of him. He landed and his back throwing his lands up high just as he landed. The effect led to him flipping him back onto his feet. The edges of his afro were smoking.
Grinning wide, Afro bounced on his heels waving The Penguin over.
Danijel
10-17-2012, 07:27 PM
„Oh... Well you're not the only one with fancy martial arts!“, says Penguin as he plays with his umbrella, handling it like it was a sword. The small man then starts running towards the black samurai, shouting his battle cry mixed with a sound of squawking.
As he got close he jumps and goes for landing his umbrella on Afro by smashing it on him, while saying, „En garde!“
The Afro jumped back just as the impact connected, the hit still proving enough to throw him back against the spectator seats, landing feet first on the vertical seats. Jumping forwards his feet stomping onto the seats, he threw himself forwards, and slid onto his back gaining momentum as he slid between the Penguin’s legs, striking the groin with a raised knee.
Danijel
10-18-2012, 02:52 PM
Penguin was sent flying backwards when he struck in his groin, and as he landed he grabbed them rolling left-right and sqawking out in pain. He stands up and, in much higher pitch, he says, „You'll pay for this!“
He grabs his umbrella in reverse grip and presses a button. The part of the handle dropped to the floor, but it was attached to a chain. He then proceeds to swing that part at Afro.
Afro raised his blade to block the chain, catching steel only to have the handle strike him in the head, the hit was enough to throw him on the ground. Afro gritted his teeth pulling himself back up to his feet. Shooting off like a bullet he made a dash at the penguin, jumping up and raising his knee, aiming it right at the his forehead.
Danijel
10-19-2012, 10:35 AM
Penguin had to act quickly because the black samurai was dashing towards him pretty fast. When he saw Afro jumping up, Penguin drops his umbrella, which still had its chains out, and tries cover his head with hands. Afro kneed him in the heads, but the impact was strong enough to make penguin lose balance and roll backwards few feet.
Penguin stands up, rolls his sleeves up, and charges at Afro preparing a punch.
Afro was impressed at the man's tenacity, he hadn't expected The penguin to take a hit as well as he was. But that did little to deter him. Instead of slowing at the charge, Afro charged right back at the awkwardly shaped man, ramming his forehead right against the round little man's fist. His teeth gritted hard to take the impact.
Danijel
10-23-2012, 10:10 AM
Penguin locked himself in a power struggle with the black samurai: his punch against Afro's headbutt. Not wanting to stay in this position nay longer, Penguin releases his fist and jumps aside to dodge the Afro's headbutt, and jumps again towards his umbrella.
He rolls as he lands and grabs the umbrella and retracts his chain. „Take this!“, then he swung the umbrella's chain at Afro again, but this time the chain was electrified.
The afro raised his sword again at the chain, this time catching it in his hand before screaming out as the chain's electric burst rushed through his form. his screams turned to cries of determination as he wrapped the chain around his fingers, yanking fast and hard on it.
Danijel
10-24-2012, 02:27 PM
Penguin wasn't ready for the yank, so he dropped the umbrella as Afro pulled it. The electricity stopped flowing through the chains as the umbrella fell on floor. "I can't get a break here.", he comments.
Penguin then tucks in his hat harder on his head and rushes towards the black samurai, while screaming. Once he got close enough, the small round man jumps and goes for the jump kick landing.
The boot of The Penguin struck him in the side of the head, throwing him across the soft floor. His arms and legs and his blade stuck into the ground digging it into the court floor. He made his way back to his feet grinning at The Penguin's tenacity.
Bouncing on his heels, he kicked up the floor side chairs, launching a chair with a spinning heel kick.
Danijel
10-29-2012, 06:25 AM
Penguin squawks right as he gets hit by a chair in the face. The chair shatters and Penguin falls on floor from the impact. He stands up, but his head was really hurting him. ''Ow, ow, ow!'', he screams as he holds his head in pain.
He looks at the grinning samurai madly with a clenched teeth. He takes off both his hat and suit, before running at Afro to engage him in close combat.
His body ached slightly but the pain was not severe enough to stop him from continuing the fight. The whole fight was thrilling, the idea that he'd get to such an opponent was quite enjoyable. The round little man charged and he charged right back, sheaving his blade for a hand to hand fight.
Danijel
11-20-2012, 11:41 AM
Once Penguin got into a jumping range of the black samurai, he jumps and, while squawking his battle cry, tries to land a kick.
Afro took the man's foot right to the chest, losing his breath the moment it connected. The penguin man was skilled and there was no denying it but Afro remained silent as he held on close to the man's foot. Gripping it tight, he pulled, twisting his body sharply in an attempt to throw the man on his back.
Danijel
12-12-2012, 06:01 PM
In swift action, Penguin found himself flying away from the black samurai as he threw him. The round man lands on his back and, because of his shape, bounces and lands on his belly. The Penguin stands up, clenching his teeth in crazed anger and with saliva drooling down his mouth. He recklessly charges at the black samurai again.
The round man was resilient, Afro hadn't been expecting this, his fingers trembled from the constant attacks, it was getting harder to keep grip on his sword, at this rate he was going to have to tie his sword to his hand. Afro turned around and started running away, jumping up the stands and into the tighter passages. There he waited for the fat man.
Danijel
01-01-2013, 06:33 PM
Seeing the black samurai went up the stands, Penguin changed his running direction and went after his umbrella. As he picks it up, he opens it wide and the thing's canopy starts rotating. The canopy ends up getting shred, revealing rotor blades that was hidden. He lifts his umbrella upwards and begins flying up, then with a slight tilt forward he begins flying towards samurai's direction. "Watch out, flying penguin!", he shouts.
Afro, spread his stance ever so slightly, his heels raising up off the floor as the muscles in his calves burned in anticipation. When he felt the fat man was in range he jump to the left to catch his opponent by surprise, his entire body twisting side ways as he landed on the left wall of the passage kicking off hard rocketing head first at the penguin's midsection.
Danijel
01-02-2013, 06:38 PM
Penguin watched as the black samurai's head was approaching him rather fast, and with not much distance in-between them he could only take the hit. The heabutt struck him in the belly and he sent flying backwards, but he managed to hang on to his umbrella. Small villain, while cursing to himself, flies higher in the air and, aiming for Afro's position, begins cutting down the reflectors suspended on the ceiling with umbrella's rotor blades.
Caught by surprise at the twist in tactics, Afro found himself caught in shock keeping his feet rooted as the reflectors of the stadium fell down upon him. His feet froze but his blade flicked slicing the first and largest of them in half in a flash. It separated but not wide enough as the steel cut past his ear on the left and neck on the right threatening to cut his head off.
Battle 2#
Hallelujah mountains.
A transportation helicopter slowed over the highest rock of the mountains, hovering high. Tony start stuck his head out the door and jumped, his suit spread over his entire body, clicking and clacking over his flesh until he was fully covered, landing with a thud on the lush grass upon the floating. His scanners started their work over the area looking to find and make quick work of his opponent.
DoughGuy
01-03-2013, 11:11 AM
Battle #2
As the helicopter turned to leave a shadow hidden in the darkness of its underbelly detached, flashing blue and disappearing. On the grass in front of Stark a masked man suddenly appeared, sword in one hand, the other fading from the glowing blue magic of his teleport. He gave a curt bow before readying himself. He had followed his target here and it was time to deal with him.
Battle 2#
Tony turned around when his scanners caught site of his opponent. Tony raised his eye brows, genuinely surprised at the man's ability to come up behind him.
"That's a nice outfit, very nice outfit there Gimli." He said grinning wide inside of his suit as the man bowed.
"That's something, special. A sword. Check this out."
Tony raised his arm and a ray burst from his palms, aimed at his chest.
DoughGuy
01-03-2013, 11:44 AM
The ray flew at him but Corvo simply blinked and let it fly off harmlessly into the distance, as he appearedg behind Stark. He’d analysed his opponent while he’d been on the helicopter and knew this armour was like nothing from Dunwall. He doubted his sword could even scratch it. Rather than risk a useless attack he drew his pistol, an explosive round already loaded, and shot it at Stark’s back point blank.
"Fast! "Stark breathed, stunned, when the man get right behind him. Before he knew what was happening an explosive impact knocked him off of his feet. Systems ignited his jets and he took off firing out and spinning himself around the floating rock. Tony hadn't expected such speed or the gun from the knightly figure. Beams shot from his palms and chest tearing into the rock, lighting it up, blowing it up. "Out run that."
DoughGuy
01-03-2013, 12:16 PM
As the rock disintegrated around him Corvo took off at a run, aiming for the closest rock too him. He holstered his gun and his hand began to glow again. Reaching the edge of the rock he leapt, throwing his arm out behind him and releasing a massive blast of wind to propel him over. He flew through the open space and landed on the next rock, rolling to reduce the impact.
Watching Corvo move Tony saw possibility in ending things early in the battle, he followed, moving closer, only to have the magnetic waves cause chaos with his systems limiting his once clear locking capabilities the lower into the hallelujah mountains he went. His mask popped up and he used his eyes as he sped right at the enemy, closing his mask just as his head impacted with Corvo's chest in mid roll.
DoughGuy
01-03-2013, 12:42 PM
Corvo’s roll was interrupted and he was thrown by a sudden impact, feeling a rib or 2 break as he rolled across the rock. He grabbed at the long grass of the rock to slow himself to avoid falling off the edge. He pushed himself up slowly. Finding Stark he released another powerful blast of air at him while he was still in mid-air hoping to force him to ground.
#9
The red backs burst white only to cut off completely under the blasting impact of the wind on him. Before Stark knew what was happening fell out of the sky onto the same rock and Corvo like a rock, ironic considering the location. They jets stuttered as they struggled to come to life. He was caught out on his back, struggling to get back up as he fought to get to his knees.
Danijel
01-03-2013, 09:51 PM
Battle #1
Seeing that his ranged tactics seem to be slightly more effective than his close-quarters one, Penguin decided to land back on the stadium floor. He opens up his umbrella's chain extension and tosses the rotor blades part towards the black samurai. The rotor blades part lands on it's tip and acts like a spinning top toy that's headed for Afro, which Penguin guides with the extension chain.
Afro did a jump and spin avoiding the blades by millimetres, having them tear at his Gi. The round man was tenacious, he was good, and he wasn't stopping. Afro grabbed the chain, yanking hard before sprinting forwards, his blade extended for a clean stab.
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Battle 1#
DoughGuy
01-04-2013, 12:20 AM
Battle 2 #10
Corvo jumped out of the way as Stark fell to the rock, putting some distance between him and his fallen foe. He still wasn’t sure if he could penetrate the armour, the bullet had done little beside knock Stark over. Instead he chose to look for weaknesses. He summoned forth a rat swarm, the rodents swarming up from dozens of cracks in the rock and covering Stark biting him all over searching for weak points.
Danijel
01-05-2013, 12:29 PM
Battle #1 (28th post)
Penguin lost the grip on his umbrella handle once again, he really should work on that. Seeing Afro spreinting towards him with his sword ready, Penguin drops on his knees, holds his hands together and shouts with his squwaking voice, "Don't! Please, spare me!"
Battle #1
#29
"Waste him afro! dun trust this guy!" Yelled the imaginary voice in his head as the rub souls of his custom sandals squeezed across the Madison floor. His blade, still sharp enough to cut through steel, whistled as he sped right for the man but his boots squeaked to a stop right in front of the round man and he walked past, his blade re-sheathed . "My goal is only to move forward."
Battle #2
Stark had pulled up his visor keeper to see when he caught sight of the vermin bursting out of the rock. Every second of seeing it making him question of reality as he closed his visor for fear of having one inside his suit and started swatting them, stunned when he saw damaging reading on his joints. His rockets fired and he shot free of the rock, pulling a high speed corkscrew to get free
DoughGuy
01-06-2013, 11:54 PM
Battle 2 #12
Corvo watched Stark shoot up into the air, noting the small sparks jumping from the damaged joints. His swarm had done well and shown him his foes weakness. Rather than blink up after him like he had originally planned Corvo drew his crossbow and removed the sleep bolt that was loaded. He loaded an explosive bolt instead and fire at the right leg joint of Stark’s armour.
Vermin free, stark raised his visor catching sight of Corvo working on a crossbow. A list of potential hazards drew to his mind and Tony spun in a wide arc around Corvo's rock.
The arrow fired and with his best aim and five shots, he shot the arrow. It blew and pushed him back, his boosters yet to recover fully. "Going to take more to hit me with a bow at this range" Tony yelled.
DoughGuy
01-07-2013, 10:48 AM
Battle 2 #14
Nodding at his foes challenge Corvo put his crossbow away, reverse gripped his sword and summoned his magic. He crouched and jumped, blinking at the apex, to appear just in front of Stark. Now the man wasn’t spinning wildly he was an easy target and Corvo took advantage of that. His left arm encircled Stark’s neck so Corvo wouldn’t fall in the second gravity reasserted itelf and his right swung the hilt at Stark’s visor.
Danijel
01-07-2013, 11:05 AM
"And my goal is to win this thing.", says Penguin, with an evil grin forming on his face. It was a deception after all. He puts one foot on the ground and uses it to quickly turn towards the black samurai, while having his other leg extended. He was going for the sweep.
[And just like that we’re wrapped up D. I'll get our resident judge to do her thing as soon as she's able. ]
Battle 2 #
Tony saw the man jump but found himself stunned when he was right in front of him. Tony found himself struck in the visor. Her was stronger than Tony could have imagined, visor had caved in enough to ruin the view in his scanners which were already on the fritz. Tony gripped and the man's wrist, waking up and firing his rockets at max as he blow right into the floating rock.
DoughGuy
01-07-2013, 12:25 PM
#16
Corvo grunted as the rock blew to pieces from their impact, unwilling to let go of his target so soon. However the choice was taken from him as the impact fractured his shoulder in addition to dislocating it and his grip loosened. He fell away from Stark into the open air. He glanced around and managed to find a rock within blink range which he blinked onto, clutching his shoulder in pain.
Stark flew up into the air hovering even further away from Corvo, trying his damndest to figure out exactly how Corvo had managed to get the upper hand on him. Before he threw his ruined helmet away he did an internal check of the remaining energy stocks and air. He'd have to speed things up and move aggressively. But first...
He raised both his palms and two powerful beams shot right at Corvo.
DoughGuy
01-08-2013, 03:49 AM
#18
The beams scorched the earth where Corvo had been seconds before as he dived away, digging deep into the rock. However this one was larger and didn’t break into pieces from a single attack. Pushing himself up as pain shot up through his shoulder Corvo noted his foe was finally exposed and vulnerable to his blade. Rather than blink again though he used his windblast to buy some time.
He didn't have his sensors this time but, he could see the distortion of the very air around him. His palms and heels pushed forwards to launch himself backwards to retreat from the blast. His rockets stuttered and he dropped for a moment only to come back up. Struggling to stay up it was clear, that he didn't have the energy to sustain this. He spun low underneath arcing below the rock Corvo stood on.
DoughGuy
01-08-2013, 08:27 AM
#20
On top of the rock Corvo stopped the air blast. He’d pushed himself for this battle and didn’t have too much juice left. Briefly free from Stark’s attacks he sheathed his sword and awkwardly reloaded his pistol with an explosive shot using his knees to grip it. Then, using his foes angle of flight, he judged where he would emerge on the other side of the rock, aimed, and waited.
He'd done the measurements and knew what he had and what he had left. Tony blew right into the base of the deteriorated rock. He powered in deep, pushing with everything his jets had. The rock crumbled but kept its shape, shooting upwards, slamming into a rock the size of two football fields.
Tony used what juice he had to shoot himself onto the bigger rock. He called for his helicopter, just in case.
DoughGuy
01-08-2013, 08:54 AM
#22
Corvo looked around in confusion as the rock began to rumble and move upwards. For the first time all battle he spoke, “Shit.” Quickly he switched his gun for his sword. Above he could see another large rock approaching fast. Hurriedly he ran to the edge of the rock and plunged his sword into its side. Carefully easing himself over the edge he hung himself from the sword, using his feet to secure his place.
#23
Tony lay flat on his stomach, he had used such a great deal of his own physical strength that he found himself struggling for air. Slowly he pulled himself to his knees, his breaths deep, heavy and determined. Feeling some of his composure come back to him he made his way back to his feet. "Whoo! haven't had this much fun in a while!" Tony yelled bouncing on his heels and punching the air.
DoughGuy
01-08-2013, 09:43 AM
#24
Clutching his sword below Corvo was in a much more awkward position. The rock above was slightly large so even if he physically could climb he couldn’t reach the top. Activating his darksight he could see the rock wasn’t too thick and took a risk. Summoning all his remaining magic, his regeneration would be his source now, he forced a blink through the solid rock and appeared in front of Stark with a sonic boom.
25#
Tony Stark was stunned by the sudden appearance of Corvo in front of him but he was genius enough to ensure he wasn't wiped out twice with the same move. Instinct and genius took over and iron man two a run up with his arm raised to catch Corvo in a clothesline. Matching an arm to the face as Corvo had given him.
DoughGuy
01-08-2013, 09:55 AM
#26
Exhausted by the teleport Corvo could not duck the blow completely. The top of his mask hit Stark’s arm and in an ironic twist of fate knocked his own mask off revealing his face. Slightly dizzy from the impact and his previous exertion Corvo nonetheless managed to swing his sword arm around, aiming to hit the back of Stark’s knee as he passed by.
27#
Sparks burst from his knee, sending an electric burst up from his leg through his body, attacking his body constantly. Crying out through gritted teeth Tony through weight into that exact leg, forcing more electricity into his leg. The trade off allowing him to spin and push himself forwards, jumping right at Corvo. Slamming his shoulder into the man's mid section.
DoughGuy
01-08-2013, 10:11 AM
#28
Corvo grunted from the impact, feeling another few ribs break from the iron shod impact. He had been hit in the side, unable to turn to face his foe. In addition his sword arm had been pinned between him and Stark, unable to swing at all. Instead he performed a short range blink, teleporting just above Stark and slammed his sword down at Stark’s back (from a 10 cm height) before falling onto him.
29#
The Helicopter arrived just as Stark's energy reserves started to blink away and one more pulse shot. He couldn't have had more than a miniature left when he was slammed into the ground. Tony cried out and covered his arms over his head as the blade pierced his hammered armour.
The Chopper's guns fired, twin Vulcan cannons shredding the rock they resided on with Tony using his arms to cover his face from being hit.
DoughGuy
01-08-2013, 10:35 AM
#Final Post
Out of energy and unable to blink to the safety of the chopper Corvo rolled off Stark and moved into a standing position. He ran for the edge of the rock, keeping just ahead of the Vulcan cannon trail of gunfire. When he reached the edge he dived over, stabbing his sword into the rock and hanging off it just as he had before. He prayed Stark had fallen to his own machine's guns.
Love Amore
01-08-2013, 08:58 PM
BATTLE #1!
Penguin's foot swept under Afro's legs, right where his feet had been the split second before and directly under where they were now. The attack left Penguin unbalanced and gave Afro the chance to strike out and bring his opponent to the ground. Afro struck Penguin's head with a well placed kick, the blow on it's own would have been damaging enough but it brought the smaller man to the ground and a sickening crunch was heard as the man's brain matter was formally introduced to the floor. Afro walked away victorious.
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Hi y'all, I'm Anna and I'll be your judge for this evening. You can be sure that I'll judge fairly and honestly and to the best of my abilities. May the best writer win!
Dani's's score:
Flow: 25/30
Susan: 30/30
Power: 25/30
Shazzam: 0/10
Pure's score:
Flow: 25/30
Susan: 20/30
Power: 30/30
Shazzam: 10/10 for post #8
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Dani, Pure... Gosh, this was a great battle... Not much else to say, really...
Pure, Afro seemed like a pretty bland character and I'm sure that's not the case... But you did a super job keeping a good balance of power and I liked pretty much all of your attacks.
Dani, I loved how vivid Penguin's character came out, but I had a bit of a hard time visualizing some of the attacks... It could just be my problem but it made it a little harder for me to read the battle.
I really look forward to seeing more from Y'all, and feel free to message me if you have any questions regarding my judgment!
Love Amore
01-09-2013, 04:59 AM
BATTLE #2
After the firestorm, Tony looked around and saw that his opponent was nowhere to be found. He fought to rise and departed so that he. might live to fight another day. Corvo hung to his sword, battered from the explosions, until he could hold on no longer and so lifted himself up and to his feet again. He trembled where he stood but managed to leave the battleground in one piece.
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Hi y'all, I'm Anna and I'll be your judge for this evening. You can be sure that I'll judge fairly and honestly and to the best of my abilities. May the best writer win!
Doughy's score:
Flow: 20/30
Susan: 20/30
Power: 25/30
Shazzam: 10/10 For the post with the rats
Pure's score:
Flow: 20/30
Susan: 30/30
Power: 30/30
Shazzam:
0/10
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This battle was real fun to read, Y'all are getting better. I don't really have any specific notes for either of you, except that rats are icky. ;P
If Y'all have any questions about my judgment feel free to message me, I look forward to seeing more battles from the both of you in the future!
Battle 3
Colosseum
High winds kicked up dust into Afro's hair, swaying it at its centre. Indifferent of the beauty of the ancient ruins, he kept on his slow walk. His hands, closing tighter on his blade as he waited for the next attack, tired of the continuous stream of enemies, the image of the round man still fresh in his mind.
Bee Bear
01-11-2013, 09:14 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #1
Kyuzo's footsteps were silent as he stepped out into the open at the centre of the huge Colosseum. He made no effort to hide himself. His opponent, the dark samurai, must have had some idea that Kyuzo would come for him one day. It was natural. They were both skilled fighters and testing each other would only increase that skill. If they could survive, that is. He drew both swords and stood waiting. “Challenge.”
#3
A twin sword bearer, he hadn't faced one of those since Kuma. It would seem that speed would be his enemy with him needing to make twice as many moves to stay in one piece but with a double handed grip and the length of his blade he had little doubt power was his ally. Afro found himself not wanting to make the first move, instead simply keeping his stance. His breath slow, calm.
Bee Bear
01-11-2013, 09:31 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #2
His cold, expressionless face didn't change as he waited. Kyuzo was a patient man – he wouldn't let the insolence of his opponent get to him. He also wasn't a man of many words, so he wouldn't be repeating his challenge. Instead, he adjusted his grip on the twin blades, strengthened his stance, and prepared for the onslaught – the subtle dance of power and precision that would come.
Two stoic figures, frozen in place as the wind howled in the background. His grip tightened on his blade as he watched the man, barely blinking. He wasn't man off many words, he was barely a man of few words.
"What you wait'n Afro! smoke this fool already!" demanded the voice in his head.
"Shut up" Breathed Afro as he held his stance, thinking about a weakness in the man stance he could exploit .
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#5
Bee Bear
01-11-2013, 11:46 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #3
Barely noticeable, one of Kyuzo's feet slid across the hard dirt ground, widening his stance. The sword in his right hand was raised ever so slightly and the tip pointed directly at Afro Samurai – a clear challenge. A thrill ran down his spine. His opponent was calm. He showed experience, and that was exactly what Kyuzo loved to battle against. “Now,” he said before launching himself forward, swords flashing up towards his throat.
No longer solid but lucid in his stand Afro's pupils twitched left and right, making minuscule darts as the Afro fought an internal battle to taking in every move. Hubris, complacency were not things that were allowed to exist within, only determination to survive and win. At the last moment, Afro lunged forward and past, side stepping his opponents blades, unsheathing his blade, spinning on his heels for a viscous arching strike at the spine.
#7
Bee Bear
01-11-2013, 10:16 PM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #4
Nothing existed in Kyuzo's mind except his swords, his opponent, and the ground beneath his feet. His cool eyes followed Afro Samurai's every movement, and he knew they were still only testing each other when he was easily able to raise one of his blades up behind his back and block the blow. Steel clashed against steel. He twisted on the spot and swung his other sword out in a wide arc, aiming to decapitate.
9/30
Afro's head flung back ever so slightly, eliminating exaggerated movement. Afro took a step back, keeping a sharp eye on his enemy. Kyuzo was quick. Afro's foot, still sliding back had all his weight fall on it before twisting on his heel.
Afro's body swung sharp and heavy. His blade followed, it swung in a near full circle, his blade held hard with a full body swing, using it as a club at Kyuzo's torso.
Bee Bear
01-12-2013, 04:00 PM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #5
Using the wrist of his left hand against the flat edge of his right-hand sword's blade, Kyuzo braced his body and took the blow that would have sliced him in half. It jarred his entire being when their swords connected. His free sword slid up the length of Afro's blade, locking it in place with the other and keeping it secure while he raised a foot and kicked his opponent's midriff with all his strength.
Afro took the impact hard to the chest, hard enough to be launched off his feet. He landed on his side, his blade digging a line into the dry earth before he made his way back to his feet. He slapped his side and chest, clearing the dust off of his body. It seemed the man had some semblance of strength. But how much? Afro wasn't done gauging. He took up his stance once again.
#11
Bee Bear
01-13-2013, 01:19 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #6
Kyuzo wasn't foolish enough to give his opponent the chance to recover. He ran after Afro with both swords raised. Directly in front of him, the blond feigned to the right but slid to the left at the last moment, aiming to create a distraction, while one blade swept low across Afro's feet and the other high by his neck, making it nearly impossible to block both at the same time.
Afro's eyes narrowed. He saw the first attack and stepped lightly towards the right but didn't extend his blade. The switch in direction was impressive, he caught sight of the low swing and found himself on the back foot on the second. Afro's blade stuck into the ground behind him, throwing his weight onto the blade and launching himself into a spinning flip between the two blades, his spinning heel catching Kyuzo across the temple.
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13/30
Bee Bear
01-13-2013, 08:18 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #7
The blow clipped the side of Kyuzo's head, making his stance twist and his ears sing for a moment. Afro's quick reaction was unexpected, but he would adapt. Hastily, the red-coated samurai retreated, jumping backwards to a safe distance. The ruins around them offered some protection, at least. He vaulted to somewhere in the middle of the stands and balanced on a crumbling all. Looking down on Afro, he caught his breath and waited.
15/30
Afro's sheathed his blade, never letting it go.
"I think he's trying to pull a fast one on your black ass. But he doesn't know this is your ground!" his imaginary friend shouted out loud inside of Afro's head.
The Afro's eyes had followed Kyuzo but his feet took him in the left of where the target had turned, before he jumped, slamming his feet from pillar to wall till he was on higher ground.
Bee Bear
01-16-2013, 11:13 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #8
Both of Kyuzo's swords were still in his hands, ready for any attack the dark samurai would launch against him. With careful, calculating eyes, he watched the other's movements. A split second's warning would be all he needed in order to react.
Though his perch on the wall was precarious, Kyuzo felt comfortable. This kind of environment was where he thrived – the challenge brought him alive. “Ready?” he asked, deep voice carrying far.
17/30
Climbing and in the same arc, he managed to gain higher ground where he spotted the high position of his foe. His mind raced for ideas when his imaginary friend drew him from his pointless fretting. Afro dove, aiming down. Not at the hard steel of his opponent's blade but the time worn rock at his feet, his blade cleaving through at an angle before, waiting at the base, his toes stinging from the landing.
Bee Bear
01-17-2013, 09:15 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #9
The ruined wall beneath Kyuzo started to slip and slide away, but it was a trifle – he was already moving, vaulting lightly from perch to perch. But instead of fleeing from his enemy, he moved downwards, swords crossed in front of his face. He would go on the offensive – he would overwhelm Afro with his speed and his double blades. From a height, he fell upon him and sliced at his face.
19/30
It wasn't what Afro wanted, Kyuzo had already proven himself strong enough to handle Afro's own strength, which was enough to cut through steel, rock and bone like butter.
But that was with his feet planted on the ground. Could Kyuzo do the same while airborne?
Afro watched the man move, taking a light step back before striking, his own long blade swung hard and heavy at the nimble samurai, his teeth gritted with effort.
Bee Bear
01-18-2013, 10:36 PM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #10
Kyuzo could do nothing but catch himself on Afro's blade with his own twin swords. When they connected with jarring crash, the red-coated samurai's entire body shook with the impact and he nearly lost his grip when his feet hit the ground.
He realized Afro had probably been thinking to catch him in the air where he was vulnerable. That obviously backfired, because the momentum Kyuzo carried with him from his leap was immense.
21/30
Impact of the blades clashing together was heavy enough to make Afro's heart skip a beat. To his amazement the man wasn't blown away, instead his weight still bore down on him mercilessly. His body tensed under the impact. The soft and beneath his feet giving way, ploughing his rubber souled Geta sandals into the soil. His wrists aching, his fingers bruised from the impact he pushed forward, throwing his back into a mighty push.
Bee Bear
01-21-2013, 03:27 PM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #11
Surprise was written clearly on Kyuzo's normally dour face as Afro threw him back. The scrawny samurai was stronger than he looked. Kyuzo used the push to get into a backwards somersault. Easily, he landed beside the piece of wall Afro'd sliced off. With a grunt he kicked it, sending it flying towards Afro. He raced after it, intending to use the distraction to get past Afro's defenses. His swords flashed as he closed in.
23/30
Kyuzo had some power. Afro was impressed that he was able to launch the rock.
Keeping his strength based strategy, Afro took a forward step, slamming his blade right through the rock with a swing of his blade. As the blade split right through the rock he heard his imaginary friend cry out, his eyes widened as he caught sight of Kyuzo. Time seemed to slow as he fought to pull back his stance.
Bee Bear
01-22-2013, 01:11 PM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #12
Kyuzo continued to rush in even when he realized Afro had discovered his plan. Three strides, two strides, and then he was on top of the enemy. His blades cut through the air, coming in on Afro from opposite directions to intersect in the middle – the middle being his torso.
DoughGuy
01-25-2013, 11:11 AM
Post #13 (Yes I'm Pure, no don't ask questions)
Afro found himself on the back foot, whatever defensive momentum he'd attempted was too late as both blades came at him.
He could only go back but not fast enough.
Afro ducked back throwing his head, tilting and throwing himself back into a flip with raised knees.
The pain of the blades which cut his raised legs aimed at blocking at the hilt of the blade kicked out at Kyuzo's face for a dropkick.
Bee Bear
02-01-2013, 11:38 AM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #13
He saw it coming, but at such close range, Kyuzo could do little to block. He angled his body to the side to try and avoid the worst of the kick. Afro's foot grazed his temple and made his head violently snap back. Even a glancing blow was devastating when delivered with such power. He grunted and staggered backwards. Attempting to protect himself, he raised his swords and slashed blindly at Afro to buy time.
27/30
They were both at too high a level to be hurt by wild attacks, even at his fatigued and injured state, he managed to parry and glance at the wild swings. He blade spinning and twisting with the sole purpose of glancing away, never directly blocking. The cut on his legs were deep enough to cut at the strength in his stance.
He glared still parrying on the spot, waiting for a opportunity to counter.
Bee Bear
02-09-2013, 03:33 PM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #14
Kyuzo's stalling tactic worked – he was able to recover enough to right himself and reclaim his balance. His lips curved downward in concentration and purpose as he inched closer to Afro, his twin blades still keeping the dark samurai's sword busy by thrusting and slicing at him, seemingly at random.
When he saw an opening, he lunged forward and shot a foot out at Afro's injury, throwing all of his weight into the kick.
29/30
From the moment he'd been cut he'd expected some kind of attack on his two new weaknesses. He saw the lunge and lacked the physical strength to power back, instead, with gritted teeth, readied his blade for the counter.
The heavy kick landed and pain exploded into his brain as his leg was forced to twist, his entire form twisted with the impact, spinning him and his blade which slashed up at the samurai's stomach.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 12:12 AM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
1/30
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips eyes slowly slid open. His nose took in a deep inhale and his large hand rose up to clasp his pale blemished skin. “Jesus christ, my head’s pounding, what did Sjin put in my drink last night.” Shaking his head, Sips arose from his resting place, and then nearly fell back down again in shock.
“I don’t remember building these floating mountains or rocks?” Sips scratched his head in confusion, where was he?
(I meant to the challenged not challenger, >< Oh well)
Sips vs. Dumbledore
2/30
1/15
Hallelujah Mountains
From the highest perch of the ocean of flying rocks poured, onto it's surface then filled and rose up, rising and solidifying into the height and form of Albus Dumbledore.
The caw of Fawkes , his Phoenix echoed through the air as he sailed above him, spinning around Dumbledore's opponent. "It would seem as though I were the one caught behind schedule."
With a pop and a wisp Dumbledore stood face to face with his opponent.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 10:55 AM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
3/30
2/15
Hallelujah Mountains
((Sorry, I misunderstood :sorry:)
Sips fell back in surprise as the tall bearded Albus Dumbledore appeared in front of him. Sips sprawled onto his back and slowly scrabbled away, his eyes locked onto the wizards. “Jesus Christ Beard-guy, you scared the sh*t outta me!”
Sips stood and brushed down his Sips Co. work uniform “Who are you anyway? You look like Sjin after a month without shaving…God, do you know how hairy Sjin gets?! Jesus Christ…”
(My Bad, not yoursl)
Sips vs. Dumbledore
4/30
2/15
Hallelujah Mountains
"A rather strong mouth you have there." Dumbledore said, his voice soft and slow, the voice of a well aged man. "You would do best to prepare yourself. These bones may be old and worn but this wand..." Dumbledore fell silent, raising his wand. "...does not bare the same weight as these bones."
Dumbledore stepped back from his opponent, letting his shoulders drop. "I will wait."
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 01:43 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
5/30
3/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips scratched his head in confusion. This old man wanted to fight him? “Hey, Mr. Beard-guy. I dunno who you are but if you bring your dusty old robe over here, I’m gonna take that fupping wand and shove it up Sjin’s ass…and Sjin doesn’t wipe.”
Sips stood defiantly, although he then stammered out. “Well…only because I don’t pay him enough to buy roll, but that’s not the point you joker!”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
6/30
3/15
Hallelujah Mountains
The time period of old where wand matched wand seemed so far away now. Now Dumbledore was up against, if he said so himself, strange creatures.
How odd had the horse like creature upon the moon been? And now this particular muggle of sorts.
Dumbledore's robes weren't the most intimating, all proof seemed to show themselves in the man's defiance. "It would seem, words do not suffice. Wingardium leviosa" he breathed, his wand aimed high.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 05:21 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
7/30
4/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore raised his wand to the sky and stared at Sips, muttering something under his breath. The old man seemed to carry a stature of power and pride that most did not; this unnerved Sips slightly, but he still kept a cool head.
Sips carefully moved his hand towards his belt; drew his sword ‘Bane of Atropos’; then wiped his brow. His head still pounding, Sips yelled up to Dumbledore:
“What are you doing Beard-Dude?...”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
8/30
4/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore didn't say a word in responce instead he kept his wand skywards, twisting his wrist as his entire arm trembled.
A massive shadow well over the pair of them. "If you must know young man, I would have avert your attention skywards. ", a floating boulder the size of a Golf Mini hovered over head, with Dumbledore pointing his wand right at it. "And now I let it go" Dumbledore muttered, a devious smile forming.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 07:12 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
9/30
5/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips followed Dumbledore as his arm quivered and twisted sharply. The sweat continued to pour off of Sips’ head. As Dumbledore began to speak, Sips followed his words and his eyes slowly lifted towards the heavens. His heart skipped a beat.
Above Sips sat a boulder the size of a car quaintly resting in mid-air, ready to drop and slay Sips. “Well, that’s not good…” Sips stammered. “You wouldn't drop that on me, would you?…”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
10/30
5/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore let his arm drop, "Unfortunately, young one. The duels of my day were such, all duels involving the use of the Eldar wand, the most powerful wand there is. Goodbye."
The rock wobbled but didn't fall, it was the Hallelujah mountains after all. there'd never been any chance of it falling, not there and not with a 'lifting' spell.
It was a decoy.
"Bombarda!" A crashing force shot from his wand, targeting Sips' chest.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 07:39 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
11/30
6/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips flew backwards, falling off of the platform of mossy rock that both of the warriors had been standing on and landing below onto another larger but stooped platform. The breath flew out of the Canadian man’s lungs and Sips had to take a few deep breaths to recover.
Standing weakly, Sips brushed his clothes and picked up his sword again. “Alright Mother-trucker, it’s show time.” Grabbing onto the nearest vine, Sips began to climb.
Sips vs. Dumbledore
12/30
6/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore didn't have the vitality to keep apparating, he only a few good aparatoins in him.
Instead he took his time moving to the edge.
As he watched his enraged opponent climb. He mused on his youth and how he himself could have done such too.
His wand lifted and aimed at the larger platfrom from which Sips had started to climb from, his lips muttering a massive spell as his flourished in wide arcs.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 09:28 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
13/30
7/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips continued climbing up the vine at a good pace; the young Canadian man turned his head upwards and spotted Dumbledore’s lips moving rapidly, his want curling and swishing about as if caught in a hurricane. “Oh no, not again you Joker, or I’ll sue!” Sips yelled up the old man before continuing upwards.
Sips had almost made it to the top by now and Dumbledore had shown no signs of stopping. “I mean it!”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
14/30
7/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore kept spinning his wand, his arm spinning around his body,
Bright flame swirled around him spreading wide floating down before wrapping itself around the the vines.
Dumbledore himself apparated to a massive platform below, waiting.
Things seemed too simple for the wizened old man as he waited down below, waiting to 'catch' Sips
on the way down. His last battle had been nothing like this.
His opponent was nothing like his former love, Grindelwald.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 10:49 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
15/30
8/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips continued climbing until he spotted a bright light in the corner of his vision. As he turned to look at where it was coming from, he saw a huge ball of flame engulfing Dumbledore. “Aw sweet!” Sips cheered, punching his fist in the air, until he saw that Dumbledore simply disappeared, there were no remains.
Sips looked to the right and left, then straight down, looking for Dumbledore.
“Hey Beard-Dude, what’re you doing?!”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
16/30
8/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Flame shot right up from his wand, wrapping itself around the vines with the sole intent of burning right through the vines. Dumbledore, raised his concentration, raising the intensity of the flame to try bring the man down. "You have great potential", the old man murmured mostly to himself.
Death of Korzan
02-12-2013, 11:10 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
17/30
9/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips looked down at Dumbledore as his flame magic whipped at the vine that Sips was standing on. “What an asshole!” Sips shouted, kicking at the arcane flame that was now burning through the thick vine slowly but surely. ‘It’s not that far to fall…’
Sips took the ‘Bane of Atropos’ in his left hand and swung the vine to the right, when it flicked back, he jumped, sword pointed down.
“I’m coming Beard-Dude!”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
18/30
9/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips looked down at Dumbledore as his flame magic whipped at the vine that Sips was standing on.
It seemed the boy's manner would never be something Dumbledore would ever grow accustomed to. "Beard guy" seemed to earn pause from the old man.
Dumbledore backed up but not fast enough, it only served to be enough to avoid the blade before Sips landed on him and the two bodies collided. Dumbledore's bones, long worn screamed bloody murder, ribs cracked and bruised as he rolled away from sips to try get further away.
Death of Korzan
02-13-2013, 12:01 AM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
19/30
10/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips landed on top of the old Wizard with a huge crash; he was sure that his left shoulder had been dislocated and at least two of his ribs were cracked. The Canadian doubled over in pain.
“God damn, that was a lot further than I thought.” Sips took his good arm and reached out, grabbing his sword which had missed target and clattered on the floor. Using the sword, Sips slowly pushed himself up.
Sips vs. Dumbledore
20/30
10/15
Hallelujah Mountains
There was no chance the old man was going to make it to his feet before the young man, not a chance in hell, let alone distract himself from the pain long enough to apparate without the risk of leaving pieces of himself behind.
Instead he rolled onto his side repeating the simple spell he'd used before "Bombarda!" Aiming it at the ground that surrounded the blade that supported the young man.
Death of Korzan
02-13-2013, 07:59 AM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
21/30
11/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips’ sword flew out violently from underneath him at the utterance of the spell. It launched across the huge platform and part of it tilted off of the stone and in mid-air. “Jesus Christ Beard-Dude, are you trying to kill me?” Sips asked sarcastically.
He began to crawl towards the sword, each movement racking him with eye-watering pain. His ribs hurt when he breathed and his shoulder when he moved his arm.
“Never trust Old-Dudes.”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
22/30
11/15
Hallelujah Mountains
It appeared Dumbledore had bought himself the time and distance he needed to fight and pull himself up, it was the same painful gruelling process naturally associated with being old. He swung his body around his heavy robes which weighed him down. His arms spread, his knees spread, his butt raised, then his arms straightened then one one knee, then another and then he pushed himself up to his feet, his head rushing. "Too fast"
Death of Korzan
02-13-2013, 03:30 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
23/30
12/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips continued to slowly crawl towards his blade, his knees dragging across the hard stone and his ribs screaming pain across his body as he breathed hard. His eyes watered and his lips curled in a look of almost hatred. Finally reaching his sword, Sips pushed himself up using it’s tip.
Turning to the ancient Wizard, Sips raised his blade with his good arm; his eyes squinted and his lips clamped.
“Let’s dance, Beard-Dude.”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
24/30
12/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore had managed to get himself to his feet but his head was reeling, the difficult weakness of his battle base was, and for the last few decades, age but death was never an issue for himself, an acceptable end result though this was of course not the time for him to die.
Instead he shut his eyes and tried to slow his breath, his wand held tight as he waited for the young man.
Death of Korzan
02-14-2013, 08:06 AM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
25/30
13/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips stumbled towards the ancient Wizard. Still clutching his ribs, the Canadian man was grumbling things and wincing in pain, giving him an odd facial expression that would've made people watching the fight cry with laughter.
When he had reached a close distance to the Wizard, Sips lifted his arm and swung in a downwards path. His sword arm was too heavily thrown however and Sips tumbled over, his hand wrapping around Dumbledore’s long Beard.
Sips vs. Dumbledore
26/30
13/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore had been waiting for the big strike from the odd man's sword, it didn't come. It appeared as though his opponent as was fatigued as he was.
His eyes opened wide in surprise when the man grabbed his beard.
At first Dumbledore pulled back, retreating before his head rush forward to collide with the Canadian's.
Death of Korzan
02-14-2013, 12:01 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
27/30
14/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Sips cried out as Dumbledore’s head collided powerfully against his own. “Jesus Christ Beard-Dude!” Sips continued to pull on Dumbledore’s long grey beard, trying to pull himself up. “God damn it, do you ever wash this thing? It’s nearly as greasy as Sjin’s hair.”
Sips managed to move his dislocated arm and place it on the floor. He cried out in pain as he pushed himself up, before head-butting the Wizard in return.
”Take that.”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
28/30
14/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledrore lent forwards to try recover from the pain of being tugged on continuously, his entire face was on fire from the jaw and up, leaving no room for words.
He whistled loudly and the caw of his bird Fawkes could be heard. Its talons out, it swooped around to try claw at the young man's face.
Death of Korzan
02-14-2013, 01:31 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
29/30
15/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore’s phoenix flew down and his long talons ripped at Sips’ face. A huge crescent-shaped cut appeared underneath Sips’ eye; he reeled in pain, but raised his good hand and swung in a feeble attempt to hit the Wizard in the face with his large pale hand.
“Come on Beard-Dude. Fight back! Do some of that cool Magic stuff!” Sips yelled over the top of the cawing Phoenix who continued to claw him.
“Come on!”
Sips vs. Dumbledore
30/30
15/15
Hallelujah Mountains
Dumbledore's head twisted to the side, a tooth hanging loose inside his mouth, anger pulsed through him, making him grit his teeth in frustration.
His body wanted to swing fast and hard to strike back but that clearly wasn't happening, not with his age.
Instead his arm came up, his wand aiming directly at the man's torso as he cried out. "Stuperfry"
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Kakashi stepped into the hellish world of the School Yard, the chilling snow of the destroyed arena. He's never been before, the powerful jitsu of the arena of the world surrounding him. The powerful magic which encased what had once been a gorgeous Russian school for the best of the best.
It seemed ironic that now it had become a nightmare world, stuck in a solid moment of time. The dead unable to stay dead as time rotated over and over again. Now it would be the tool used to discover the best of the best within the ranks of the multidimensional worlds surrounding them.
Fighters and creatures he had never met before and fighters he'd never dreamed to meet, even in his world. He mused on to himself as he jumped down from the roof, making his way down the burning stairway and jumping out a window to the open, snow caked, courtyard.
He bit his thumb cutting the front with his teeth before marking symbols into the air and placing both hands on the soil, three puffs of smoke burst up around him.
He didn't bother to wait for the smoke to clear before he started talking. "Your time is limit, sever hours(Seven posts), one shall survive and find what they seek in this world. Use what power you have, using it to leave would lack a point, waisting what little time you have left" Kakashi clapped his palms together and disappeared in a cloud of smoke.
(Seven posts each)
(Pure this in your post)
Arihime Vs Naruto Vs Ulqueera
The School Yard
X/7
X/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
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Remember, have fun!
Bee Bear
02-15-2013, 01:27 PM
(Afro Samurai vs Kyuzo)
Post #15
Kyuzo gritted his teeth but made no sound as pain lanced through his body. The blow'd connected, cutting through his flesh like a hot knife through butter. Blood spilled from his belly – he could already feel its heat seeping through his clothes and down over his legs.
He wouldn't make it - he could tell. Death was approaching, but he refused to go alone.
His swords came down on Afro for the last time.
Bee Bear
02-15-2013, 02:07 PM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
X/7
X/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Ulquiorra Ciffer's lithe, bat-like form stood immobile in the snow. He paid no notice to the horrors taking place in front of him, the tragic events destined to repeat in an endless loop. Instead, his attention was entirely focused on the two others who had been summoned with him.
The ones he would kill.
His long black tail curved loosely in front of his body while his baleful green eyes moved from Natuto to Ahriman.
DoughGuy
02-16-2013, 03:48 AM
Arihime Vs Naruto Vs Ulqueera
The School Yard
1/7
2/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
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“Are the screams of the dying not music to your ears?” Ahriman laughed, lifting his arms up into the sky. “Their pain and agony is a beautiful melody, a tribute to the futility of human life.” He breathed deeply as a nearby boy was decapitated by flying debris, blood exploding from the remains of his neck. His laughter continued as he turned back to his foes, “Come you worthless fools, come join their dirge.”
DoughGuy
02-16-2013, 10:11 AM
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From the ceiling of the car park a long, black tentacle of shadow writhed into life. Shikaku stood on the tip of the tentacle absently reading a scroll as it lowered itself down. He ignored the countless expensive cars that were stacked into the massive structure, his wife wouldn't want something so noisy about the house.
At last the tentacle reached the middlemost mechanical arm, gently touching it and stopping its descent. Shikaku stepped off and the tentacle promptly disappeared into nothingness. "Time for some legends to be born." he said to the empty, apart from the cars, structure.
He bit his thumb cutting the front with his teeth before marking symbols into the air and placing both hands on the steel. Three puffs of smoke burst up around him on the ring of empty spaces, equidistant from each.
He didn't bother to wait for the smoke to clear before he started talking. "Your time is limit, sever hours(Seven posts), one shall survive and find what they seek in this world. Use what power you have, using it to leave would lack a point, wasting what little time you have left" Shikaku clapped his palms together and disappeared in a cloud of smoke.
(Seven posts each)
(Pure this in your post)
Xamnas, Kadaj, Unknown
Car park of the Future
X/7
X/21
Posting Order
Xamnas
Kadaj
Unknown
Jacogos
02-17-2013, 03:03 AM
With his sword stuck in Kyuzo’s torso and his leg horribly crippled Afro could do nothing but stare at Kyuzo’s blades as they fell upon him. “You got your black ass kicked Afro.” his imagination said just as the blades sliced deep into his neck, decapitating him. Kyuzo staggered back from the corpse, blood cascading from his side. He dropped to his knees and nodded at his fallen foe in respect before closing his eyes and collapsing to the ground in death.
Judges: Jacogos/DoughGuy
SQJPure
Power: 28 of 30 points.
Susan: 30 of 30 points.
Flow: 24 of 30 points.
Bee Bear
Power: 30 of 30 points.
Susan: 29 of 30 points.
Flow: 29 of 30 points.
Shizam (10 points) goes to Post #30 – Bee Bear. What a way to end it!
TOTALS:
Pure: 82
Bee: 98
Winner: Bee bear
As far as the judging goes, the whole fight went rather smoothly, very few hiccups and nothing that completely derailed the battle. But then, that’s to be expected from our founding father and fellow judge xD
Now Pure: your only real problem was a few clarity issues that detracted from your flow. Most of the time it was simply wording/sentence structure that just left one or both of us scratching our heads. Once or twice, though, it was simply not taking your opponents attack/reaction into consideration, at least from our point of view.
Then, in post #76 of the thread, you had an auto-hit. While it might’ve just been a typo, it still counted and we docked you for it.
Bee: For the most part, as you can tell from your score, you performed admirably and nearly flawlessly. The two points you lost were nit-picks on our parts, mainly; there was a run-on sentence that interrupted our reading and a moment where your samurai acted very un-samurai-like, but otherwise, your writing was flawless. That, coupled with Pure’s small mistakes won you the match.
As I said though, you both performed very well. Pure, taking a moment to re-read your AND your opponent’s posts or having someone else look over it might help your flow a bit better. You play your characters well; just remember take a moment with your posts to see if you can explain something more simply. It should help.
Thank you guys for a wonderful fight, and sorry for such a long delay :sweat: Entirely my own fault. Happy Smutting!
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
1/7
3/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Naruto stared at the carnage around him, jumping up and away into the jet's cabin, he screamed as he watched the horror of the world around him unable to help as the carnage repeated itself.
He screamed.
His cry visceral and heavy with emotion as his eyes reddened and fangs formed. What ever kindness he'd once thrived upon withered and disappeared, peeling away along with his skin, leaving only blood, red replacing once pale skin.
Bee Bear
02-20-2013, 04:02 PM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
2/7
4/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Naruto's transformation had even less of an impact on Ulquiorra's apathetic thoughts than the dying children. Deciding Ahriman was a bigger threat than a mindless monster, he turned to face his old foe. "Again you mock me, trash," he scowled.
In a flash of sonido he vanished only to appear directly in front of him, a stiff hand extended to pierce his chest. His black, clawed fingers were aimed directly at one of Ahriman's hearts.
DoughGuy
02-20-2013, 10:29 PM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
2/7
5/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Ahriman was intrigued by Naruto’s transformation, “Well what do we have here? Is the horror too much, has your fear become too great? Have you let the warp into your soul?” His chuckle was cut off by Ulquiorra’s movement. Ahriman leapt backwards and summoned a powerful kine shield to block Ulquiorra’s attack, “I was talking scum.” he growled. Pointing his staff at Ulquiorra he released a Bolt of Change at the man’s head.
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
2/7
6/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Kurama's evil charka put him in control, he gave a thunderous howl.
His head weaved from side to side as his mouth widened.
His head stopped weaving, facing the pair as they fought as though he wasn't there. Balls of black and white charka formed into his mouth. The ball was small but top of the plane crumpled under the pressure. He swallowed it and spat it out launching a large wave at both fighters.
Bee Bear
02-24-2013, 11:39 AM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
3/7
7/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Ulquiorra wasn't bothered. He tilted his head to the side, dodging the Bolt of Change by millimeters while he kept an eye on the blast sent their way by Naruto. A soft chuffing noise blew from his black lips and he used a single flap of his mighty wings to propel himself to the left, placing Ahriman directly between him and the blast. Wordlessly he kicked at Ahriman, intending to launch him into it.
DoughGuy
02-24-2013, 12:47 PM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
3/7
7/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Watching the kick move towards him Ahriman simply smiled and tapped the ground with his staff. Instantly the dirt below disappeared and Ahriman dropped down, the kick passing just over his head. “Enjoy the afterlife.” he said to Ulquiorra, chuckling as the blast passed overhead. Turning to face the direction Naruto was in he tapped the earth with his staff again and sent a large stone spike flying through the ground straight at him.
Bee Bear
02-25-2013, 03:59 PM
Sips vs. Dumbledore
The stunning spell hit Sips square in the chest and he was instantly knocked unconscious. His limp body fell forward right on top of Dumbledore. Unable to bear his weight, the older man was pushed backwards. His wand arm, awkwardly caught between Sips' body and his own, twisted as he tried to recover and the Elder Wand slipped from between his fingers.
Unable to catch himself, Dumbledore stumbled until one of his feet took a step and touched nothing but thin air. Wandless, he couldn't Apparate away or do anything to stop himself from falling.
So the greatest wizard of his age was killed – by slipping off the edge of the Hallelujah Mountains and landing on a floating rock hundreds of feet below in a pile of broken limbs and splattered blood.
Safely sleeping on the mossy ground way up above, Sips lay victorious.
Winner: Sips
Scores
Power: 20/30
Flow: 12/20
Susan: 7/20
Shazzam: 0/10
Total: 39
Death of Korzan
Power: 18/30
Flow: 10/30
Susan: 29/30
Shazzam: 10/10 for post #119
Total: 57
Winner: Death of Korzan
Notes
Doughguy and I will be your judges today. If you have any questions or concerns about the final verdict, please contact us both through PM. Thank you.
Congratulations, DoK, on your win. But let's not beat about the bush. Although this was a fun battle, there were some rather big issues. Let's start with Pure.
Although you're normally the forerunner when it comes to Susan, this time you clearly had some trouble. Now, we understand it was difficult to balance the power of the two opponents, but that doesn't excuse some rather glaring mistakes you made while portraying Dumbledore's character.
I know the Harry Potter fandom well and can say with certainty that he wouldn't have been the first one to attack. In fact, he would have at least tried to talk things through at the beginning. Dumbledore was a patient, kind character, not a braggart who would lord his amazing powers over someone who was – for all intents and purposes – a muggle.
Also, throughout the battle you mentioned how old and feeble Dumbledore is. It might be true that he was an elderly man, but even at the end he was remarkably strong and durable. Not even the poison he had to drink could prevent him from Apparating both himself and Harry back to Hogwarts.
Still on Susan; you seemed to disregard any kind of dialogue despite the fact that your writing is at its best when you have your characters talk. It would have been a good way to make up some Susan points and we advise that you try to do more of it in your future battles.
Another thing I have to point out: Despite how out of place it seemed considering Dumbledore's personality, you did a good job in the beginning of attacking Sips and keeping your Power balanced. You kept things moving along. However, later on some of your posts were nothing more than a description of him climbing to his feet. I'm sure you can understand how bad that was for overall Power points.
This is where your troubles also came in, DoK. Throughout the entire battle (with the exception of perhaps 3 posts) your character didn't do much of anything. He didn't dodge, attack or move when he clearly could have. You need to work on using the world count limit better – getting your character to do more instead of just reacting to what your opponent has done.
Your Flow suffered greatly for this reason. Most of the time half of your post was used simply to describe what Pure did. Flow is just that – two writers' posts flowing into each other to become one. Having to read what happened twice made it difficult and awkward to read. Luckily, it's an easy mistake to fix. All you need is some practice.
Still with you, DoK, great job on keeping Sips in character. He was a lot of fun to read with all his wisecracks and swearing. Also, you did well to stay withing the word count limit. It's nice to see. You too, Pure.
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
2/7
6/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Kurama's head twitched down at the earth, his Charka bunching before he sprung upwards with the stone spike rising up after him. Kurama rage grew as he devoured more of Naruto's fury, pushing him.
Thick molten charka hands extended sinking right into the earth right back at Ahriman in an attempt to slam shut over the man and throw him at Ulquiorra like a missile.
The entire time he grew constantly, his fifth tail forming.
Bee Bear
02-28-2013, 09:52 AM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
4/7
10/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
To avoid the attacks being launched at him, Ulquiorra bent his knees and jumped straight up into their air. A few flaps of his wings got him high above the ground in the blink of an eye. Hovering there above the butchery of useless human lives, he raised his right hand and extended its index finger towards the enemies.
"This is your end," he said calmly as he shot a huge cero blast towards them.
DoughGuy
02-28-2013, 10:51 AM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
4/7
11/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Ahriman flexed his power and lifted himself into the air in an imitation of flight. He flew out and to the left of hole, dodging both attacks. He laughed as the hands chasing him were obliterated by the cero. “Let me thank you for saving me gnat.” he yelled, mentally lashing out at Ulquiorra with a sensory overload. “And let me punish you dog.” he hissed at Naruto, launching a bolt of change at him.
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
4/7
12/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Kurama's mouth widened his charka growing quickly as his own form grew, infuriated by the cero and now facing Ahriman's bolt.
As the sixth tail, formed his chakra hands regrew digging deep into the earth, raising up half of the court yard itself. It created a wall of concrete which caught the bolt.
His massive twin palms tightened on the fast crumbling rock before he threw the slab at the air born pair.
Bee Bear
03-04-2013, 12:12 PM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
5/7
13/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Ulquiorra knew how to deal with the pain Ahriman was inflicting on his senses. Disregarding all else, he drew his immense spiritual pressure together, concentrating it into a dense, almost impenetrable wall of energy around him. Despite his resolve, the pain hampered him yet it still held firm when the slab of stone Karuma tossed at them hit. It fell harmlessly away to reveal Ulquiorra holding a green bolt which he threw at Ahriman.
DoughGuy
03-05-2013, 12:37 AM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
5/7
14/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
Ahriman turned to the slab and opened his mouth. The Breath of Chaos spewed forth and hit the concrete, corroding a hole in its side. Ahriman flew through this hole, continuing to vomit forth the breath until he passed through the other side. Just as he emerged Ulquiorra’s Lanza collided with his left arm in a massive green explosion. As the light faded a one-armed Ahriman dropped from the air and slammed into the ground.
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
The School Yard
5/7
15/21
Posting Order
Bee
Dough
Pure
A rain of debris fell down over Kurama. His fury and frustration bubbled over him like the charka skin which coated Naruto's body before solid bone extended over the charka shell, his charka far higher and concentrated than only a moment ago.
Positive and black charka formed inside of Karuma's mouth, massive, dense.
His head and body turned to Ulquiorra before he disappeared into the building in a burst of speed, swallowing the immense charka.
Bee Bear
03-09-2013, 07:03 PM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
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In one of his signature moves, Ulquiorra dove down from a height onto Ahriman's body, going clawed feet first and intending to gouge out the man's guts. And even as he fell through the air, he was looking towards the building Karuma had disappeared into. He had his right hand raised and pointed towards it - a massive black cero charged at the tip and released moments later to obliterate everything in its path.
DoughGuy
03-10-2013, 07:10 AM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
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Ahriman’s body shifted ever so slightly before an enormous firestorm erupted above him, reaching to engulf Ulquiorra. The sorcerer himself shot forward, fire trailing his injured body, as he fled from his opponents. “Pain and misery feed my strength.” he hissed, “I have toyed with you only long enough to satisfy my amusement.” As the scene reset Ahriman reached out with his power towards the crashed plane, metal groaning as it slowly began to move.
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
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Karuma tore his way up the stairway, his anticipation growing constantly as he speed through, the weight of his charka crushing tile and concrete with every touch of the stairs.
Karuma sensed his target coming towards him and sped up reaching the top floor before bursting out of the tile roof with a mighty leap, soaring high.
The tailed beast ball, well stored, burst out of his mouth at Ulquiorra at near point blank range.
Bee Bear
03-14-2013, 12:52 PM
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
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Even Ulquiorra's speed wasn't enough to dodge. He turned into the blast, face blank, while a Lanza del Relámpago formed in both his hands. Even as his torso, legs and wings were partially destroyed by the blast, he raised one green spear and shoved it point blank into Karuma's gaping maw while the other was sent soaring through the air at Ahriaman.
I've not forgotten about you, trash, he thought to himself.
DoughGuy
03-14-2013, 01:08 PM
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Slowly but surely the wreckage of the plane rose into the air, corpses tumbling from holes in its sides. Spinning around Ahriman threw his remaining arm forward and launched the plane at his foes. The giant wreck exploded with warp fire as it flew, a metal corpse revived to take another 2 lives to its hell. “Let the suffering of a hundred fools burn you maggots in the fire of the Eye.” Ahriman hissed.
Ahriman Vs Naruto Vs Ulquiorra
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Karuma's armour was pierced, creating a burst of blood when Lanza tore through his armour, but within a second the armour reformed and his chakra grew as he fell. Separating him from Ulquiorra when the plane exploded.
The impact tore at his armour but it did not slow the larger of all his beast balls combined. Kurama felt Naruto pulling back, the black fury rejected by the boy's light. Kurama roared firing one last time.
Originally posted by Dough Guy
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From the ceiling of the car park a long, black tentacle of shadow writhed into life. Shikaku stood on the tip of the tentacle absently reading a scroll as it lowered itself down. He ignored the countless expensive cars that were stacked into the massive structure, his wife wouldn't want something so noisy about the house.
At last the tentacle reached the middlemost mechanical arm, gently touching it and stopping its descent. Shikaku stepped off and the tentacle promptly disappeared into nothingness. "Time for some legends to be born." he said to the empty, apart from the cars, structure.
He bit his thumb cutting the front with his teeth before marking symbols into the air and placing both hands on the steel. Three puffs of smoke burst up around him on the ring of empty spaces, equidistant from each.
He didn't bother to wait for the smoke to clear before he started talking. "Your time is limit, sever hours(Seven posts), one shall survive and find what they seek in this world. Use what power you have, using it to leave would lack a point, wasting what little time you have left" Shikaku clapped his palms together and disappeared in a cloud of smoke.
(Seven posts each)
(Put this in your post)
Xamnas, Kadaj, Joker
Car park of the Future
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