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Atethecat
11-16-2015, 02:53 AM
You wake up, cold, burned with the unfamiliar sensation of ice. You look around to see nothing, but a ghostly forest full of the blackened tree corpses of what could be the only thing recognizable in this bleak land of ice. There is no mountains, the only land you see beyond that of what is right in front of you in snow. But then you hear voices, voices of sorrow, confusion and dread. The faces, the faces of mortal men and women. Where are you? And more importantly, can you escape?

Races

Humans

One of the most diverse and ambitious races to inhabit the Mortal Earth. Humans may not live as long as many other races, but indeed they have the potential to be the most powerful and more importantly dangerous.

Elves

Elves are the longest lived and wisest of the races to inhabiy the Mortal Earth. The elves may not have the numbers as many other races, but they compensate for it with their knowledge and acquired skills on the battlefield.

Dwarves

The dwarves are another widepsread race, they are the kings of the craft and skilled with smithing and forging. Dwarves are shorter than both humans and elves. Dwarves are generally considered stereotypically outgoing and low of tolerance.

Fenri

A race of brutal, beserking lupine-like folk that were native to the Realm of Hel, but broke into the Mortal Earth thousands of years ago. They largely live as mercenaries or hired assistance under dwarves or men. They resemble giant wolf-headed humanoids covered in mangy fur.

Goliaths

A race of giants, inhibiting the forests and deserted villages of other races. Ranging from seven to twelve feet tall. Considered rugged, savage and wild yet stunningly beautiful and below average in intelligence. Goliaths prefer to carry thick clubs and gigantic swords which are too big to be wielded by men or dwarves.

Mice

Mice are small creatures with bald tails, paws and ears. Despite popular belief by many races, mice do indeed speak and they are not particularly fond of cheese. The biggest misconception is that mice are not brave creatures, a single mouse has the willpower to defeat a dragon if properly encouraged to.


Rules

*No Godmodding
*Be polite
*No spamming or Trolling
*Have Fun!

CS

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Kiki
11-17-2015, 01:14 AM
Hi there!
This looks great so far, but might I suggest a few things?
Your intro is well done, but perhaps putting a few more details about plot, direction, etc? It's nice for players to know what you have in store for them. Also possibly putting all the races into a spoiler tag so that it doesn't have to take up for much room of your intro post might be another idea.
Your CS looks great, and awesome work on putting the rules for potential players. C:

Good luck with the recruitment! Here are some links you might find useful.

Take a look at the Roleplay of the Week thread (http://role-player.net/forum/showthread.php?t=59571)! If you need a banner for a submission for RP of the Week, then check out the Banner Shop (http://role-player.net/forum/showthread.php?t=18912)!

You can also look at the Roleplaying Games Directory (http://role-player.net/forum/showthread.php?t=40645) to advertise your RP. Staff would be happy to help you advertise your Roleplay both here (http://role-player.net/forum/showthread.php?t=3975) and in the RPA Tribune (http://role-player.net/forum/showthread.php?t=18026).

Any questions, feel free to PM! C:

Atethecat
11-17-2015, 03:24 AM
Sorry my phone won't let me read spoiler tags and I've been using it ever since my Windows Surface broke.