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Damonique
11-22-2018, 10:08 PM
Rated M for swearing, drug&alcohol use/abuse, extreme violence and gore, sexual themes and content, etc etc.

The Manes

Name:Lucent Mane
Age:27
Appearance:A tall, imposing man, over six feet, with dusky olive-tan skin, high cheekbones, and deep sea-green eyes speaking to mixed European-Native American descent. Unlike his more martial sister, his body is toned but slim, built more like a runner and standing out among more muscular wolves. He wears his stark black hair is a short, close-cropped ponytail.

His manner of dress stands out as well, as he tries his best to look 'civilized' in well-fitted suits, dress pants, expensive vests and ties that would cost him a fortune to replace if he were forced to transform. But he rarely has to with his sister always nearby. In wolf-form, he's a skillful fighter in his own right, having learned from the best, but he just sees it as unnecessary when he has plenty of people to do his killing for him.

Personality:Lucent is a very peculiar Wolf, not only literate, but extremely well-read and educated. Instead of scorning humans as weak, stupid sheep like most of his kind, he's embraced their knowledge of business and economics and applied that to the pack structure, running the Manes more like an organized mafia or corporation than a petty street gang, which is the norm.

He's usually cold and distantly unemotional, self-assured and slow to anger. He sizes up his competition and applies logic and psychology, preferring the 'carrot or the stick' approach to outright violence when possible. He's also very good at finding out the true desires and fears of others and leveraging that.


Name:Khlia Mane
Age:27
Appearance:Shares the height and facial features of her brother, but is generally just bigger, with large, pronounced breasts and hips, thickly muscled forearms and chiseled abs, shown off by her style of dress, open biker jackets, tight tank-tops ripped off at the midriff, and denim shorts that barely qualify as such. She wears her own stark back hair in a long, intricate brain that nearly reaches the small of her back.

Unlike Lucent's nearly flawless features, Khlia's entire body is criss-crossed by off-white scars from injuries, a living record of her life of constant violence for both business and pleasure, definitely recent as most injuries vanish withing a few years thanks to werewolves considerably healing abilities.

Personality:Khlia is a Killer, plain and simple, and very good at what she does. Lucent can keep his schemes and bank accounts, her interests extend only as far as she can fight or fuck whoever happens to be in front of her.

On her time off, she can usually found at any of a dozen shitty dive bars, drinking heavily, playing pool and darts with her Fangs, the elite warriors in the Mane pack, many of whom are former enemies from the rival packs they've dominated.

More setting stuff incoming!

brokecollege
11-23-2018, 06:35 AM
full name: elisabeth marie vaughn.
age: twenty-five.
appearance: elisabeth is of medium height, her skin color being that of soft and smooth caramel. her hair is a dark brown, though in certain lighting it appears to be almost black. her hair is naturally wavy, and goes to just above her bum. she often keeps it in a ponytail (often a messy one) to keep it out of her way. her lips are full and pink, and almost always shouting orders. her eyes match the color of her hair, though when they are in light they appear to be much lighter. and her form, although slim, is very muscled. she has a handful of scars on her body, none of which she likes others to see.
personality: the first thing to be known about elisabeth is that she is kind. despite the criticism, and the opposition, and the years of extreme (and almost brutal) training, she has still managed to keep her kindness. but do not mistake her kindness for weakness, for elisabeth is one of the strongest people in her pack. when a decision has been made in her mind, there is no changing it. she will never waver for anyone. she is methodical, and logical, and the kind of person who has to always have a plan when doing something. elisabeth is very optomistic in life, always choosing to look on the brighter side of the situation. she is also passionate, and determined, and not trustful of anyone but herself.

Damonique
11-23-2018, 06:51 AM
Honestly, if your cool with it, we should just jump right into it. Stage can be set with Elisabeth and her alpha meeting the Manes at night in neutral territory, an old graveyard near the heart of the city.

Damonique
11-23-2018, 07:31 AM
IC is up, I'll leave your characters Alpha and the various members of her pack up to you.

brokecollege
11-23-2018, 07:48 AM
okie doke, i'll go ahead and reply right away!

Damonique
11-23-2018, 08:32 AM
Two, I'm going to have to give your alpha a name. Savic sound good for you? And you should come up with a name for you pack! We're kinda building the world around us as we go, and details are nice.

brokecollege
11-23-2018, 08:44 AM
yeah, sure! that sounds nice! and my pack's name will be the evertail pack.

Damonique
11-24-2018, 12:14 AM
I am so, so very pissed right now. I had a whole reply tapped up, a good long one, on my mobile because I started it on my lunch break...and when I went to post it....the site logged me out. And it turns out the mobile version doesn't do any auto-saving whatsoever. So it's fuckin' gone, poof. I'll re-transcribe it to the best of my ability in a bit...but right now I can't even.

Damonique
11-24-2018, 02:12 AM
Posted, that took a while and it didn't come out QUITE as good as the original, but I hit all the key points. Apologies if I'm taking too many liberties with the pact thing, everyone's werewolf head-canon is different, but it just popped into my head and seemed sufficiently dramatic. After licking the blood, they howl at the moon in unison, expressing their intentions to every Wolf in the city.

Now, my(ok, our, I rent the place out for my folks) tenants seem to be having a party across the street, and I'm sore as hell from work, so I'm going to drop by and knock back a few. If your free tonight, I'd love to come back with a bit of a buzz and get a few more posts in!

brokecollege
11-24-2018, 08:23 AM
omg i hate when that happens! it always takes me a good few hours to recover from losing my posts, so i understand your pain. and no need to worry, so far your ideas have been very impressive! feel free to implent as many as your ideas as you see fit! and i just got off work, so i'm free for the rest of the night! i'll get started on my reply right away.

Damonique
11-24-2018, 08:49 AM
Wonderful! I'm off for the rest of the weekend, and I've had my allotted requirement of social interaction, so we can keep it going for as long as you'd like.

I like to get a rapport going with my partners, if it isn't too prying to you. I'll answer whatever questions I ask first. So where do you work?

I do contracting, remodels, mostly. It's a good low-pressure job, because you can pick and choose the projects you take on and set your own deadlines/hours/fees based on difficulty, bills, and whatnot. I'm in western Kentucky and freezing my ass off. I'm not far from Lake Barkley/Ken-Lake, and this is actually my busy time of year. All of the cabins/beach rentals are on the off-season and trying to get renovations done in time for spring so they can advertise the places as 'newly renovated' and charge a couple hundred bucks extra when the tourists show up.

PS Kinda drunk so I'm gonna be pretty open for a while. Ask me anything.

brokecollege
11-24-2018, 09:06 AM
cool! i don't work tomorrow, so i can do this for as long as my sanity allows me to! but i do work sunday and monday (4-12), so my time will be limited then.

no worries, it's fun to get to know the person you're building a world with. well, i work part time at walmart as an electronic sales associate. FYI, don't ever work there. worst place in the world. anyway, i'm also a fulltime college student. i'm majoring in history and am planning to be a high school teacher.

your job seems pretty sweet! not too laid back, not too serious. and it seems like it would be very interesting with all the contracts and such. i'm in the california valley (about an hour from SF and oakland), AKA the worst place to live in california! its almost always on fire, very polluted, and always super hot, although in recent weeks it has been cooling down some. its also filled with a lot of crime, so that's fun.

hm.. let's see.. have you always lived in kentucky? and what's it like out there?

Damonique
11-24-2018, 10:19 AM
Posts up, sorry for the delay!

I actually majored in history myself back when I tried to do the college thing....life kinda hit me like a truck junior year, but I've mostly recovered how. Very interesting subject, and most of the people that go for it have a real passion for the subject. I never had more enlightening conversations that in the smoke-pit in front of Faculty Hall, where all history classes were located at MSU, my once-college.

Fires aside, California still sounds great. I've always wanted to go to the pacific, but the Atlantic is closer so I always end up on the east coast when I want to see the ocean. I've loved the waves ever since I was a kid, and one of my goals for next year is to head out and live like a hobo near the beach for at least a month on my savings.

My whole family moved around a lot. I'm originally from Michigan and spent a few years of middle school in Florida(the two could not be more different), before we settled here in Murray, KY. It's a college town, so it's skewed a lot closer to the younger crowd than a lot of Kentucky. It's home to me and I have roots here, so no matter where I go I'll probably end up back here. Life is laid-back and, more importantly, living is cheap.

brokecollege
11-24-2018, 10:44 AM
the pacific is very, very cold. and very busy, for some reason. ah, you're going to be a beach bum? well, there's a lot of them in california. the ones i've met so far have been really nice and interesting people--especially the ones who are in LA. don't think i'll ever find a more interesting group.

history is very interesting, indeed! i'm sorry that you weren't able to finish with your degree but glad that you were able to recover despite whatever had happened! i have always loved history, ever since i was a little girl. so i figured, why not make it into a career? might as well, right?

wow, you've moved around quite a bit! and throughout different states, too! i've moved around too, but i've stayed in the same couple of cities. i bet you have more than a fair share of stories to tell about your time in florida. if only living here was cheap! everywhere you go the apartments are at least 3,000 bucks. and gas is so expensive, it's awful.

and don't worry about the delay! for some reason this website stops working for me around 1am and doesn't start up again until 2? its weird but idk?

Damonique
11-25-2018, 09:52 AM
Posted, sorry it took so long, I was busy and then I went off on a tangent doing a little world-building, an tossing in a little insight into Lucent's long term goals.

EDIT:Removed shit that turned out to read weirder in hindsight than intended.

brokecollege
11-25-2018, 09:12 PM
haha alrighty! my response is posted! i go to work tonight (4-12) so i'll be home at about like.. prob 12:20ish? then i'll browse and respond until i pass out!

Damonique
11-26-2018, 08:38 AM
Posted, it should have went up like an hour ago when I wrote it, but my internet decided to fritz up on me. Seems fixed now, and I work later in the day tomorrow so I'll be up for a bit.

brokecollege
11-27-2018, 08:32 AM
whoop im back from work and i dont work tomorrow (er, today i guess? since its midnight?) so ill be up until i pass out

Damonique
11-27-2018, 09:00 AM
Great! I'll be up for a few more hours, at least!

Damonique
11-28-2018, 03:24 AM
Posted. Sorry for the hour-or-so delay between each reply, I can find myself agonizing way too long on a particular choice of words for whatever I'm describing, and even more deciding if there's anything I want to omit or change before I finally hit reply.

brokecollege
11-28-2018, 04:10 AM
don't worry about it! take your time and don't worry about me! whether or not you reply in 30 minutes or an hour and 30 min doesn't matter, i'm happy either way!

Damonique
11-28-2018, 08:21 AM
Replied, it's a long one. Shit got real. Hope your still up, I'm definitely looking forward to some answered on Lucent's behalf.

brokecollege
11-28-2018, 08:40 AM
haha i'm still up and working on the reply! although it might not get posted until around 2, bc this website is weird and stops loading at like 1?

Damonique
11-28-2018, 09:44 AM
Yeah, it happens on all of the vbulletin-format boards, caching data and whatnot. It's timed to try to avoid peak hours, but that doesn't really work for a site that's like 80% insomniacs.

brokecollege
11-28-2018, 09:54 AM
wow thats crazy! i thought this website just hated me lol

Damonique
11-28-2018, 12:39 PM
I've got one last past in me. I look forward to seeing your response tomorrow...later today, whichever.

Damonique
11-29-2018, 02:38 AM
Posts up, and I'm in for the night and ready to write some more. My family had a little ad-hoc gathering since my sister and her family are moving to Nashville for work and probably won't be with us for Christmas. It was fun.

brokecollege
11-29-2018, 03:23 AM
i posted my response! i'll be up pretty much all night again lol

Damonique
11-29-2018, 03:46 AM
Wonderful. Since I've got you here, I figured we could discuss the meta in between posts. I'm going for a sort of chapter-like feel in the RP, a few weeks passing between unwritten between interactions, like we've been doing, and alternating between Lucent and Khlia as my perspective character. I have a general outline of the 'plot', as it were, the highlights I want to hit, anyway, but things can change depending on what you do. If there's anything specific you want me to lead towards, just ask so I can slide into it organically.

brokecollege
11-29-2018, 04:32 AM
okie dokie, sounds like a plan!

Damonique
11-29-2018, 06:20 AM
Posts up! I do intend for the romance of the RP to be a 'slow burn', as it were, Elisabeth rejecting Lucent and him going to further and further lengths to win her over. I/my partners have made the mistake of rushing into the good part and missing out on a lot of the tension and nuance in the process in favor of writing an endless stream of smut.

Speaking of which, what's your comfort level when it comes to that? I know the forum has rules against 'explicit' content, but once a private RP breaks 10 pages, nobody cares since that's just to make sure kids don't end up reading word-porn just browsing about(trust me, I've written some heavy stuff with the moderators). We can do a fade-to-black if you like when it comes to that, but I find it to be a disservice to the characters who have earned some detail.

brokecollege
11-29-2018, 06:42 AM
yeah, i've made that mistake one too many times. it's always hard to write slow burns, but i'm determined not to repeat my past mistakes!

as for smut, i'm completely fine with it! i've always been super descriptive when it comes to that, so i hope you won't mind.

Damonique
11-29-2018, 09:02 AM
Would I mind? I welcome it.

Also, little quibble, but you keep describing Elisabeth as a 'young girl' . It kind gives me the wierds even though it shouldn't, but well, she's in her twenties. Just 'girl' is fine, and 'young woman' is fine, but when I hear 'young girl' I think like twelve-year-old, and it makes me uncomfortable since Lucent wants to fuck her and I step into his perspective to write. I literally couldn't come up with a more diplomatic way of saying something, so I just decided to get out with it.

Posts up, I don't know what'swith it. Just kept typing, there are a lot of words and some backstory there, but once I read it over I don't really feel like any of it was necessary or that I gave you much to work off of, but I couldn't stand to just get rid of it.

brokecollege
11-29-2018, 09:11 PM
whoops, my bad. i'll refrain from using young girl again!

and don't worry, your post is fine! my response will be up shortly (hopefully)!

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 12:28 AM
sorry for my absence! i had to go and get my tattoo finished today.

Damonique
12-01-2018, 01:59 AM
Oh, neat, what'd you get inked? I'm actually going to get a new one after I get paid for this latest job on the third, and get some of my old piercings redone. Perhaps not the wisest use of my money, but I've been looking too 'normal' lately.

Posts up....Lucent was doing so well, but he is a Mane, after-all. I love how just little things in your replies will completely change the trajectory of my responses because this could have gone very differently if Elisabeth had just thrown the wolf a bone, anything. Fun for us, though, if not so much for them.

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 02:19 AM
it is based off my favorite (and first ever played) videogame, bioshock. this is the original artwork: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/80/4b/9a/804b9aaa685e5aad0248326499d3fba3.jpg

its always so interesting--you have one thing in mind for a reply but it goes the complete opposite way once the other person has replied! always fun to see.

Damonique
12-01-2018, 02:40 AM
That's one quite literally sexy tattoo. I've got the Flamel Caldicus (https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/fma/images/9/93/370px-Flamel's_cross.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/180?cb=20110705160305) from Fullmetal Alchemist on my left arm, and I'm going to be getting the words 'Play With Fire', with the 'l' and 'I' as lit matches on the inside of my right arm.

I've also got a few brands. A chevron on my right shoulder, a stylized 'M' on my right forearm, a seahorse on the right side of my torso, and a stag's-head on my right ankle. Those are pretty neat because they just look like bad burns until somebody notices or you point out the pattern. Hurt like a bitch....but that isn't so much an issue as a bonus for me.

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 02:43 AM
damn, you have a lot! all of which are sound very interesting! i imagine those brands hurt worse than any tattoo, though they do look very interesting.

i have that mermaid on my left upper arm, a cat sitting on a crescent moon on my right wrist, and a sunflower in the shape of my zodiac (a Leo) on my right inner ankle.

Damonique
12-01-2018, 04:23 AM
I'm thinking of getting my zodiac(Pisces) done somewhere. The branding thing started with one crazy night when I was like 17 and casually mentioned the idea to a couple of my friends, who apparently thought that sounded AWESOME, looked up some tutorials and gave me one on a kitchen table with a necklace(the Stag's Head), a torch lighter, and 151 proof rum to sterilize.

After it healed up some, I thought it looked wicked and get one done now and again. I've even given smaller ones to other people who heard about mine and were intrigued. It's not that hard to do safely and doesn't take NEARLY as long as a tat to get done. Generally just twenty seconds with your heated implement of choice and then a week or two of aftercare and you're golden.

Also, posts up!

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 04:54 AM
wow, that's crazy! i do not think i would ever be able to do that, i'm a huge baby when it comes to pain. if my friends ever pushed me on to the kitchen table with the intent of giving me a brand, i'd probably flip the fuck out.

my post is up as well!

Damonique
12-01-2018, 05:32 AM
That was....not how Elisabeth probably should have played this. I was expecting her the carefully de-escalate but she just heaped on the scorn....you'd think she'd have learned from the last time that telling Lucent Mane what he can't do is unwise. Just like she's challenging him, your challenging me, because now I've gotta walk the fine line of keeping true to the tone without breaking my own rules.

I mean, a violent rape isn't really 'rushing the romance', I guess, but it would be pretty hard to get back to a believable romance from that. I mean, my comfort level is off the charts and I can definitely get into it if that's the way we're gonna play this....eh, I'll come up with something else.

Damonique
12-01-2018, 06:10 AM
Still working on it....but plot twist be coming.

And it's up. I just starting doing some in-depth thinking on how the whole 'instinctual mates' thing works. How does a werewolf know who their mate is? Surely it just comes to them. And for this world, with the whole patriarchal society thing, it's usually(almost exclusively) the female who finds their mate and can't resist him, and bam, their mated.

So males can cheat on the females but not vice versa. It has a bit of evolutionary value to it, even excluding any spiritual component, since given all the fighting they do, males die off more often so there's generally going to be more females than males.

But Lucent and Khlia are identical twins. Male-Female Identical twins are extraordinarily rare, and their kinda sharing a soul that's both and neither. Which explains why Lucent's fairly feminine(Which he overcompensates for) and Khlia's fairly masculine(Which she embraces) despite their separate genders. And this also explains why Elisabeth doesn't feel the same instinctual bond towards Lucent that he does towards her.

I don't know why exactly my mind decided to spend over an hour contemplating the gender expression and evolutionary peculiarities of fucking werewolves, but goddamn have I figured it out. None of this need be explained in-character of course, it just kinda is, they don't have to ruminate on it, it just works.

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 06:56 AM
life is full of unexpected surprises! sometimes what we think just doesn't happen. but don't do anything youre not comfortable with bc that would be uncool

also, my post is up.

Damonique
12-01-2018, 07:30 AM
Posted! By the way, I'd LOVE to see Elisabeth interact with Jude, who so-far has been an abstract.

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 07:49 AM
ahh he's soon to come to fruition. i've already figured out what he looks like, what he acts like, and i have a a few ideas as to how he is going to react to the whole situation. i just have to find the perfect point to insert him into the story.

Damonique
12-01-2018, 07:53 AM
Sounds interesting. A lot of the time, my issue in games is that I find all the onus on myself to come up with plot threads and what-not, my partners playing second-fiddle. You're really collaborating with me here, which is great!

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 08:04 AM
i always try to come up with plot points and details, if not even just a little. and jude isn't the only thing i have up my sleeve. i have a certain family member of elisabeth's eager to make their entrance into our thread... though they'll end up arriving much, much later. but they're already in development.

my post is up!

Damonique
12-01-2018, 09:53 AM
Well, I got caught by the damned forum downtime, but I'm still up for a least a few more rounds of posts. This'll be the next 'chapter', as it were, with Khlia as my perspective character for while, thankfully still oblivious to what's went on. I'll get back to Lucent in a bit.

There's a live concert at Terrapin Station(my local record store) tomorrow night, and I'll have some people back for a bonfire and much drinking afterwards that could stretch well into the morning, but I'll try to get some posting done in between hosting.

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 03:57 PM
no worries, i passed tf out after posting my last reply. tattoo sessions have always made me tired for some reason. i'll work on my reply now.

ooh sounds fun! dont worry about me too much, instead enjoy yourself!

Damonique
12-01-2018, 08:09 PM
Posted.

Alpha's Mate=Luna. I'll have to keep that in mind. Did you just come up with that, or is it just a regular thing? I like it.

And while Lucent is more challenging, I think Khlia is more fun to write. I once came up with plot-friendly reasons to have the male lead be somewhere else so I could spend six whole pages of one of me and Natora's RP's playing as her.

brokecollege
12-01-2018, 08:33 PM
whoops, i forgot to include that. i am a bit of a scatterbrain, as you're probably figuring out.

i'm kind of basing the hierarchy of wolf society off of a form they had on my previous website, as well as off of what we've already established. basically, the luna wolf is the alpha's bonded mate. she is basically how you stated mallory to be--a trophy wife. she tends to her mate, gives advice, and provides an heir, and all that good housewife stuff. while it isn't required for every alpha to have a luna, it is greatly encouraged. if you would like to change or add onto this, please feel free to!

khlia does seem more fun to act out, as she is more loose and unbound than her brother.

Damonique
12-02-2018, 09:44 AM
Good to know!

Parties over a bit earlier than expected, it quite literally rained on our parade. Show was pretty great. Sorta funk/soul vibe, and the keyboardist was actually a guy I knew from college. So I'm up for some posts if your still awake.

brokecollege
12-02-2018, 10:09 AM
oh, yikes that sucks. but that is cool that despite the shortness of it you still had fun!

i just posted my reply!

Damonique
12-02-2018, 12:08 PM
I'm dreadfully sorry, but you know that thing where you get a post going and then decide about halfway through you don't like it, an try to make it better, but can't seem to fix it, and then waste to much time trying, and then get stressed out by how long it's taken you to reply, which only makes things worse, so you scrap it, and then regret scrapping it because at least it would have been something?

Yeah, that was e for the last hour and a half. I think I need to sleep and hit it from a different angle tomorrow.

Damonique
12-02-2018, 01:31 PM
Finally posted. Still don't like it. I guess I was trying to home in on that 'kindness' emphasized in Elisabeth's profile or something, but Khlia and moral dilemmas don't really mix well.

brokecollege
12-02-2018, 08:09 PM
haha no worries, the post was great! i posted mine.

Damonique
12-02-2018, 08:34 PM
Yeah, with fresh eyes, and in light of your response, I like it more than I did last night. I pared it down some and think it flows better this way. Sometimes quantity subtracts from quality.

brokecollege
12-02-2018, 09:21 PM
it's like that saying: would you rather have a hundred pennies or four quarters?

Damonique
12-02-2018, 10:16 PM
Indeed. Posted, this one I like. I came up with features and personalities for the five elites Khlia brought with her to the first battle against the Whiteclaw, but I didn't end up spelling them all out immediately as not to ruin the pacing.

But I kept them in my head and came up with roles for each them to play further down the line. Alicia's extends well beyond just being another fighter, hence, this.

brokecollege
12-02-2018, 11:29 PM
ooh i'm excited to see her goals!
i posted my response, though it's a little lacking in depth b/c im currently decorating the house and doing chores.

Damonique
12-03-2018, 03:58 AM
Replied! I know I haven't been giving you a lot to work off of lately, but I've been busy with scenery stuff. Once this fight is over, Khlia and Elisabeth can get to talking properly an you'll have more to do.

Just bear with me and have fun with it!

brokecollege
12-03-2018, 08:56 PM
no worries! every post is fun!

Damonique
12-04-2018, 03:34 AM
Posted, sorry for the delay. I decided we needed frenemies.

brokecollege
12-04-2018, 04:44 AM
frenemies are always good to have

Damonique
12-04-2018, 05:33 AM
Except when they aren't!

Also posted.

brokecollege
12-04-2018, 06:16 AM
touche my friend, touche.
mine is posted.

Damonique
12-04-2018, 08:09 PM
Posts up, it's a long one but I had to set the stage for the next chapter. Which means we're back to Lucent for a bit!

brokecollege
12-05-2018, 05:49 AM
it'll be an interesting chapter!

post is up!

Damonique
12-05-2018, 07:49 AM
Posts up, took longer than intended because I got caught up with Khlia and had to get refocused on Lucent. Love having them in the same room together, so much fun to be had.

Damonique
12-05-2018, 10:49 AM
Posted a fucking book. I feel like I'm rushing some things but it all sorta came to me at once and the scene was just...interesting. Plot threads upon plot threads. Feel free to have Elisabeth talk to her dinner companions for a bit, figure out what they're all about!

Damonique
12-06-2018, 12:27 AM
Posted. Oh, did you think this little group of femme fatales would be all about girl power and solidarity? Nope, the nice ones didn't make the cut.

brokecollege
12-06-2018, 03:42 AM
what a shame, looks like she'll just have to stay with the boys

Damonique
12-08-2018, 05:41 AM
Posted, long-ass speech, took forever, nothing really happened. Sorry for that, but I decided I was pushing things too fast and decided to dial down my pace, since we're only a few in-game months in. Lucent will still follow up on his earlier promises, but it'll be different from my more sweeping original idea.

Everything I already had planned will still happen, just...later.

brokecollege
12-08-2018, 06:17 AM
okie dokie artichokie!
my reply is up!

Damonique
12-08-2018, 08:22 AM
Heh, sorry for the late response. I had the whole post tapped up like a half hour earlier, thought I posted it, and tabbed out to fight the civil war some more before tabbing back and finding my token expired and it didn't post. I'll be up for a while, weekend and all, and be more attentive.

brokecollege
12-08-2018, 08:39 AM
no worries! ill be up awhile too! and im all posted.

Damonique
12-08-2018, 11:00 AM
Alright, that's my last one. Sorry for not moving much forward, but I feel like to do the next part justice I need to be more awake. An as a surprise to nobody, the one that chose a name like 'Lash' for herself is creepy as fuck. And it's actually NOT Khlia's fault, she just gave it an outlet.

Damonique
12-10-2018, 12:56 PM
Got a post up, sorry it took so long. I've been sick the last couple days, and not 'kinda don't feel so good' but straight up alternating between sleeping in ten-hour stretches and wanting to die the rest of the time. It's mostly passed, I've still got a bit of a fever and a massive headache, but way better than I was feeling..

brokecollege
12-10-2018, 05:50 PM
oh no!! well, drink lots of water and try to eat as much as you can before taking any medicine. even if its just a handful of saltine crackers, that's better than nothing. and i hope you feel better!

Damonique
12-11-2018, 07:49 AM
Posted...and I'm pretty sure 80% of that novelette served no purpose and could have been abbreviated, but I had the choice of forging ahead to a stopping point or trying to force myself to figure out what to cut and what to keep, and decided it would be quicker to get the whole thing done with.

Damonique
12-12-2018, 07:25 AM
I feel like I fucked this up, turning it into a grand political drama that moves at a glacial pace. I have no idea what you think of things, so I'm asking, but after several hours staring at a constantly being blanked reply box and two full rereads of the thread, I've come to the realization that if I were you, I wouldn't really be enjoying it anymore. Somewhere between the end of the last Khlia chapter and the beginning of this one, I broke the pacing and the tone.

You just a delight to work with. Highly attentive, literate, and passionate, literally everything I could hope for, and Idon't want to sour that by dragging you through the slog of what has turned out to be essentially my own poorly-thought-out vanity project. If you don't have any strong objection, I'd love to treat this as a 'trial run' that helped us learn one anothers schedules, styles, and tastes, and apply that to brainstorming something else more equitable and better planned for our mutual enjoyment.

(You can't believe how hard it was for me to work up the nerve to actually post this. Please don't hate me.)

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 07:48 AM
no, no, why would i hate you! if this was a trial run, then it was a great trial run! i had a lot of fun with you, you're an extremely talented and surprisingly passionate writer! if you ever want to give it a go again with another storyline, just let me know! i'd be more than happy to write again with you!

Damonique
12-12-2018, 08:06 AM
...thank you, so much. I was pretty concerned over how that would go over, having, from one point of view, 'wasted' a couple weeks of your time for no real payoff.

I would like to know what you think of my assessment, that I complicated things too much too fast without leaving enough room for Lucent and Elisabeth to develop. I just....couldn't think forward to any situation they would get together that would'nt be either too contrived or just take too damn long to get to. Almost makes me wish I'd gone with my initial reaction back behind the Evertail packhouse, but I did what I did.

It's not about if I'd 'ever' want to give it a go again, I'd just like to hear a pitch. Whatever it is you've wanted to do for a while or just popped into your head recently, unless it falls under my (very few) hard passes, I'm game. I think letting you take the lead this time would be more than fair.

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 08:37 AM
na, if i thought my time was being wasted, i would have ended our thread years ago.
while things did get complicated, i don't think they got complicated to the point of preventing their relationship from developing.
also im sorry its finals week so im a little more ditzy than usual. by pitch you mean another storyline, right?

Damonique
12-12-2018, 08:53 AM
Good to know where your heads at right now, and that your weren't just humouring me because you'd already put time into it.

Yes, 'pitch' means 'please throw me a storyline you magnificent literary goddess'. But if the harrowing time that is finals week I remember requires too much of your attention, I'm more than willing to either wait, or just spend it going back and forth refining an idea before we really get into it. Your call.

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 09:06 AM
okie doke! well, i have no particular craving right now. so, do you want vampire, human, or gods/goddesses storyline?

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 09:39 AM
okie doke! well, i have no particular craving right now. so, do you want vampire, human, or gods/goddesses storyline?

Damonique
12-12-2018, 09:54 AM
Got caught by the downtime, of course.

Random number generator says humans, and I'm totally fine with that, a little bit of realism goes a long way!

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 02:33 PM
whoops, i passed out. here are the storylines:
C3: Muse A was the perfect student, the one everyone envied, the goody-two-shoes, the one people wanted to be. Perfect grades, busy parents, large house, wealthy family, spotless reputation, amazing wardrobe, everything they've ever wanted was theirs. Muse A's parents are always working, being large heads of their own business corporation. Everyone knows who Muse A's family is, but Muse A has never been a horrible person. Muse A was actually quite down to earth, despite what some people thought. Because of Muse A's parents being busy most of the time, they were raised by an aging nanny who taught them the importance of being humble and kind. Muse A became a kind-hearted and caring person, a personality that had people either envying them or loving them. What happens if one day Muse A comes across Muse B, a person whom they've never seen before? Tattooed, pierced, run-down and.. different than anyone they've ever seen before. Muse B's charm and mysterious aura seemed to draw Muse A in. But despite their interest, Muse A never actually speaks to Muse B. Until one day Muse B saves Muse A from an accident (i.e nearly getting run over, bullies, etc) and Muse A insists on repaying them. Muse B soon grows protective over Muse A, guarding them and protecting them from any signs of danger. Muse B is bitter and cruel to everyone around them--everyone except Muse A. Muse A became Muse B's kryptonite, their only weakness. Muse B became completely willing to Muse A. This creature sent from Hell to reek havoc fell for the innocent and unknowing angel.

C4: Muse A and Muse B absolutely hated each other, everyone on the planet knew it. They both would argue until their mouths hurt and stare each other down until their eyes would sting. They both didn't know why but they both just couldn't stand one another. Muse A's friend suggests to them that maybe they didn't hate Muse B at all, and they were just masking sexual feelings, but Muse A ignored it until one day in the middle of an argument, Muse B kisses them. Do they punch them? Do they kiss back? Do they take their friend's advice?

C5: Muse B is a wealthy CEO who runs their own fortune 500 company in a bustling city. Muse B is in their 20s-30s and has been married to their college sweetheart for 5-12 years, though the passion between them has long since fizzled out. Muse A is a 20-something, fresh out of college, possessing a business degree and needing to get their foot in the door of the business world. Muse A is lucky enough to be hired by Muse B's firm and becomes Muse B's personal assistant and or secretary. Muse A and Muse B exchange pleasantries from day to day, but don’t socialize much beyond the details of their business together. One evening, Muse A gets a call from Muse B asking for a favor. Muse B must attend a very important charity gala and their spouse had canceled last minute. Not wishing to attend the gala event alone, Muse B pleads with Muse A to attend with them. Muse A is flattered and agrees to attend the gala for the sake of not letting their boss down. Muse B is delighted and pampers Muse A in return, buying them an outfit to attend the gala in and even picking them up from their apartment in a luxurious limousine. When Muse A and Muse B arrive at the gala venue, Muse A is blown away by the elegance and beauty around them. Champagne is flowing freely and Muse B looks as attractive as ever in formal attire. Throughout the evening, Muse B reveals a playful, charming side to Muse A that they don’t get to see in the office. Muse B is flirtatious even, lightly touching the small of Muse A's back, sliding their arm around Muse A's shoulder, complimenting Muse A in front of business associates. Muse A knows that they shouldn’t read to heavily into Muse B’s flirtation, because Muse B is married and they work together, but it’s difficult not to get swept up. When the gala is over, Muse B insists that they retire to the hotel room they’ve reserved upstairs until they’ve sobered up some. Muse A agrees to stay and the pair takes the elevator up to a penthouse suite, the likes of which Muse A has only seen on luxury blogs and in travel magazines. Fueled by a mutual attraction and champagne, Muse B makes a bold move on Muse A, crossing professional and marital lines. Muse A feels guilty the next morning, knowing that Muse B is married, but the attraction between boss and employee can no longer be ignored. Over the course of the following weeks, Muse A and Muse B embark on a secret affair; sharing intimate moments between business meetings, going away on overnight “business trips” together, indulging in private shopping sprees with Muse B’s platinum card.

C6: Muse A is daddy’s little good girl. Studies extra hard, rarely leaves the house and goes to church every Sunday just like he wants. Her father, a cop, arrests Muse B for vandalism. The next day Muse A’s father is letting Muse B out of jail when she comes for a visit. Muse B instantly starts hitting on her and making sexual advances. She immediately gets turned on by this bad boy and starts falling for him. He shows her the wild side, with sex in the car and in the bathroom at parties. And she enjoys this, she enjoys going behind her father’s back and seeing this other side of the world.

C7: Muse A is your basic artsy girl - living in New York City, studying photography for college. She loves taking pictures of the city she lives in. That is until she photographs an exchange between Muse B, a gang leader, and another man. And that exchange turns deadly. Muse B only catches a glimpse of the person behind the camera before she’s gone. He’s determined to find the girl but Muse A is not willing to go. She stays in hiding until she’s kidnapped and forced to face the man who she witnessed shoot someone.

C8: Muse B is a shut in, has been since his parents died; tragically taken from him. the only person he associates with is his grandmother, who is said to live at his home during the summer months. it’s too cold for her during winter, and now it’s too hard for her at any time. She’s ill. She can feel it tugging at the back of her soul, telling her that its time. But her grandson, her precious grandson, will be alone then. That’s why she contacted Muse A. Someone she was referred to by a close friend. A live-in maid, someone that could be around Muse B. Muse B’s grandmother fears for the man her grandson will become if he remains locked up alone. She asked for someone warm, someone who could be trusted, someone sworn to secrecy. Muse A needs the job. She’s someone who grew up learning that people aren’t always what they appear to be on the outside, and when Muse B’s grandmother explained her grandson- she could only see the misunderstandings, understand the pain that someone must feel losing their parents and spending all that time alone. But getting close to Muse B might not be the safest person to get close too.

C9: Muse B is a hard ass cop who always sticks by the rules and works hard and his work is his life and all that blah blah, but then one day he makes a huge bust in an underground sex ring and carries Muse A out, and the media dub him as a superhero, and he feels strangely protective over this girl. So he goes and visits Muse A at the hospital, and she lights up as soon as she sees Muse B and just thanks him continuously, and he starts smiling a bit more, and she doesn’t really talk to anybody except for him because she doesn’t trust anybody except him. Cue her then having trouble sleeping at night - because of bad dreams and memories, so she calls him to help, and he does, he always does of course. And she calls him when her car breaks down in the middle of the night and she’s terrified, and he literally drops everything for her, and its so obvious they like each other, but he doesn’t know how to do relationships and she’s just a mess from everything that's happened to her ( and so much angsty fluffy goodness of them two being awkward and shy dorks at times but also staying up and telling their entire life stories to each other ).

C10: Muse A and Muse B have been in this "friends with benefits" business since they were sixteen because they both wanted to lose their virginity. But now, years later, Muse B has become something similar to a "man whore" who sleeps with anyone they can. When Muse A says they wants their little relationship to end because they want an actual, real relationship Muse B realizes that they don't want Muse A to leave because they like Muse A. Muse B still acts like a complete and utter dick to Muse A, but they begin to pay attention to Muse A a little bit more and begins talking to them outside of their "arrangement" all to manipulate Muse A into staying with them.

C11: Muse A's twin is dating Muse B. Here's the twist. Muse A tricked Muse B into thinking that Muse A was actually their twin and the two have a wonderful night of fun together. Come to find out the next morning that Muse B knew it was Muse A all along.

C12: Muse A is a naïve, sweet, romantic whimsical little thing with a whole lot of optimism and sunshine in their veins and Muse B is the complete opposite; a total player who has someone knew in their bed every weekend and hates responsibilities and just spends a lot of their time fucking around. Somehow these two have been friends for awhile, despite their differing personalities, and one day Muse A ends up having to move out of their apartment due to a fire or an infestation or something and Muse B is the one who offers to put up with them for the time being. It's all well and good except Muse A has terrible nightmares constantly and one night Muse B is sick and tired of it (and deep down concerned) so they get into bed with Muse A until they stop crying and shaking and fall asleep in Muse B's arms instead. Cue awkward muses sleeping in the same bed every night and it actually helping Muse A a lot with the nightmares, and lots of cuddling and feelings ensue. Muse B, being the player they are, are terrified of the idea of liking someone but Muse A is pretty much already head over heels for them.

C13: Muse B is dating Muse A's twin. The two have always gotten along rather well and have considered one another a friend. The thing is Muse A sort of likes Muse B. Well one night Muse B calls Muse A to pick them up and they're drunk and they keep telling Muse A that they're in love with them and that they've loved them for years and years. Muse A ignores everything which Muse B says, thinking that maybe Muse B has Muse A confused with their twin. But then.. then in Muse B's proclamation of love they say Muse A's name.

C14: Muse A and their family are in witness protection and they absolutely hate it and desperately want their old life back. Muse B is the strict, by the rule family bodyguard who has to keep Muse A in check. Out of all the family members Muse B follows Muse A the most because they are always doing things like trying to contact old friends or find old classmates on Facebook or slip a letter to an ex. Muse B just doesn't understand why Muse A is so difficult! Muse A hates that Muse B calls them "little girl" and they never, ever see eye to eye until one night during a heated argument their lips meet in a kiss. Muse B realizes he finally has a way to keep Muse A in line and maybe they like it too..

C15: Muse A and Muse B are both complete strangers at an art show. They stand next to each other at a certain collection and Muse B asks Muse A their opinion on a certain piece. Muse A completely blasts it saying they don't understand any of it and it looks like something a kid would do and Muse B just laughs and nods their head with them. But then later on Muse B is revealed as the artist and Muse A feels so bad that they blasted Muse B's work and Muse B just found it pretty amusing. The two then go out to coffee as Muse A's apology. Cue to Muse B dragging Muse A to art galleries and Muse A is so brutally honest saying they don't understand any of it so Muse B explains and.. wow.

C16: Muse B is a substitute teacher who likes giving out assignments and students hate them so much for that. And then one night, Muse A's big brother brought home a friend and, shit, it's Muse B who literally called Muse A out for not passing in their homework, and fuck, they are smirking like a total asshole.

C17: Muse B is the town player who's fucked practically everyone and they honestly don't have a care in the world all they want is sex and for people to swoon over them. And then there is Muse A, the innocent flower who's innocent as fuck and has never done anything bad and goes to class and does everything they're supposed to do and nothing unusual. The two get paired together for a class project and it's stressful because one of them's doing all the work while the other never shows up. Muse A blows up on Muse B in anger and rage and frustration and then Muse B starts to think, "wow, they're hot." So then Muse B begins to show up and starts helping out with the project and while they help out they begin to realize that there is more to the innocent little Muse A than they're letting on and Muse B makes it their mission to find out and while doing that they fall for this little baby cupcake Muse A, but Muse A wants nothing to do with Muse B who has literally fucked everyone in town. Cue to the angst because Muse B is so willing to give up their title to be with them and there's lots of sexual tension and begging and being sweet and kissing and touching.

C18: Muse B is a nice, shy, nerdy boy who no one knows exists. Despite this Muse B works up the nerve to ask out Muse A, the popular, outgoing, ray of sunshine in their high school. Even though Muse A is confused and doesn't think Muse B means it, they accept because they just can't bring themselves to reject the kind and sweet Muse B. The two go on one or two dates that turn out to be a complete and utter failure (conflicting schedules, brings Muse A to a restaurant they don't like/are allergic to, etc) but because Muse B is so sweet Muse A agrees to go on one final date. At the end of the date Muse B works up the courage to ask if they can kiss Muse A and they reluctantly say okay. When their lips meet Muse A is completely caught of guard by how passionate and addicting the kiss is. Next thing Muse A's clothes are on the floor and Muse B is fucking Muse A like they've never been fucked before, but they are so into it.
BONUS: Muse A lets Muse B stay the night and they wake Muse A up with breakfast and asks Muse A if they could do it again sometime.

C19: Muse B is a delinquent at their school, and a scary one at that. They've been suspended multiple times, maybe even kicked out of a previous school, and everyone avoids them due to past violent offenses and their reputation as someone who is not meant to be fucked with. Muse A is a clean-cut, popular, generally "good" student who never causes trouble and doesn't socialize with Muse B or their crowd. That is until one day Muse A walks up to Muse B and says they desperately need their help. See, Muse A has had a few admirers over the years, but recently they've developed a suspicion that someone is stalking them. They feel eyes on them all the time, they think someone is following them home, and they've been getting creepy notes and presents. Muse A is beginning to fear for their safety, and can't find any solid proof as to who their stalker is, much less any idea of how to make it stop. So, they have a brilliant plan that they propose to Muse B: if Muse B pretends to date Muse A it may scare their stalker into leaving them alone! Everyone knows Muse B isn't someone to mess with -- it'd be suicide to harass whoever they're dating. Muse B is, at first, incredulous at the request, but upon realizing just how terrified Muse A is and how truly desperate they are to protect themselves, relents, and agrees to date Muse A until they can take legal action against their stalker. Muse B begins to "dating" them in public, including walking them to and from school, but soon finds themselves growing genuinely fond of Muse A.. and genuinely protective. But Muse A's stalker isn't letting up. Will Muse B have to take matters into their own hands to protect Muse A? Or will Muse A be able to rescue themselves?

C20: Muse B just finished their sentence in jail and have lost contact with most of the people from their former life. On the day of their release the gate pulls back and reveals to them Muse A, their high school sweetheart whom they'd lost contact with years before.

C21: Muse A and Muse B hate each other. And by hate, I mean completely and utterly loathe one another. They turn on their heel and walk out of a room when they spot each other, they insult each other at every opportunity they get, and they'd rather sit on a spinning blade than spend time together doing anything but screaming at each other -- unless they're fucking. as much as they can't stand one another, they drive each other crazy, good crazy, in bed. Muse A comes out with bruises on their hips and hickeys on their thighs while Muse B has scratches trailing down their back and chest. They hate each other, but they love fucking, and their sex life is full of pulling and scratching and biting and shut the fuck up and say my fucking name and the second they're finished the other pushes them out the door. This behavior continues for awhile, both showing no signs of liking the other even a little bit until one day Muse B fucks up and says the "l" word in bed. Muse B leaves immediately and the two avoid each other for weeks until Muse A can't take it and goes to Muse B's apartment. They fight and fight and fight and fight until they're fucking again, and afterwards they fight more and Muse B is half naked and defensive and Muse A is throwing on their clothes while crying because somehow they ended up loving each other, and suddenly everyday when they fight the "I hate you's" sound like "I love you's" and the sex feels like making love and somehow they hate that even more because hate is all they know how to feel.

C22: Muse B is a farmhand from a small town. Muse B has never attended college or even tried to attend college because, well, they aren't book smart. Getting through high school was such an unbearable pain for them, and they figured if they went to college it would be even worse. So, instead, they stuck with what they knew: hands on work. They farm, they work on cars, they tinker with household items, they garden, they build things and destroy things. One day, Muse B is selling fruits and vegetables at their family owned stand on a hot, hot summer day and they meet Muse A. Muse A is the total opposite of Muse B. Muse A is all brains. They work at an esteemed cooperation (hospital, law firm, business), own a Benz, and are everything Muse B is not. However, that southern charm will swoon any person who’s had their heart broken one too many times by the same type of guy. Muse B is different, and Muse A loves that about Muse B.

C23: Muse A is a college student in desperate need for money. So, what do they do? They join their local "Sugar Daddy" app in hopes of scoring a few hundred bucks. Then they meet the charming, the handsome, and the flirtatious Muse B. Muse B willingly pays for everything that Muse A wants. A new laptop for school? It's theirs. Clothes? No problem. Their semester paid for? Of course! Muse A and Muse B end up sleeping together on multiple different occasions because A) Muse B had bought Muse A a laptop! and B) Muse B was actually, very, very attractive. But when Muse A comes home for winter break they are surprised to find out that their sugar daddy, Muse B, happens to be engaged to their mother!

C24: Muse B is a famous and renowned photographer. Everyone claims Muse B to be utterly perfect: they're kind, caring, and very professional. But that isn't the truth, not in the slightest. Muse B is a dangerous person. A person who loves to use every kind of drug under the sun, a person who doesn't mind manipulating models and bending them to their own will. They are the greatest player in the world, going through women like they are newspaper. Muse A is modelling on request of their parents for their business. Muse B is chosen to be Muse A's photographer. What will happen when Muse B decides that they've taken an interest in Muse A?

C25: OKAY, SO TWO PEOPLE ARE HOUSEMATES OR ROOMMATES OR WHATEVER!! THEY LIVE TOGETHER!! and Muse B is a goddamn, smug asshole. They're so cocky, and so confident, and they're kind of a damn nuisance, but they also have a lot of redeeming qualities. They're truly a chaotic neutral. But they also have a heart of gold truly they just don't show it a lot until Muse A comes along. Muse A is a shy little nobody. They work hard, puts their nose down, and studies through all of the chaos. Basically they were flower crowns and smiles at people just becauSE. And Muse B is immediately drawn to Muse A and their wholly good nature. So, what does Muse B do? What they always do. Flirt. And it's worth it to see Muse A get all flustered and unsure, because Muse A is a sweet nobody!! What is happening!! But God, Muse B is hot, and so confident that it makes Muse A get all hot under the collar (secretly). Cue to Muse A walking in on Muse B fuckin' some girl--and the worst part is Muse B doesn't even stop, they just smile and grin at Muse A as they get all flustered and apologize. Muse B just keeps showing off by walking around the house naked or moaning extra loud at night. They're baiting Muse A and Muse A??? Yeah.. they're losing the battle. Even though Muse A knows Muse B is a player.. but then maybe when they do finally get together Muse B is a total sweetheart and caring person like, 'are you sure?' 'is this okay?' sorta person and they're bOTH HEART EYES!!

C26: OK SO what about a plot where Muse A is a waitress or something and she's working a shift one night and like this group of super hot cops come in and she has to be their waitress and she's trying not to act weird but she can't help it and they notice it and are teasing her about it, but Muse B is doing it a lot more than the other two. And like maybe the diner requires her to wear skates?? And maybe she stumbles and ends up spilling something on Muse B's crotch and she's like "omigod, omigod, omigod" and he just thinks it's cute and funny and so he leaves her his number on a napkin and maybe she panics and doesn't text him because he's intimidating!! AND THEN MAYBE THAT NEXT NIGHT SHE LOST A BET OR SOMETHING AND HER FRIENDS MAKE HER GO SKINNY DIPPING IN THE LAKE EVEN THOUGH IT'S TRESPASSING AND THEN THE POLICE COME AND HER FRIENDS DITCH HER AND OH SHIT IT'S MUSE B AND SHE LIKE COMES OUT OF THE WATER TO SEE HIM STANDING ON THE DOCK AND HE'S LIKE, "why didn't you text me back?" AND!!

C27: A plot where Muse B is the leader/part of this really dangerous and famous gang and almost everyone knows who Muse B is, the horrible things they have done, how skilled they are at whatever weapon they like the most, how they have no mercy and will either kill you in matters of seconds or torture you until you're begging for death. They're cold, they're calculating, rumor has it they have a lack of heart and soul. But then, THEN, there's Muse A; pure, innocent, maybe shy and awkward (or not up to you??) personality is cute as fuck, a marshmallow that needs to be protected and, well, Muse B really wants to protect them in the moment their eyes land on Muse A even though they don't even know them because, "dude they look so fucking fragile someone is going to hurt them like wtf," and one day after days (or weeks) of Muse B admiring Muse A from afar they decide to approach them. Muse A is, of course, clueless about Muse B's identity but then eventually catches on and!!! angst ensues!!!

C28: Not to be dramatic or anything but I really want a sugar daddy/sugar baby plot where Muse B is a "happily" married CEO of a big company with a shit ton of money. Well Muse B goes out to a local bar to just chill and stuff when they suddenly meet Muse A!! Of course they hit it off and go into Muse B's car where they fuck all night long and in the morning Muse A discovers that he's married and she's like!!! oh shit!! no!! this cannot happen!!! forget this ever happened!!! (or maybe not?? up to you!!) But before she could leave Muse B grabs Muse A and offers her a proposition. If Muse A agrees to be Muse B's mistress then Muse B will give Muse A anything they want. Thus starts their sugar daddy/sugar baby relationship. It's all good until Muse B sees Muse A with another guy and completely loses it and get into a huge fight with Muse A that ends with them fucking Muse A against his car. and yeah gimmie this smut i need sneaky around and sexting while around his wife nd getting him riled up like yes pls thank u

Damonique
12-12-2018, 08:33 PM
I'm once again blown away by how much you've come up with, with so much variety! Depending on the prompt, I'm like a kid in a candy store of cuteness or an addict in an unlocked pharmacy of smut. The way you describe some of these, too, all thought-to-page is just...wow, talk about selling it. And even some of the ones you just loosely describe show a lot of promise...

C'mon, help me out here. I can't even narrow it down! Pick one you really want to do or I'll have to use the random number generator again!

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 08:51 PM
haha thank you!
mm use the random generator! i've no real craving, and plus it'd be interesting to see which one is randomly chosen!

Damonique
12-12-2018, 09:06 PM
And our answer is.......24!

I can work with that...you ever play Life Is Strange?

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 09:10 PM
yes, i have!
i cried halfway through it lol

Damonique
12-12-2018, 09:24 PM
Oh my god, finally, someone gets it. That game gave me such feels.

But you know towards the end, the first part of the dream sequence in the classroom, where all of the posters on the walls turned into photos and magazine covers of Max all BDSM'd up as Jefferson's 'muse', and you don't have any other dialogue options but to say you love him before you can leave? Yeah, this prompt made me think of that.

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 09:32 PM
whoa now that you said it, it does kind of remind me of that scene.

Damonique
12-12-2018, 09:45 PM
So, OOC, me or you? I'm trying to come up with a sufficiently foreboding title, since this ones gonna get dark, for sure.

brokecollege
12-12-2018, 09:52 PM
mm i'm not good at titles so you!

Damonique
12-12-2018, 10:53 PM
I settled on Developing Negatives (https://role-player.net/forum/showthread.php?t=92654&p=3014135#post3014135). My characters up, look forward to yours!