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Her cruelty is very entertaining. Adelaide's gotta buck up and learn to cope with it now that they'll be working/training together, but it's going to be one heck of a learning curve. Especially if interrupting fights with supernaturals to look at her notes becomes a habitand she keeps getting scolded/worse by Marienna for it
Haha she will certainly have to get used to some of it. Who knows, maybe Marienna will soften over time? Or not. We'll see!
I'm eager to see how they adapt to each other.
Adelaide is such a mess right now haha I can't wait until she sleeps on all this information and absorbs it properly. Poor girl.
I adjusted slightly to give your character time for sleep! I agree, some processing would be helpful. This way Addie can be rested before meeting the head honcho. Mari will cool down in time, I think. But there is a side character who is being nice to her, so she's not totally alone with a monster.
Oh hullo there! I was wondering about a timeskip to morning--I wanted maybe Adelaide to explore and stumble onto Mari somewhere. Where do you think she'd find her if she was up too early? If Mari would be sleeping I'll figure something else out, no worries!
Oh hello! A time skip is totally fine with me. Do what feels naturally. Mari is a morning person. You can either find her in the kitchen or training on the estate's grounds!
Perfect, thank you!
I tried to use my response to humanize Mari just a little bit. If you need me to add a bit more to more directly advance the plot, just say the word.