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It's hard sometimes to accurately depict a world to people, I think I have a better grasp of it now.
1 Late 1800's - within the Victorian era. Industrial revolution, age of steam - powered trains, ships, and factories. There's already been mention of skyships and balloons.
2 Typically, your upper class are landowners - we're talking royalty, important officials and nobles, and at the lower end, your wealthy families and business owners.
3 If I'm understanding your classes breakdown, it seems that Royalty and middle upper class important officials and nobles are living in these floating cities?
4 Royalty and nobles typically do not take care of themselves - they have servants - butlers, housekeepers, cooks, maids, drivers, and so forth. So there's some sort of lower middle class as well as worker class on board handling all the labor.
5 I would think the defining characteristic of people living in a sky city is that they're mages, people with definite talent - but one of your lower class scum profiles is that of a "wicked wizard conspiracists"?
6 And why under "Events" you have listed "Just a normal day of brainwashing the Ground classes into thinking that the floating cities don't exist and that education is a crime."
7 So why don't you want the grounded classes to know the floating cities exist, despite what must be a steady stream of airships bringing supplies up to them? And why is education a crime? To be able to supply the floating cities, you need people who know how to can and bottle food, make sure the right things go in, in the right proportions. To make, repair, and maintain the machines that make civilized life possible?
8 About the only thing I can see is that there was some sort of disease that affected people suddenly. That some of the survivors, royals and nobles (and some of their servants) were moved to remote places, perhaps the mountains and then later the floating cities to protect them.
9 A disease that was blamed on magic. Perhaps on a spell that changed people, transformed them?
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