Kill Field: War of Subjugation

**Cfavano** · 08-25-2018, 06:04 PM

So they're mules?

**Blazing Falcons** · 08-25-2018, 06:09 PM

Or ligers. Or tions. (They're a thing. Look it up.)

**Cfavano** · 08-25-2018, 09:43 PM

woo lets keep it going!

**scarabskid** · 08-26-2018, 09:18 AM

idk if my guy op let me know if he is ill fix it

name: Jacob Shane
race: human
armor look: his armor has small spikes on his shoulders and its red and black with a red handprint on the left eye and left part of his chest as well his right hand has small bumbs he use's like iron knuckels so he can beat his enemys to death
nickname: red death

bio: his nickname was given when he beat four enemies to death with his bare hands.
his main weapon his a blood-covered revolver he does not mind that its covered in blood he only cares that his enemy is dead.
his revolver used to be used by his best friend who was shot in the head by a sniper leaving him a hole in his forehead.
he used to be a more merciful but when his friend died he lost most of his mercy leaving him a man of anger and rage.

so this is my dude so let me know if you like him and if he's ok.
well have a nice day and remember to smile

**Cfavano** · 08-26-2018, 02:53 PM

A couple things.

1. There are quite a few spelling errors you need to fix
2. it is not in the proper format
3. The bio is pretty unbelievable (the odds of getting shot in the head y a sniper and living are astronomical, especially because the hole is still there.

fix those problems and come back to us.

**Blazing Falcons** · 08-27-2018, 05:46 AM

Got my characters added to the list, fixed some stuff with equipment lists regarding things that shouldn't be in there being there, and things that weren't in there that should've been in there.

**Cfavano** · 08-27-2018, 05:07 PM

Woo

**Cfavano** · 08-28-2018, 01:22 AM

Character Creation
Name: Lady Alice Pemberton of Neo-America
Species: Human
Sex: female
Age: 29
Appearance:

Bio: Alice Is the youngest daughter of a Noble family from Neo-America. As was custom, she joined the military at seventeen, enlisting as a private and doing a four year tour and going to college, and then to West Point. She graduated in the top nintieth percentile. She was all set to rejoin the regiment started by her ancestors when in the middle of the night she was taken by recruites from the Terran Truebloods.

Like all non-legacy members, she was jumped in. After getting the shit kicked out of her for five minutes, breaking three ribs and knocking out two of the members, she was welcomed as a Trueblood, and brought great honor to her family. She took part in several campaigns where she caught the eye of the current Lord Commander, Michael Rasputin. At his request, she became his aide-de-camp and by her choice chose to carry his standard into war, forgoing her own glory to further his. Outside of combat she operates similar to a secretary/maid in her duties.

Equipment:

Spoiler: Equipment