Posted!
I decided to leave it more open-ended by cutting out Zahra's arrival at the bus stop for the time being, in case you wanted to change anything from your previous post.
I posted as well. I just went ahead and copy and pasted. Pardon the lack of creativity on my part, but I really just don’t think I could add anything that would enhance the introduction the Jesse and the dynamic with his messed up family in a better way than I did last time.
That is great!
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