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    Default Avatar: Storms of the Past (OOC)

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    Fire. Air. Water. Earth.

    My mother told me legends of the Avatar, the icon of balance in our troubled world. But after the last Avatar died in the Water Tribe Civil War, other nations took it upon themselves to fill his place. The result was worldwide tension, national occupation, and struggles of power. It's been years since the Avatar died, but no one knows who the current Avatar is. Our world needs someone to unite us, and if the Avatar won't step up then someone must.

    That "someone" is me.



    This story occurs years before Avatar Aang, Roku, Kyoshi, and Kuruk. The current Avatar is an Earthbender. Consider the levels of technology just a level behind what they were in Avatar: The Last Airbender. Less mechanical engineering from the Fire Nation, but everything else is roughly the same.

    Spoiler: History 

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    Player Characters:

    Sachi Ashkii played by TheDoctor
    Xiaotong played by Mr.Cynic
    Shao Lang Xian played by Splat
    Kakaru Shinoda played by Price
    Oboro Kobayashi played by Zulera301
    Chen Xiang played by Kayser
    Maya played by Persona
    Mu played by Kouki

    Non Player Characters:

    Spoiler: General Shoh (Mr.Cynic) 

    Spoiler: Earth King Enryu 

    Spoiler: Jenso the Desert Dweller (Splat) 

    Spoiler: Master Pakka (Price) 
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    I have a question, first off what's the minimum age?

    and second off, may I have a character who's a firebender with a pole staff? As I have a photo in mind.

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    Spoiler: Name 


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    Can we feel sorry for the combustion man? Even if combustion man does need to be killed... he sure did have an awesome power. Everyone oh dear dear. They could've talked it out.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.Cynic View Post
    I have a question, first off what's the minimum age?

    and second off, may I have a character who's a firebender with a pole staff? As I have a photo in mind.

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    No minimum age at the moment, but be reasonable. Don't make me regret that.

    As for your concept and pic, I'm fine with it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheDoctor View Post
    No minimum age at the moment, but be reasonable. Don't make me regret that.

    As for your concept and pic, I'm fine with it!

    i was going to do 16, 17

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    Quote Originally Posted by SerahAura View Post
    Spoiler: Name 


    Spoiler: Age 


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    Spoiler: Element 

    Spoiler: Weapons 


    Spoiler: Skills 


    Spoiler: Companions 


    Spoiler: Personality 


    Spoiler: Bio 
    Sorry, your CS is not accepted at the moment. It needs lots of reformatting, and there are lots of grammar errors. I think you need to take much more time with this if you want to be in this RP.

    There are way too many weapons there, and your proficiencies are not as I specified. Moreover, it makes no sense that a Southern Water Tribe girl would find a sky bison (air temple animal), fire ferret (earth kingdom animal), and falcon (fire nation animal) in the Southern Water Tribe territories.

    Lastly, I'm okay with bios that aren't super specific, but this one is way too general and implausible.

    And ACTUALLY lastly, you did not read the rules or recommendations

    Thanks for your interest SerahAura, but I can't accept Stella Lunaris.
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    The pole staff was okay?

    As it's not a glider. He might have a complex about people calling it a glider.

    "It doesn't fly and I am not an air bender, it's a pole staff, one used to render you unconscious if you don't stop using the inaccurate term" <----lol joking dialogue, not meant as serious

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    Yes, as I stated earlier, I am fine with the character concept!

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheDoctor View Post
    Sorry, your CS is not accepted at the moment. It needs lots of reformatting, and there are lots of grammar errors. I think you need to take much more time with this if you want to be in this RP.

    There are way too many weapons there, and your proficiencies are not as I specified. Moreover, it makes no sense that a Southern Water Tribe girl would find a sky bison (air temple animal), fire ferret (earth kingdom animal), and falcon (fire nation animal) in the Southern Water Tribe territories.

    Lastly, I'm okay with bios that aren't super specific, but this one is way too general and implausible.

    And ACTUALLY lastly, you did not read the rules or recommendations

    Thanks for your interest SerahAura, but I can't accept Stella Lunaris.
    Darn it I forgot to add They could've talked it out and Combustion Man didn't have to die...! May I re-format and re-work this CS and try again?

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