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    ooh! are you getting a lot of words, or just a little?

    and, yes, i agree! it would throw off the whole plot we've set up.
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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    Well, I already have a sort of 'slash' done over my heart in black outlined with red from my gothy/emo/whatever they call 'dark' these days phase, so I figured I'd get a piece of suitably 'deep' psuedo-poetry to really make it pretentious.

    Also, finished my earlier partial reply. I hope your enjoying it as much as I am. There have been a few shifts in tone as I try to figure out Darien's....excentricities for myself. He's clearly a manic depressive, but there's other influences as well
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    Damonique and Natora, Joshua and Jessica, over a million words strong and the story goes on and on and on.....

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    ooh what a perfect way to complete your tat.

    and i do love it, very much so! its very interesting and i love our little plot. i went ahead and skipped ahead a few weeks to the thugs breaking in, as i figured the two had established their little semi-relationship/friendship? enough to do that!
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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    If your wondering why my post isn't up yet....it's because the site ate it, courtesy of my sketchy phone internet. Or at least, two thirds of it, and I'm trying to quickly summarize the rest from memory.


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    no worries, take your time. that has happened to me hundreds of times, and each time is more frustrating than the last.
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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    Alright, so I may have just more-or-less rewritten the whole thing. I'm especially proud of that first scene, writing people even crazier than I am is always an interesting head-space to be in.

    As to the other part...I was strongly considering having Darien be the one who HIRED the thugs to bust up the store in the first place, just to put Delphine under his thumb, but decided against it. He's paranoid and unstable, but not an straight-up villain....though once the initial shock wears off, he might decide that it was for the best that it happened.


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    that would have been an interesting twist to things, although that also would've meant he was indeed a villain.

    and you did amazing with it, as always. your work never fails to impress me.
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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    You have my humble thanks, in the form of a reply just for you.


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    how so very kind of you
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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    And there's another....now we can start in earnest. While it's difficult, since I am me, after all, I'm going to try to keep my replies shorter and more tightly focused on the in-story here and now from now on, only going into what Delphine would be both present and aware of where possible.

    Please do remind me when I seem to be forgetting that


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