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    I think the island will...but Zeke can help her by offering himself as a battering ram as she suffers through cravings

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    Pssh Zeke can do so much more than that lol/


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    Think Scott is done and ready for a look over. Pic changed, previous looked too prissy … lol. and no, Scott is not going to wander around

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    Gonna start that here too?


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    Gonna start that here too?
    Only if Father and Mother approve

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    Haw.


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    Interested and will probably be making a gentleman for this one

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    Dear Eleanor,

    I know that it has been a while since we spoke and I know that our last meeting has been, well, not one with a fantastic ending, mostly due to my own uncharacteristically abominable behavior. If I had been a younger man, I would have apologized and begged for us to continue our relationship however, I am not getting any younger and so, I do not want to cause you any more trouble. Instead, I wanted to recommend a student of mine that I believe may assist you with you efforts to cure the new disease affecting the panthera uncia population. Let me tell you of Charlie.


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    As you can see, I only write to recommend Charlie as an incredible asset for you in the Himalayas. I will be having a few beers with the boy later on this week and will casually mention your cause if you so desire, see if I can pique his interest. Truth be told, I think he could be the answer you were looking for. Look him up in social media and speak to a few of his clients (I included a reference list for your convenience). Otherwise, I hope you are well and send you my best though I cannot guarantee you care for it.

    Take care,

    Dr. Elliott Swartz
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    YUS

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    Okay, it's review time again!

    First lets go with the positives!

    @Bluemoon: TJ is in! Seeing her grow and change in the story is going to be quite the enjoyable read, along with her struggles in the beginning!

    @Kris: I can see what you mean about being unsure of your character. I do enjoy her read and her future ability to read and learn people's weaknesses is going to make future fights rather fun. I'm going to say yes, as I know your skills and should make for a great read.

    @Siks: The Lorax.. I mean Zeke is in. It's going to be fun to see how he will act when forced around others.

    Now to the others waiting.

    @Storm: You and I have talked about what needs to be fixed. One thing I will add is his weakness of Quick decisions. I don't see how that could be counted as a weakness.

    @Breggo: I like Charles so far, especially the name. I look forward to reading him once he's complete, but so far looks promising.

    @Leanna: Got a bit more to go on, but not enough to give a critical view over.

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