Welcome aboard DNA.
Alright I can get rolling on the IC still so will tackle that today sometime.
Welcome aboard DNA.
Alright I can get rolling on the IC still so will tackle that today sometime.
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Got a post up. Sorry it took me a while, I was a bit busy.
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No worries Rise.
Also Salty horses aren't a thing in this RP. At least not as mounts, there are horse people in this world so it doesn't quite make sense for them to be on the Isle of Stone, besides as a Goat man you hardly need to ride a horse.
Last edited by SikstaSlathalin; 07-09-2020 at 09:50 PM.
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That's fair. So they just never evolved, or were never domesticated?
Normal horses exist on the mainland, but not on the Isle of Stone since like I said there are horse people here. It'd be like Humans riding Neanderthals around. So no one uses mounts of any kind since the Valrans are all animals themselves so they logically have enough speed, endurance, and strength themselves without adding to it.
Also you metagamed Ulla in your post. I have plans for her opening which I'll toss up today.
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God dang it. I'll fix that too. You said "envoy" so I assumed the group was together.
That can still work and I'm planning to make my intro a response to it just not good to jump the gun for someone else's char. The Envoy will be NPCs that'll show up once everyone posts as the "Call to Action phase"
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Siks, can you check what I have so far and tell me if I need to change anything? I hope I am going in the right direction. Thank you in advance. I finished Jeimatseu and if anything needs to be changed please let me know...
Last edited by RisingPhoenix; 07-11-2020 at 02:38 AM.
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Rise: Interesting approach, a bird man in the frozen north But a few things.
1: I never expected anyone to play a Birdperson, but I know you play a good character so I'll let him..."fly" heuh heuh. But in this world Jeimatseu would fall under this group
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2: Future Sight powers are a no as are magical lie detecting ones. Stuff like that can just be learned by years in politics which judging by your background can easily be changed to just intuition and learned knowledge.
3: He is too young to have healed Javur since he's only 9 years older than Ulla, Javur's Grandaughter lol. So he either needs to be older or be an apprentice to the old Court Healer/Advisor and being sent up North in the old one's stead. Which could be a fun addition to his backstory which leads into my next point.
4: He needs more backstory, I know I didn't give much on the world to run on, but like I do in...like every RP I join of yours run off with an idea of your own for backworld lol. The tidbit I gave you above about the Cloudbloods should help some.
5: He also needs a proper Other section.
6: And that magic eye thing is a bit too OP. I'm ok with the power boost as long as it's tempered, but the whole summoned at will and magical suit of armor thing is a bit much.
Last edited by SikstaSlathalin; 07-17-2020 at 07:08 PM.
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