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    Quote Originally Posted by SikstaSlathalin View Post
    Rise: Interesting approach, a bird man in the frozen north But a few things.


    1: I never expected anyone to play a Birdperson, but I know you play a good character so I'll let him..."fly" heuh heuh. But in this world Jeimatseu would fall under this group

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    2: Future Sight powers are a no as are magical lie detecting ones. Stuff like that can just be learned by years in politics which judging by your background can easily be changed to just intuition and learned knowledge.

    3: He is too young to have healed Javur since he's only 9 years older than Ulla, Javur's Grandaughter lol. So he either needs to be older or be an apprentice to the old Court Healer/Advisor and being sent up North in the old one's stead. Which could be a fun addition to his backstory which leads into my next point.

    4: He needs more backstory, I know I didn't give much on the world to run on, but like I do in...like every RP I join of yours run off with an idea of your own for backworld lol. The tidbit I gave you above about the Cloudbloods should help some.

    5: He also needs a proper Other section.

    6: And that magic eye thing is a bit too OP. I'm ok with the power boost as long as it's tempered, but the whole summoned at will and magical suit of armor thing is a bit much.
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