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    Okay! Sounds like a good idea to me

    I'll write out them just watching the estate and then just not getting involved when she goes into the estate to, presumably, kill them.
    It's less work for them, but they would need to see who did that to see if it was just another competitor

    Once Aksel recognises her, he could pay a visit tomorrow at her shop upon request from his parent to see if he could find anything out

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    Sounds like a plan, and when writing with me, always feel free to make IC plot twists, also anything I put out IC, you could learn of through your connections. I find unexpected twists make the story interesting to write.

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    Of course! Noted

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    I took liberty of writing that Lykee had alerted to Melanie approaching the area on the way back to her car.

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    Going to get Melanie's next up tonight (at work now), was there anything special about the little dog barking outside?

    Currently looking at not letting Melanie get off scott free with her shooting thing. Still thinking about Detective Nichols visiting since Aksel was not the only one that saw the two thugs leaving her shop, then overnight the estate is taken out.

    Also looking at her former employer frowning that an entire ground was taken out.

    If there is something about the barking dog, should Mel take notice of this too?
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    No, there's nothing special about the dog.
    Your character is free to take notice of it as well, but it's not meant to mean anything.
    Aksel just usually is sensitive to noise and smell,, but it's hypersensitivity right now due to not being medicated.

    Damn, Mel is in little bit of trouble, lmao

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    One other thought, have you thought of a name for our fair city? If mentioned already, had not reread to see if a city was mentioned.

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    To be honest, I didn't even try to think of a name
    That whole thing slipped my mind
    I'll try to actually think of something
    The most simple name will do, right?

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    Any name you come up with is fine

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    You'll have to excuse me, I'm not the best with coming up with names, lmao

    'Ledgelonther' doesn't sound bad tho? It sounds like a name

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