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Thread: Star Wars: Bureaucrats [Hannelorian x Kach] OOC

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    I love the background by the way.
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    Oh? I'm glad to hear that!
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    My head cannon is that the guy that Kuna syko met with is one of the shape shifters.
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    I like that because it really speaks to the idea that this movement is truly everywhere. The Empire faces danger from every possible angle, some more extreme than others. How deep does the conspiracy go? Is it one united Gurlanin effort, or are there multiple things happening?
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    I have left my reply there incase you want to dialogue on the way back. If not, let me know and I will add.
    They base will be nearly empty. Just as they 'bad guys' planned.

    Now that, is the right question. I am thinking only planetary in scope. They just want their world back. I would think their is a general agreement among the Gurlanin that they can't win a straight up fight and need to resort to gorilla tactics. Manipulating the unhappy human population is a convenient tool to have access to as a force multiplier. With that being said, there is likely no formal structure. I have so far only considered this one pair's actions.

    I hope you find the background tid-bit interesting.

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    Awesome word picture, I will hang it on my wall!

    I love the duality of her feelings and how they will come across to Corwin.

    Again, thanks for making an awesome story with me.
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    Kach! That was brilliantly done! I loved the back story on Corwin there, it fits so perfectly. Also the bit about her looking like a corpse. That was just well executed.

    I can certainly add a bit of dialogue for their ride back to a largely empty compound.

    And thank you! It's been a joy to write with you!
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    Sorry in advance. It was a necessary evil.

    His drives are conspicuously missing. We will need to recover them to fix him up.
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    Added an edit to add a scene.
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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOO

    Not KV!
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    I'm kind of gutted at how Marienna writes off Corwin there at the start. I am thinking I may make you edit. I want to interject something into your scene. I hope that is alright.

    I feel bad! Marienna is crying!
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