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    Reply is up, but Adahlina's not meeting Hart quite yet...gotta build up the suspense and ambiance a bit first, and give her a few tests and trials before he shows himself.

    I'd love if as she walked down the trail, she remembered more of Adelina and their conversations, what she knows(or thinks she knows) of Hart. I drink that backstory stuff up and work it in later.


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    i can do that for you, no problem!! was going to write more about adelina in the first reply but i was like "hmm maybe this is overkill" and forced myself to stop lol
    but i'm home from work now (which tmi but i totally dropped a frickin skateboard on a toe that has been suffering an ~ailment~ and man i didn't know skateboards could pack a punch jeez) so i'll get started on the reply!
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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    okie dokes reply is up, if anything needs to be changed lmk. in the meantime, i'll be doing hw.
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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    Two things.

    One, there is no such thing as overkill. When you get to the point where your think you should make yourself stop is usually precisely when your best work is coming out.

    And two, there is no such thing as TMI. Hell, I reintroduced myself by tossing my life's little melodrama right your way, so you're welcome to do the same. And I'm well aware skateboards have some weight to them and deceptively curved edges. Hope your foot's alright!


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    Reply is up, going to have to ask a little more of you solo to get this ball rolling. Love everything so far!

    It was always going to start with a case of mistaken identity, of course of course.


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    haha my toe looks atrocious but that finally forces me to do something about it which i guess is good, but i have a sort of.. distrust with doctors?? long story. but anyway, thank you!!
    and my reply is up! as always, lmk if anything needs to be changed or adjusted!
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    Reply is Up. I achieved what little I tried to accomplish, an impressive graphical set-piece, establishing that Hart thinks in black and white and has zero chill, and some hooks derived from your sheet and backstory bits for when/if they branch into the Fae side of things.

    Also, the fact that both of her other sisters are also Priestesses could be very relevant later.


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    i posted my reply!
    and i agree, especially depending on who they are priestesses to!
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    Apologies for the delay! I AM working on it and have some not-quite-polished paragraphs, but it's one of those 'finding the right words in the right order' things...and with everything else going on that's not going as quickly as either of us would like.


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    no worries at all!!
    take your time, don't feel stressed to respond! i hope you and your family are doing better!!
    "and like all lovers and sad people, i am a poet."

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