(M) The Reclamation of the North OOC

[RisingPhoenix]

Rise: Interesting approach, a bird man in the frozen north But a few things.


1: I never expected anyone to play a Birdperson, but I know you play a good character so I'll let him..."fly" heuh heuh. But in this world Jeimatseu would fall under this group

Spoiler: Avian 

The oddity among the Beastfolk. They combine aspect of both the Mammalians and and Reptilians, most notably their blood and body temperature. While able to self regulate like the mammals it takes longer and requires a little bit of sunbathing to kickstart. As such they have been dubbed the Cloud-Blooded branch of the Beastfolk race. They are the birds of the sky of every species from the proud and magically inclined Varomaors to the noisy and excitable Harpies. They all appear to be upright walking humanoid versions of the animals.They live in a matriarchal society where the women set the pace and laws and could have many males in her Rookery raising the chicks and defending the cities. Avians' specialty lies in being expert Hunters and surprisingly good Councillors. And while they are graceful and agile in the air once they are grounds they find themselves at a disadvantage in combat versus larger foes.

Other Names: Wilderbeaks, Birdmen, Cloudbloods.

Government: Matriarchal Republic, the eldest and most accomplished females sit in the house of the four winds to decide the laws of the Avians as a whole, but males are not excluded from seats of power. Many just prefer keeping their families going or going off to fight and train.

Usual Roles/Jobs: Hunters and Ambassadors.

Homeland: While smaller isolated villages and towns can be found on or around any tall peak most Cloudbloods live in the White Peak Mountains in the far north of Eisignol.

Usual Personalities: Flighty and energetic.

2: Future Sight powers are a no as are magical lie detecting ones. Stuff like that can just be learned by years in politics which judging by your background can easily be changed to just intuition and learned knowledge.

3: He is too young to have healed Javur since he's only 9 years older than Ulla, Javur's Grandaughter lol. So he either needs to be older or be an apprentice to the old Court Healer/Advisor and being sent up North in the old one's stead. Which could be a fun addition to his backstory which leads into my next point.

4: He needs more backstory, I know I didn't give much on the world to run on, but like I do in...like every RP I join of yours run off with an idea of your own for backworld lol. The tidbit I gave you above about the Cloudbloods should help some.

5: He also needs a proper Other section.

6: And that magic eye thing is a bit too OP. I'm ok with the power boost as long as it's tempered, but the whole summoned at will and magical suit of armor thing is a bit much.

Okay let me give you my schedule so that you know when I may be available. I work Monday - Friday from 8 am until 5 pm. From that time I do GrubHub from about 6:30 - 8 and then I come home and relax. I can fix him possibly tomorrow or Wednesday if that is okay with you.

[Breggo13]

To join or not to join....

[SikstaSlathalin]

Whatever works for you Rise.

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