THE RPA COMMENTARY AND ANALYSIS

[SikstaSlathalin]

Interesting.

[Kicks]

Kris speaks the truth

I don't give points for extra text. In fact, some long writings have bore me not once. What I do suggest is trying to bring your reader into a living moving point of view, of how you want them to see the battle from your eyes. Don't miss a detail, but don't try to go for more artistic writings just because it sounds better.

[Kris]

AWWWWWWW LOOK AT THAT AMAZING REPORT!!!

GO IMP AND KIKI!!!!!

I really can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!

[Kris]

Also

[SikstaSlathalin]

Too bad Kris isn't judging my and Vai's fight. Might have a chance then.

[Kiki]

[Vaidia]

It's just how my writing style is. Flowery and long winded, haha.

[~N~]

It's just how my writing style is. Flowery and long winded, haha.

Pay no attention, darling. Your loquacious eloquence is (and has been) appreciated by those among us in the audience who do not mind being offered a few more lines in which to indulge ourselves. *elitist nod of approval*

[Griff]

Pay no attention, darling. Your loquacious eloquence is (and has been) appreciated by those among us in the audience who do not mind being offered a few more lines in which to indulge ourselves. *elitist nod of approval*

Loquacious? Eloquence? *puts head down in shame*

[~N~]

Loquacious? Eloquence? *puts head down in shame*

Don't feel bad; you're only mortal. Divine silk ensconced with elegant power and majesty issues forth from these ageless lips and fingers. There's simply no way you could ever compare.

Yet, you may humbly listen to my angelic music with stilled reverence and worshipful ears and eyes.